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next part is on page 17
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
it was a good update...
ak is doing out of her reality
Very pure hearted
but at same time
paagal same as u... no brain :P
finally varsha showed some positive respones nd nk strted falling for ak...
ak is making pendant ek taraf nd doosri taraf uski shaadithair hogayi...
Finaslly shaurya came to know abut varsha...
Hope at last everything gets well soon :)
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Originally posted by: _nakshi_

it was a good update...

ak is doing out of her reality
Very pure hearted
but at same time
paagal same as u... no brain :P
finally varsha showed some positive respones nd nk strted falling for ak...
ak is making pendant ek taraf nd doosri taraf uski shaadithair hogayi...
Finaslly shaurya came to know abut varsha...
Hope at last everything gets well soon :)


wawww u liked it... . m so so hpy.. thanku so much for ur lovly comments.. 😛 loved it totally... yuhuu.
haa she is cute like u 👏 ⭐️ princyu ab pagalpanti is needed n 😃 haa varsha is cute aage aur pata chalegi about both..
nk bhi kya karega u know na 😊. sab hoga i will try my best 😉 i will do update next part soon.. 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
part-10
shorya was shocked so much.. he took step..
sh-v.. he had tears in his eyes.. . he sat in his kness near of varsha.. tum toh gyab yeh sab kya ho gya.. ak.. main. varsha.. he touched to varsha nd she took a deep breath... she starts breathing heavily..
sh-kya hua varsha.. he heard some voice. . koi aa raha.. main.. he went outside. ... sees to ak nd nk.. ak yeh kiske sath hai.. main usse.. but seeing to varsha.. nhi.. hmm.. he returned in car..
ak-jab bhabhi thik ho jayegi phir kya hoga..
nk-pata nhi woh din ka intjar mujhe kabse hai.. main kosish karke har gya hu kuch milta nhi hath nhi lagta mujhe.. suddenly dey sees to varsha.. she opened eyes.. seeing to nk..
nk-all things went down from his hands.. di.. he had tears in his eyes.. he runned nd passed smile..
ak-she was happily crying so much...
nk-hawww... waawww... di u listening me na... sun rahi main nk apka bhai apko yad hain na..
var- a tears dropped from her eyes... she say word haaa.. . nnn... .
nk-di.. hug to her.. i m so hpy ki aap aachi ho..
var-smile... hmmm.. wohhh.. in low voice... nk sees to ak..
nk-woh ak... hai.. unhone apko thik kiya hai.. aap aacha feel kar rahi na.. ak runned outside nd went in car.. nk sees nd was surprised y she even didnt say a single word.. .
va-her eyes was silent. . she has so many qu..
nk-main janta hu aap kya soch rahi ki kaise kya ho gya.. us din aap endom pagal ho gai thi main apko hospital laya to apka miscarriage ho gya tha aur aap coma main ja chuki thi.. pehle toh kaise bhi karke sara saman bech ke ilaj karaya phir apko yaha laya.. ek nurse rakhi jo apki care karti.. bas apka uthne ka wait karta roj.. par dil main tadap thi ki unko kuch sabak du jinhone apki yeh halat ki. phir maine unki beti ko dekha socha yeh kahi se gayab ho jaye toh inko bhi woh tadap mehsus hogi jo mujhe hui.. unko maine apne uncle wale m rakha par samaj nhi aata yeh bade log apni hi beti ko khed karke rakha tha pata hi nhi chala kab woh mujhe pasand karne lagi toh m usse wapas chod aaya.. par uska pyar mujhe yaha tak laya aur maine usse sab bataya sab.. . usne mujhse promise li thi aap thik ho jayegi toh main usse uske pyar ka hak dunga.. aap thik ho na...
va-haa.. paa..
nk-pani deta hu aur doctor ko bhi bulata hu..
ak reached in mehel...
she was crying alottt... she went in her room..
hug to daimaa..
ak-daimaa..
da-worried haa.. kya hua princess.. kisi ne kuch kaha kya apko haa.. kuch hua hai na apko.. bataiye mujhe dar lag raha bhut jayada..
ak-maa.. daimaa.. woh main jo kam kar rahi thi na woh di ko hos aa gya..
da-kya yeh toh khushi ki bat hain na rona kyo..
ak-pata nhi dil bhar aaya... she wipe her tears.. pata nhi mujhe ajib laga bhut rona rona aa gya..
da-baithiye aaiye haa... kya aap bhi... jab hum koi kam karte hai na toh usme hame success mil jati h toh dil bhar aata hai.. par god apke sath h yeh sochiye..
ak-main ab kya karu waha jau unke pass.. jo maine kaha woh toh ho gya na..
da-ek bat bolu main..
ak-g daimaa..
da-beta aap ek beti ho.. apse hi is ghar ki ronak hai bhale hi apko koi time de ya nhi par aap unka ek ansh ho toh hi na.. maa baap ek esse chiz hai jo god ki tarah hote h bhale woh lakh galti kare par saza apko dene ka koi hak nhi woh apko is duniya m late h itne kast deke palte hai.. agar aaj aap galt kadam uthoge toh god kahi na kahi apko saza jarur dega yeh toh mante ho na..
ak-par daimaa main nk se pyar karti hu mujhe mere pyar ka hak chahiye..
da-aur ek beti ka farz kabhi apne wada kiya kud ke baba se khabhi bhi kisi bhi ehsan ke badle.. she remembered that word.
"apko wada karna hoga jo hum kahege aap karegi.. ak said haa"
ak-woh us din bhahar jane pe..
da-ab bataiye agar woh apse pyar nhi karte toh kya woh apko jane dete..
ak-nhi..
da-apne jo pyar ke liye ladai ki woh puri hui ab apke pyar ka hak dene ki bari uski hai jiske liye aap lade ho..
ak-toh babasaa jo kahege main woh karugi nk ke pyar ko chodke..
da-haa agar jarurat pade toh..
ak-par daimaa mujhe uske pass jana h main gi nhi paugi uske bina..
da-aap uska sath toh thabhi de sakti hai jab apka pyar apka sath de.. kya ek hath se thali bajti hai.. bhagwan ko pradam karne ke liye bhi do hath chahiye.. do pahiyo se hi car chalti hai janti h na aap..
apko samjhana mera farz tha.. baki apki marzi aap bar bar idar udar thokar khaye yeh nhi dekh sakti main.. aap rajkumari hai.. she stood but ak held her hand..
ak-agar mera pyar mujhe bulayega tab main kya karugi is jhooti shan se jiugi ya sache pyar ke sath jaugi..
da-beta maine apko sacha pyar ke pass rehne ko kaha jhoot to khatam ho jata h turant..par agar woh nhi lota toh apka farz beti ka hoga na.. aati hu khana leke..
ak was upset..
ak-she sees to cell phone.. aap aaoge ya nhi.. nk mujhe apka injar rahega..
here in nks house.
nk-kaisi hai di..
do-she is fine bas ab ek do din yeh bolne lag jayegi... phir aap inko chalana phirana aur yeh kisi wonder se kam nhi kyo..
varsa nodded yes..
nk-yeh sab mujhe toh yakin nhi ho raha di aachi ho gai..
d-mujhe bhi par yeh badlaw new dawai massage aur care ka natija hai aur sayad kisi ki dua bhi jisske kehne par ek din main sab thik ho gya..
nk was thinking about ak... he was in his dreams.. varsha was noticing everything..
do-nk g nk g..
nk-hmm... came in sence... haa.. ...
do-yeh dawai.. app le lijiyega main chalta hu thij hain..
nk-g... didi aap khana kha lijiye..he sat to varsha.. lijiye kuch aur man ho toh bata dijiyega hmm..
va-tu bhi in low voice.. try to feed to nk.. with d help of nks hand she feed to nk.
nk-aap aa gai sab mil gya.. a tears drop from his eyes.. kami toh rahegi unki jo ban gai par hum ab is seher ko chod denge dur chale jayege..
va-sad ho. ..
nk-nhi m soo soo soo hpy di... he starts laughing so much... but he had tears also..
he hug to varsha..
nk-iiss u so much un sal main mar sa gaya tha hasna bhool sa gya tha par ab aap aa gai ak bhi aai toh main..
var-kya..
nk-woh kuch nhi di main pani lata hu haa... he went outside..
in nyt in mehel... shorya came in aks room..
sh-daimaa ak kaha hain..
da-ji woh andar hai hukum aa rahi kapde badal ke..
sh-kya main kuch der akle usse bat kar sakta hu thoda kam hain mujhe.
da-ji bilkul main niche chali jati hu aap bat kariye...
she went in hull..
after that ak came out from bathroom. .
ak-yeh meri dress daimaa... bhaisaa aap..
sh-nhi aa sakta chok kyo gai ak..
ak-nhi jis pal ke liye main tadap rahi thi woh mere pass aaj kud aaya umid nhi thi na..
sh-par woh samay kya laya h yeh bataogi.. kiska face banaya tumne lai nhi..
ak-sikh hi kaha pai...
sh-dundla hi la deti dekh lete hum...
ak-nhi bhaisaa woh chiz kya dekhni jo najar na aaye..
sh-aa gai behen najar bhi aur kuch kuch confusion bhi..
ak-matlb..
sh-tum kaha jati ho yeh mujhe pata hain ab.. par main janna chahta hu kyo jati ho waha kaise jati ho..
ak-aap kya bol rahe samaj nhi pa rahi..
sh-yahi ki yeh bill aaya hain.. dekhiye.. ak was shocked.. yeh kis liye h yeh nhi kyo uski help kar rahi yeh bata do..
ak-kyoki woh meri bhabhi h yaha se ristha hai unka hena.. shorya was shocked..
more parts coming soon..
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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sh-yeh kya bol rahi ho ak..
ak-sach hai na aap kam se kam mujhe toh haa bol hi sakte hai agar us time pe aap chup na rehte toh tin jindagi kharab nhi hoti choti si galti ke karan kya kuch ho gya..
sh-tujhe kisne kaha yeh sab..
ak-jo main gayab hui thi na mujhe varsha ke bhai kidnap karke le gye the..
sh-kya kon h woh main usse choduga nhi.. usne tumhe kuch kiya toh nhi. .
ak-ek choti si taklif ko dekh apka gussa fut gya bhaisaa sochiye jiski maa baap nhi rahe behen coma main chali gai woh kaise rehti hogi.. sochiye.. usko gussa aaya kyoki apki galti thi aap chup rahe thabhi woh mujhe le gya par usne mera khyal rakha bukar main sewa ki seher gumaya pyar diya.. itna jitna apne bhi nhi diya.
sh-tu yeh kya keh rahi.. princess ho yahi ki bat karo agar hum bahar chote log ka sochege toh sab kharab ho jayega..
ak-aap kam se kam haa toh keh sakte the bhaisaa chi kaise kar diya apne yeh sab gin aati h mujhe apse.. ek bar nhi socha bola tak nhi babasaa ko bol dete kam se kam toh main thodi ijat kar deti..
sh-kaha tha ak kaha kaha apke babasaa ko jab sagai nhi hui toh bataya tha.. in loud voice.. par meri kismat thi hi nhi sayad kyoki babasaa gussa hue maine fesla kiya main is ghar pe nhi rahuga.. toh babasaa ne mujhe khud bola ki woh varsha ke pass jayege usko layege.. main wait kar raha tha par unhone mujhe bataya ki varsha ke bacha bhi gira diya aur woh log varsha ki shadi kahi aur karane ja rahe the. .
ak-kya shocked par babasaa ne jhoot bola woh toh haw told everything. .
sh-mujhe nhi pata tha ki woh yeh sab kar denge.. maine ek bar bas kai din bad pata lagaya mujhe thik thik nhi pata tha village ka nam tih pata chala woh yaha par koi nhi hai.. phir mera shadi par se visvas khatam ho gya aur main khud pe busy rehne laga.. sayad thabhi ek gulit ke sath tha ki babasaa ko kyo bola
ak-m so sry bhaisaa kuch jane bina apko kya kuch bol diya maine.. really really sry..
sh-galt dikhega toh samjhege bhi galt hi na.. isme teri kya fault.. par ek bat boluga behen ab woh samal rahe toh plz unko usi hal pe chod de warna babasaa phir kuch essa kar denge ki hum kuch bacha nhi payege..
ak-bhaisaa varsha bhabhi thik hain...
sh-laugh.. main dua karuga usse sab mile jo woh chahti hai.. yeh ek bhool gya hua rishta hain ab..
ak-aap..
sh-so jaiye princess..
ak-gudnyt bhaisaa.. he went yeh rat mujhe bhut bhari rahegi..
in nyt.. all were sad shorya was roaming here nd der nk was thinking about those moments which he shared with ak..
nd ak was also crying.. varsha was seeing to nk that he was on door..
after somedays... aks door bell ringing so much..
daimaa opened to door..
da-yeh thik hain de dungi.. she went in aks room.. princess apke nam se kuch aaya hain..
ak-hpy kya.. nk ka toh nhi..
she opened it..
ak-feeling sad.. yeh toh maine banwaya tha... yeh toh pendent hain daimaa.. she put it on cupboard. ..
kya karugi iska koi jawab de tab na woh mujhse pyar hi nhi karta woh..
starts crying..
da-apne kaha tha aap weak nhi padegi apko ladna h kud ke liye aap faltu ki chiz nhi h..
ak-kyo nhi ja sakti waha ek hi toh bat hain.. main faltu hi toh sabke liye kyo nhi aata woh mujhe lene. . main gi nhi sakti esse mar jati hu..
da-aap strong hain bhut jayada bas chup.. hug to her..
here nk was doing his work in his house.. he remembered about pics.. laugh but a tears dropped from his eyes.. but varsha caught it..
nk-di aap plz rest kariye..
va-kitna karu abhi bolna sikha chalna sikha phir se. . par main sikhi mera bhai udas ho gya bilkul..
nk-m fine di..
va-aaj nhi jis din se uthi hu us din se tu sad hai.. tujhe dekh meri himat tut rahi hain.. tu kyo soch woh sapna jo pura nhi hoga.. agar tere andar usse pyar karne ki himat hain toh tu lad le mere jaise ro mat.. kamjor padke sirf musibat aati h.. us din agar maine thodi himat dikhai hoti tih sayad aaj maa bauji zinda hote.. galti toh maine ki par saza sayad unhe mil rahi..
agar bhagwan ne ak ko yaha bheja mujhe thik karne ke liye toh sayad uske pyar ka man dena tera hak hain..
main barbad hui par ak bhi tujhe utna pyar karti hai jitna maine kiya tha aaj tu bhi shorya ke jaise hi chup hain..
kahi wahi na ho jaye jo mere sath hua.. kya tu ek bar bat nhi kar sakta ak se usse yeh hi samjha de ki tu usse apna nhi sakta.. usss himat dede thaki woh aage bad sake..
nk-main usse pyar nhi karta..
va-karte ho bhut teri eyes hain tujhe rok nhi pa rahi sach kehne se..
nk-par didi woh princess h uske baba jiddi aur hum sab kho chuke apko khona meri himat nhi..
va-main kahi nhi jaugi kuch nhi hoga mujhe.. ab main pehle wali varsha nhi badal gai hu aaj koi mujhe tod nhi sakta main tumhe yeh nhi keh rahi ki tum usse shadi kar lo. par ek bar milke usse yeh samjha do ki woh aage bade pyar m taklif bhut hoti h..
nk-woh apne bhai jaisi hui toh..
va-woh darti toh roj yaha nhi aati. . means woh sachi h aur uski aankh usse bhi jayada sachi..
nk-aap nhi hoti toh kya hota mera..
va-kuch nhi.. sab aache ke liye hota h..
now after a day..
shorya nd vis were having dinner..
vis-hamne apko bataya tha na woh kal aa rahe subah.
sh-ak se bat toh kar lijiye..
vis-haa usse bulao toh.. said toh daimaa..
sh-aap aacha toh kar rahe uski marzi.
vi-hum jo karege khud karege kisi se puchna nhi sikhna hamne..
ak came in hull.. sat in table..
vis-apne kam course kar liya.. she nooded yes.. ab..
ak-babasaa jo aap kahe..
vis-apne us din hamse wada kiya tha yad h kuch..
ak-g. .
vis-aap woh hi karegi jo hum kahege.. kuch mana nhi karegi.
ak-g.
vis-kal apse milne ek kuwar aa rahe aap unse aachese milegi unhe apki photo bhut pasand aai hai toh hamne apka rishta pakka kar diya..
ak was hell shocked 😲 😭 sees to daimaa..
ak-kya par..
vi-apne wada kiya hain hamse.. aap unse milegi aachese bat karegi aur haa bhi kahegi hame kuch panga nhi chahiye..
ak-she runned in room... laied on bed starts crying so much..
ak-yeh kya ho gya mere sath daimaa came nd hug her..
ak-main nhi karugi shadi daimaa kisi se bhi nhi ek pijare se dusare pinjare main.. kyo jisse dekha nhi jana nhi kaize kar lu shadi.. yeh dil mera hai nhi mera yeh kisi aur ka hai.. kaise de du kisi ko..
da-kya har kuwar gande hi hai.. woh insan aacha hota toh kya pyar ka hak nhi deta bolta nhi ek bar bhi ki aap uske liye bane ho.. esse rishte nhi bante.. wiped her tears.. ek bar usse milne main harz kya hain.. bataiye..
ak-par woh aacha bhi hoga toh main kyo pasand karu.
da-kyoki apko ek beti banna hai..
ak-jhooti shan jisne ek ladki ki life barbad ki..
da-sab god dekh rahe unpe chod do.. jo hoga dekha jayega bas aap samal jaiye.. hmm..
ak-kosish kar rahi nhi ho raha..
da-god sab thik karege.. hmm hug to her. .
hadbad m kuch mat kariye aap..
ak-bas bas... ab aur nhi.. pagal ho jaugi main..
next morning..
daimaa got ready to ak in beautiful green coloured lenga it was so preety.. she was looking great..
all were on door.. ak came der..
vi-aaiye put hand on her shoulder..
ak sees duplicate love..
now a big car arrive on aks gate.. a handsome boy came out from car.. he was rituraj..
ra-hii... namaste uncle.. touch vis feet..
sees to ak she also.. but she doesn't like at all.. he passed smile..
r-aap shorya bhaisaa hug to him... hum sabko badkar mante hain..
vis-aao beta inse milo my beautiful daughter aak..
rr-smile.. hii u r so beautiful more than beautiful from pic.. nice to meet u..
vis grabbed aks shoulder nd ak sees to vis..
vis-from angry eyes forward her hand..
she forward..
ak-hii..
rr-wat a beautiful hand kissed on her hand.. she dont like it saw from anger.. excuse me.. she took back her hand nd went away from outside... ????
🥱..
wat will happen next i will def update next part soon..
plz press like button if u like this part nd leave comment m badly waiting for all comments..
tqq for ur valuable time..
precap-tom jerry game 😆. . nk aayega kya 😉
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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Lovely update keep writing like this!! :) <3
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Originally posted by: Duggukede

Lovely update keep writing like this!! :) <3


thanku so much nikita for ur loving comments... 😃 i will try to update next part soon.. 😊

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