My first Naksh ff#Zindagi do pal ki # part14/44pg - Page 17

very nicee part nidhi
luvd how nk explained to ak about living life...
rr also met nk ...nk protecting ak while dancing...
mohit also come the cupid in naksh love story...nd without cupid love story is incomplete 😉
waiting for next part eagrly
update soon

Originally posted by: deepshikan

very nicee part nidhi
luvd how nk explained to ak about living life...
rr also met nk ...nk protecting ak while dancing...
mohit also come the cupid in naksh love story...nd without cupid love story is incomplete 😉
waiting for next part eagrly
update soon

Thanku soo much vishu . yeah cupid is imp na . I'll update soon

Part 6
Nk spill his drink out and mo was... 😲
Mo: kya hua bhai
Nk: mohit tu.. tu pagal hai . Ak sirf meri dost.. nhi meri neighbor hai bs
Mo: ohh to abhi bs neighbor hi hai
Nk: abhi mtlb kya neighbor hi hai aur wahi rhegi . tu na apna dimag...
Rr: mohit nk tum logon ne ak ko dekha kya kahin
Nk worriedly get up
Nk: dekha mtlb ... Woh toh tumhare saath thi na , tum dono dance kr rhe the abhi
Rr: han kr rhe the phir thori der bd maine dekha toh ak wahan nhi thi toh I thought yahin kahin hogi abhi aa jyegi pr...
Nk: pr kya rr ...
Rr: woh aayi nhi abhi tk
Mo: toh ak gyi kahan , nk tu uska phone try kr
Nk: han ... He calls her ... Busy aa rha hai
He again and again tried but still busy
Nk : Mai usse dhundne jaa rha hun
Rr: mai bhi chlta hun
Nk: nhi, tum yahin ruko agar ak yahan ayi toh mujhe inform krna
Nk goes and was finding ak here and there
Nk: kahin washroom mai... But ladies hai mai kaise
Nk: jna toh pdega hi ab ak ko dhundna hai toh .. May be woh yahin ho
Nk entered washroom all ladies were staring him like he calls ak ak but no response he comes out . he was checking for ak here and there
Nk: bahar shayad ek br dekh leta hun .
Nk went out of disc and ... Saw a girl walking and talking over phone he take a sight of relief nk was about to call her name but a man came to nk and ask him address meanwhile ak take a turn and disappeared from his eyes. Road was dark he was going behind where ak went but nk didn't get her . Nk heard some noise
Nk: yeh ..awaz ak
Nk followed noice and saw some goons teasing ak
Nk: Aksharaa
Nk give a punch to one man and other man leave ak hand both ran away seeing anger in nk eyes .
Ak hugged nk tightly and tears rolls down her cheeks nk too hold her tightly. That hug conveyed all both ak fear and nk assurance. Nk was creasing her hair .
Nk phone rings and they came to present world nk inform mo to come out but didn't tell anything about what happened.
Nk: chale... While walking tum yahan kaise ayi kyun ayi
Ak: meri cousin ka phone aya tha aur awaz nhi aa rhi thi toh ... Chlte chlte
Nk: thora toh dhyaan rkhna chahiye tha na tumhe
Nxt day
Ak: in front of wardrobe selecting clothes she saw nk white shirt and she holds it near her chest dig her face in it and was smiling closing eyes . she was feeling nk close to her visualizing that hug ...
Mishti make her came back to her sences
Mo came to meet nk and g3 . g3 treats mo like nk as nk and mo are childhood friends
G3: munna tu mo k saath baatein kr mai chai lati hun
Mo: Aunty pkore bhi pls aapke haath k pkode waah ... Kya kehne
Nk: han bhukad aur bhi bol ajj tujhe koi mana nhi krega
G3 : munna tu bhi naa ... Khane de uska jo mann hai
Mo: sun le munnaa...
Nk: mai munna toh tu tunna
Mo : waise ak saamne wale ghr mai rehti hai... .usse bhi munna k bare mai pta hoga naa
Nk: toh??
Mo: toh kya teri izzat ka kachra ho gya mere bhai ... Woh nhi ptne wali tujhse
Nk: ak pate ya na pr tu zrur pitega mujhse
Both starting running nk behind mo ak comes and nk bumped in ak ak hand on nk shoulder and nk holding her waist there was no space between them for air too faces were just hardly inches away both breath touching each others ...
Mo: coughing seeing them.
Both leave each other ak lower her eyes and quickly goes to g3, nk with a sweet shy smile on face caressing his hair .
Mo : saw reactions of both .
Ak saw nk playing with mishti and ysh. Dev called ak and then ak realize it was her dream. Nk standing in balcony saw ak drying her hair in her balcony sudden noise in road break his dream nk gave his killer smile on realization of his dream . world seems a different place for ak she began to like all colors she is seeing a happy world around her . she was loving this different world around her but was unable to realize change in her mood in her life.she is happy now but why??
So here is next part hoping you all will like this . leave comments pls, thnx for reading.

nice part nidhi..saree scene was so funny ..akshara wore naitik's clothes and he adore her was nice scene. ... naksh talk was so sweet.. naitik ka akshi ko life ke bare me batana and use samjhana is really nice scene ... in disco naitik protects akshara that superb scene.. naitik mohit scene was good .. mohit ka bhabhi bolna and naitik ka reaction hilarious. .. now waiting for next part wrote soon

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

nice part nidhi..saree scene was so funny ..akshara wore naitik's clothes and he adore her was nice scene. ... naksh talk was so sweet.. naitik ka akshi ko life ke bare me batana and use samjhana is really nice scene ... in disco naitik protects akshara that superb scene.. naitik mohit scene was good .. mohit ka bhabhi bolna and naitik ka reaction hilarious. .. now waiting for next part wrote soon

Thnku pragu thnku so much. I was waiting. I'm happy you liked it . I'll update soon

nice part nidhi... naitik ka akshara ke liye pareshan hona then he saves her is nice 😊 naitik mohit scene is nice.. naitik ka mohit ko tunna bolna is so funny 😆akshara ka naitik ka dream dekhna superb... now akshi naitik ke khyalo me kho gayi hai 😆waiting for next part eagerly wrote soon... and where are you these days missing you so much

Aww so nice part nidhi..loved mohit nd nk convo ...mohit told ak bhabhi..he is so sweet.. 😊 ...loved nk panicked for ak nd saves to her from gunde..
Now nk is feeling so touched from ak..same with ak.. 😃
Nd hug was too cute.. ..than morning scene nk mohit fight nd mohit ka nk ko tease karna that ak tujhse nhi pategi ..par tu pitega..
Thhan again tucchy tucchy was..
aww than both lost in each..sach a sweet love growing between them...
So enjoyable part..now badly waiting for next part..do update next part soon i m waiting. .. 😳 ..
Wer r u madem..

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Nidhi wer r u ??

Kahin nhi I'm missing bdi vli didi badly bs

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

nice part nidhi... naitik ka akshara ke liye pareshan hona then he saves her is nice 😊 naitik mohit scene is nice.. naitik ka mohit ko tunna bolna is so funny 😆akshara ka naitik ka dream dekhna superb... now akshi naitik ke khyalo me kho gayi hai 😆waiting for next part eagerly wrote soon...and where are you these days missing you so much

Thnku so so so much pragu, munna tunna name show k starting mai hi diya tha nk ne mujhe boht accha lga tha scene tab to I put it here. I'll update asap. I will be active now . feels good you all care about me

very nice update nidhi
mohit nd nk convo was nice
nk panicked for ak nd saves her from goons...naksh hug awww...morning me ak ki day dreaming...mohit nd nk cute fight was so funny tunna munna best buddies...both naksh imagine each other hmmm slowly slowly both are falling for each other...
waiting for next part eagrrly
update soonn