FF..' Love will find its way '.. part 10 on 51 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Of course accha lga
One thing I liked in your every ff is strong story with soo many twists and turns you keep me hooked. Story is becoming more and more interesting and I'm still waiting for you to continue DO DIL, NEW LIFE too

aww...thank u nidhi...so sweet of u...i will try to update my old ffs too...

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

I will wait

ok...gappu...

Vry nice update sonal
wht a twist nk sudnly starts caring for ak
bt sad vish...poor ak
bt why she is angry wid nk...
Mohit tusi grt ho hw sweet he is bst frnd
ths samar trying to create mu btw naksh
bt bt wht did vish said to nk realy vry intrstng
waiting for nxt part eagrly
do update asap:-)

Originally posted by: deepshikan

Vry nice update sonal
wht a twist nk sudnly starts caring for ak
bt sad vish...poor ak
bt why she is angry wid nk...
Mohit tusi grt ho hw sweet he is bst frnd
ths samar trying to create mu btw naksh
bt bt wht did vish said to nk realy vry intrstng
waiting for nxt part eagrly
do update asap:-)

thank u soo much vishu fr liking this part...and ur sweet comments...
akshara naitik se gussa kyu hai...ye kal pata chal jayega...
till then wait dear...I will update tomorrow

Part...8...
Flashback...
vi- beta..mai aapse ek wada chahta hu..
nk- mujhse ?...Ji kahiye baau Ji...
vi- wada karo ki tum akshara ka saath kabhi nahi chodoge...
nk( sadly )- par wo mere saath kabhi khush nahi reh sakti...
vi- kyu nahi beta...wo aapki patni hai...
nk- sirf pati patni hona hi kaafi nahi hota...rishte me pyaar bhi hona chahiye...Jo hamare beech bilkul nahi hai...par mai aapse itna wada zaroor kar sakta hu ki akshara ko uski khushi tak pahucha saku...
vi- Jo sirf aapke saath hai...
nk- ye sirf aapko lagta hai baau Ji..Hume nahi...
par aap chinta mat kijiyega...aapki beti ko mai uske hisse ki saari khushiyaan dunga...
...
Flashback ends...
naitik quickly open his eyes...
nk to himself...Maine baau ji se wada kiya hai...ki akshara ko uski khushi doonga...
toh phir jab WO aaj uss Samar ke saath thi...toh mujhe accha kyu nahi lag raha...
kyu mai uske liye khush nahi ho pa raha...?
yahi toh mai chahta hu...ki hum dono alag ho jaye...par kyu mera dil keh raha hai...ki galat hoga...
he hold his very tightly...as if his brain is going to blast anytime...
" nahi...mai itna selfish nahi ho Sakta...mujhe akshara ko divorce dena hi hoga..."...
now he finally decided what he wants...
naitik took his coat...and went to his home...
...
at 2 am...
he reached at home...( bhabhi maa went to sleep...so naitik directly came in his room...)..
where akshara was sleeping...( actually she was not...but crying slowly slowly...)
naitik silently came and sat on sofa...akshara open her eyes..and look at him...
she quickly sat on her place..
ak- mai...WO...
naitik look at her...
ak- aapka khana nikaal deti hu...
nk- mujhe bhook nahi hai..( while open his shirts buttons...)
akshara became silent again...
nk- wapas ghar kab aayi..?
ak- ammm...raat ko hi...
nk- hmmm...kiske saath...?
akshara was not able to understand his question...
ak- kiske saath matlab ?...aap kehna kya chahte hai ?
nk- Jo tum samajh rahi ho...
akshara came and stood in front of naitik...naitik look up to her...and stood )
ak- toh phir suniye...mai Samar ke saath aayi hu...ok...
naitik's eye became red...
nk( angrily)- bahut shauk hai doosro se sahara lene ka...right ?..
ak- doosra wo nahi aap hai naitik...kyunki jis insaan ke pass itna time nahi ki wo ek phone utha sake..toh usse kisi sahare ki umeed bhi kya ki jaye...
aree aap toh itna bhi nahi kar paaye ki...kisi ke marne par samay se pahuch jaye...
nk( angrily )- akshara...
he put his hand in air..to slap her...but couldn't...
ak- ruk kyu gaye...Mr. singania...
naitik take back his hand..." meri aankho ke saamne se chali jao..."
ak ( angrily )- aise nahi...
she came near the cupboard and take out divorce papers...and again came...
...
WO papers ko naitik ke saamne dikhate hue kehti hai..." mujhe divorce chahiye..."
nk (smile )- ek shadi ke liye Hume kitni baar divorce lena hoga..?
ak- WO papers sab aapki aur mohit Ji ki planning thi...par ye nahi...WO papers abhi tak court bhi nahi pahuche...
naitik sat up on sofa..and looked at her...waiting fr her more reactions..)
ak- pls ispar sigh kar dijiye...
nk- aur ?
ak- aur hum ek saath nahi reh sakte..( she spoke as her voice lowered )...
her words echoed in naitik's ear..he still sat...didn't know how to react..wo samajh nahi paa raha tha ki khush ho...ki akshara use chodkar apni khushi ko chun rahi hai...ya phir dukhi ki koi use kisi aur ke liye chod raha hai...
...
par phir bhi kahi na kahi wo khush tha...ki iske baad dono apni puraani life me wapas chale jayenge. .
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naitik take that papers and pen..and about to sign...
when...
ak- thanks...kyunki mera tum jaise insaan ke saath kabhi guzara nahi ho sakta...( she spoke further...)
naitik stop in his way.. " mujh jaisa insaan ? " ( he stared at her )
ak- Jo doosro ki feelings ki kadar na kare...bhagwaan unhe dil hi kyu dete hai...
nk- ak...shut up...! ( he spoke in anger )...tumhe kya lagta hai...ki mere pass dil nahi hai...toh ye hi sahi...
naitik stood from his place...( they both came face to face...)
he brought all the papers in front of akshara...and tear then into two parts...
...
ak( shocked )- ye kya kiya...?
nk- apne dil ka ek trailer dikhaya...ki WO kya kya kar sakta hai...
( naitik papers ke chote chote tukde karke hawa me uda deta hai...)
aur akshara kuch nahi kar paati...
...
next morning...
naitik at dining table...eating his breakfast...when mohit too came there...
mo- good morning ...mere bhai...
naitik look at him but didn't reply..
bm- aree ...mohit...aa beta tu bhi naashta kar le...
mohit happily sat beside naitik...and start eating food..
mo- akshara bhabhi kahi nazar nahi aa rahi...
( naitik quickly stare at mohit..)
bm- aati hogi..kal der se soyi thi NA..
mo- ohh ! par bm aap toh naashta kijiye...
bm- nahi beta...aaj karwa chauth hai..aur mai..
mo- samajh gaya...aap aaj tak dadda Ji ke liye vrat rakhti hai...what a sweet love..isi baat par bm garma garam chai ho jaye...
bm- abhi laati hu...
bm went to kitchen...
mo- kuch seekh le...?
nk- kya.. ?
mo- hey bhagwaan...kuch nahi...ye bata aaj tera mood kyu kharab hai...?
nk- kuch nahi...
mo- tu bata warna tere divorce wali baat bm ko bata dunga...
nk- accha...bata de...BTW batayega kya ki tune WO papers court me submit nahi kiye...
mo- ohhh ! Teri...tujhe pata chal gaya...good good...
nk- par phir bhi kya faida...akshara ne kal aur papers diye the sign ke liye...
mo- whaaat !! phir se divorce...?
nk- hmmn...par Maine sign nahi kiye...
a big smile came on mohit's face...he quickly hug naitik...
mo- waah ! mere sher...aise hi laga reh.. ek din tujhe apni manzil zoroor milegi...
bm came there with tea..." kaisi mazil mohit ? "...
tabhi waha akshara bhi aa jaati hai...but not like a newly married women but like a simple girl...
ak( sadly )- good morning bm...
naitik didn't even look at her...
bm- bahu..aaj tera pehla karwa chauth hai..aur tu kaisi bani hai...
ak- sorry bm...mai abhi taiyaar ho jaungi...
akshara stood there like an statue...
mohit tried to light up everybody's mood...
mo- bm..mai keh raha tha ki...
bm- tu pehle ye bata abhi munna ke saath tu kis mazil ke baare me baat kar raha tha ?
mo- haa bm...mai WO hi toh bolne ja raha hu...
he put his hands on naitik's shoulder...and take a sip of juice..
mo- bhabhi maa...wo aapka munna keh raha tha...ki yaar mohit tu jaldi se mere aur akshara ke liye koi honeymoon ki manzil decide kar...
naitik burst out his all juice from his mouth in a big shock...
akshara too became shock ...
bm( blush)- aree haa beta..Maine toh iss baare me kabhi socha hi nahi...
toh bata munna...kaha jayega tu...mohit ticket book karwa dega...
mo- haa bata na munna...
naitik again gave him a stare..." tujhe toh baad me bataunga saale "

naitik quickly got up..." mai office ja raha hu..."
bm- theek hai munna...iss baare me kal baat karenge...par aaj shaam 6 baje tak tu ghar par hoga...
nk- hmmm...

here naitik angrily came outside...so as mohit ran behind him...
nk- kya bakwaas ki tune andar...?
mo- yaar mazaak kiya...
nk- mazaak...par bm serious thi...
mo- tu chinta mat kar wo kal tak Sab bhool jayengi...
nk- hope so...
mo- aree ye tere face ko kya hua...?
nk- kya...? ( he look his face into the mirror..)
mo- bahut chamak raha hai..lagta hai kisi ke vrat rakhne ka asar hai...
nk- tu bhi naa...accha wo airport reception ka no. de..
mo- kyu tickets book karwani hai...
nk- Ji nahi...apna passport renew karwana hai...
naitik check his pocket...par uska mobile hi nahi...
nk- lagta hai mobile andar reh gaya..mai abhi lekar aata hu...
he ran towards his room...
...
here akshara was changing her clothes...mainly she tries to tie dori of her blouse...( its a special day for every married women...so bhabhi maa told her to get ready like a newly wedd bride...poori tarah se raat ko sajna tha...par abhi ke liye little bit...)
so akshara wore a heavey red saari...with matching jewellery and a deep neck back ka blouse...ammm...hot hot girl...
so...
she tried to tie her dori...
when suddenly naitik came in ( without knocking at the door...)
he look at akshara...but akshara became embarrassed to see him...
firstly toh naitik ki aankhe khoobsorat si akshara ko dekhkar nahi hat ti...but he quickly lowered his gaze...
nk- mai apna mobile bhool gaya...
akshara couldn't say anything...
naitik take his mobile...and went out from the room...
naitik drawing room se ja hi raha hota hai...a phone bell rings...aur idhar se wahi call akshara uthati hai...same to same time...
naitik was about to say " hello "...
when...
sm-kab se tumhara mobile try kar raha hu...utha kyu nahi rahi thi...?
ak- switched off tha...
sm- kya hua...?
ak- naitik ne sign nahi kiye papers...
sm- what ?...par kyu ?
akshara start crying ..." pata nahi..."
here naitik is listening all the convo..but he was about to leave the phone...but again...
sm- ak tum ro mat...I have an idea...
ak- kya ?
sm- kyu na hum naitik ki bhabhi maa ko...
naitik became shocked to hear bhabhi maa's name...
he angrily cut the phone..." agar inn dono ki wajah se meri bhabhi maa ko kuch hua...toh mai zinda nahi chodunga..."
he angrily went out...
hmmm...idhar ak Samar ki convo..
sm- kyu na hum naitik ki bm ko sab bata de...
ak- nahi...mai aisa kuch nahi karoongi...wo meri maa hai...aur apni wajah se mai unhe Zara sa bhi dukh nahi hone doongi...samjhe tum...
sm- sorry akshara...
ak- hamari life me Jo hoga Hume milega...
she cut the phone...
ak to herself ..." meri kismat ab mujhe kaha. le kar jaati hai..? "...
hmmm...so kya iss baar naitik ke gusse ki wajah se...akshara hamesha ke liye usse door ho jayegi..
ya phir akshara apni life se compromise karegi...jaane ke liye just wait and read...

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so friends...hope u all like this part...
thanks fr reading.

nice parts naksh ki caring for each other was nice vish ki death was so sad news.. like naitik sambhalofy her but ye Samar err beech me ghus jata hai its nice that ak care for bm.. I like that scene when naitik phadofy divorce papers waiting for next part

Nice part
Full of ak tears
Flashback is not clear
Nk anger... ak misunderstood him every time
Mohit is funny
Karwachauth vrat seems interesting
Update soon

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

nice partsnaksh ki caring for each other was nicevish ki death was so sad news..like naitik sambhalofy her but ye Samar err beech me ghus jata haiits nice that ak care for bm.. I like that scene when naitik phadofy divorce paperswaiting for next part

thank u so much pragu fr liking both parts...

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Nice part
Full of ak tears
Flashback is not clear
Nk anger... ak misunderstood him every time
Mohit is funny
Karwachauth vrat seems interesting
Update soon

thank u nidhi fr liking this part too...
tumhe flashback samajh nahi aaya...isliye next part after one week...okweiii