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Originally posted by: Nairaksh
A very nice part ruchi
Nk ke gift... poor guy
Shivu k chakkar me mzak bn gya
Loved it when nk address her my blushing queen
Every scene was good
Their morning convo was sweet this part reminds me of 12 oct
Shivu ko nk kaise handle krega .
Ab please contact ss ff ko bhi end mat kr dena like other ff of yours
But try to be a little more clear like your other writings its not about your English or Hindi it's about clear description image, giving explanation . due to this reason this part was a little confusing and unclear to understand.
Update soon
Thanku thanku so much nidhi for liking this part nd gave sweet true comment. . 😊 ...loved ur fect for me ...i write words of 12oct because dis date was so memorable for me so i wrote. .shivu 😆 ..
Yr end to dena hoga but dont worry i will write dis ff 😳 ..nd not wind off now...i will give clear description image in new parts dont worry...i will try my best
😃 ..but isse jayada romance nhi de sakti mai means aage nhi bad sakti aur 😲 ...
I will do update next part soon 😊
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
