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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part
finally proposal ho gya
am ka gussa nice
ab dekho aage kya hoga
plz update next part waiting
plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN

nice part
finally proposal ho gya
am ka gussa nice
ab dekho aage kya hoga
plz update next part waiting
plz pm me


Thanku so much simi for reading this part nd gave sweet comments. ..sry yr karne wali thi bas ... 😊 ..next time pakka i will do pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Vry nice part di
mohit is too funny nd nk wnt to village for ak...ak jko when some grls strt drooling on nk so cute ...nk ask apology frm ak bt ak stll angry hona bhi chahiye ...ab dekhte h nk ji apni ak ko kaise mnate h ...waiting for nxt prt eagrly...di do update nxt part soon:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deepshikan

Vry nice part di
mohit is too funny nd nk wnt to village for ak...ak jko when some grls strt drooling on nk so cute ...nk ask apology frm ak bt ak stll angry hona bhi chahiye ...ab dekhte h nk ji apni ak ko kaise mnate h ...waiting for nxt prt eagrly...di do update nxt part soon:-)


Thanku so much vishu baby for liking this part nd gave sweet comments. ..haa girls ko to bhhav khana banta hai...i will do update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyccc Part Ruchi dear welldone BT I hope jald se jald SB theek. ho jaye...plz cont next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh

Nyccc Part Ruchi dear welldone BT I hope jald se jald SB theek. ho jaye...plz cont next part soon


Thanku so much sameera for liking this part nd gave sweet comments. .dont worry everything will be gud ..i will do update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-24
Now morning. ..he wokeup ..nd went out ...nd doing push ups...now he felt somthing. ..
Nk-waaw so nice ...food ..kitni aachi kushu hai..loved it...saw here nd der...nd going...interact this smell..he went near..der was shop of sweet...
Nk-shopkeeper. ..whats dis..its smell is so nice i waana eat dis..pls tell me me price..he said in one tone nd shopkeeper was like ..confused nd shocked to listen English. .
Sh-hamka angreji nhi aawat hai..ye jalebi hai...aap paise dijiye hum apko jalebi denge..ye angreji mai khatar patar mat kijiye..
Nk-what r u saying...kya boli..ye khatar patr i didnt get..but jo bhi hai..i will give u money..mai rupiya dungi ..tum ye..jale what dogi..
Sh-aapki hindi to bhut gandi hai..nk made face nd gave glear look. ..
Nk-tumse jayada bolne ko kissne boli...do mujhe..
Sh-pahile kha ke to dekhiye..apne seher ka wo angreji khana bhul jayege aap..he gave to nk..he ate nd that was really tasty. ..
Nk-waaw how much price ..
Sh-ji ..smile..
Nk-pagal ho kya...i asked..kitne ki hai ye..ruko..credit card to no ways..amm..gave 1000 thousands note...give me one packed for my wife..nd smile..
Sh-sir ji...ee to bas 20rupaye ka hai..hum to garib aadmi hai ye kaha se itne chutte layge hum..
Nk-oo impressed. .u r honest ...meri pass itna small money nhi hai...mai yahi pass mai ..wo ghar hai na..waha hu..de dungi..ok..
Sh-are wo to ak beti ka ghar hai...aap unke pati parmeshar hai...bhut kubsurat hai aap to..
Nk-haa..what par..omg...vry though language. .but aap unko kaise..
Sh-wo yaha aksar aati thi..ap dono ke bete ke sath..bhut ee pyara bacha hai apka...aap unko lene aaye hai...
Nk-pls u took this...for ur wife kids..mujhe aachi lagegi..apke bache ko de dena..pls..
Sh-bhagwan kare aap dono ki kusiya bani rahe...
Now he went in home..shuvu ask to him wer he went...he told about all...
Nk-forward to ak..but didnt take..
Ak-wo mujhe bhuk nhi hai..
Sh-par mamma apko to bhut jayada pasand hai na..
Ak-wo mujhe kam hai ..sry mai ati hu..
Now nk nd shivu eating nd liking...but now nk ate last bite..bas..meri now ise puri nhi kha paugi..
Ak is seeing from kitchen. .
Sh-ye to complete karo ..
Nk-no bas..thats enough now...shivu took dis jalebi in kitchen. .now shivu devv is busy in work..nk is taking cloth..ak was in kitchen. .doing work...suddenly she saw jalebi..nd cant control to her..
Ak-par ye to jhuti hai...koi bat nhi ..saw here nd der kya pata chalega...nk ki jhuti to hai..
But she took..think lill but now she start eating..waaw bhut aachi hai..kya ho jata kha leti to ak..tu bhi na..but nk saw her to eat last bite..nd smile but he was outside. .
Came but ak wipe her mouth...
Nk-searching. ..my jalebi..oo god..wer is..i waana..
Ak-wo wo..maine fek di..
Nk-wer is dustbeen i want..usme mai i will eat..nd smile but in man..
Ak-aap wo kharab ho gai..aur agar chize ek bar kharab ho jaye to ban nhi sakti ..
Nd about to go..
Nk-but new to ban sakti hai na...but she went...chalo isne khai to sachi..pyar hai mere liye..but now her anger is more than my love...but i would give one chance to our relationships. .
Now he went in room..nd ask for bathing...shivu says in outside...he saw place..that was uncomfortable. ..but he says oki...devyani went ...ak gave bucket. ..of water...
More parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Shivu giggling so much...
Nk-shivu...i will see u...jayada masti nhi na...
Sh-hehe..sab dekhegi apko girls...
Ak made face..
Ak-shivu aap jao andr jayada masti mat karo..yha rahoge to chup raho na..
Sh-oki...but smile. ..
Now nk saw here der...but removed his shirt..but not jeans..nd sat...on floor ...omg cold water..but he started taking bath...swllly he enjoyed. ..ak went in side ...saw all around. ..than she saw some gils r admiring to him...from her house. ..ak didnt like...nk is doing masti with water...singing song ..telgue...like kids...dey r laughing. ..now ak is so much in anger...came near..
Nk saw to her..why she is giving anger look...he ask in isara what happened. .she pointed finger near girls..he passed smile. .
Nk-waaw so nice ...hii..forword hand..ak saw with big eyes...nd didnt like at all..
Ak-pyar ka dawa karte hai..dusari girls ko dekhne hi chalu..
Nk-i love my beautiful wife ..but wen here is no bathroom to what can i do...ab to jeans bhi nikalni padegi..actually i enjoyed dis place...mai apni wife ke sath yahi aaugi mai..
Now he started removing to tease to her...she felt so much anger...
Ak-ruko..means..mai aati hu..she went inside of house..took saree ...nd open dis in front of him..
Ak-kisi ko to saram aaygi nhi...
Nk-smile..all girls went..ak saw nd felt happy so much...nk saw to her nd lost on her face...kitni sweet ho na..
Ak-angry hmm..
Nk-nothhing now he is bathing nd some water drops went on her mouth..she saw to him...nd lost on him..
Now he took bath nd come in room...wiped his hair from towel nd throw it on d side of door...but it went on aks face...
Ak-aauch..
Nk-worried. .kya hua...saw his towel...on her face..
Ak-she removed towel...
Nk-sry ..lagi kya..maine galti se fek di...hair...nd hatofy hair ...she touch his touch..
Ak-pls stop..i m fine...he took back his hand ...kuch kar bhi nhi sakte..
Nk-because i want my wife...usi ko mai chahti hu puri ...
Ak-wo nhi hai nd going. ..
Nk-hai par dikha nhi rahi..
Now he went for breakfast. ..nd said to take for all..
But ak nd devyani said no...but at d time ..dey heard some voice. .
Gadi khama jamai saa...all say to her..
Dev-are baisaa aap...ye meri bua ji hai..
Bisa-to ye hai mare jamai saa...maine to bhut gussa aao ..ise waste shadi mai man nhi kiyo...jane ko..par ye to bhut sundar hai..
Nk-took blessings. ..namste ...baisaa...how r u ...
Bi-manne yo samaj koni aawe ..marwadi mai bolo ji..hindi mai..
Nk-meri hindi untni aachi nhi hai na...i thought aap samajj jaygi...aaiye na aap bhi breakfast kariye..
Bi-aap lo...mai yahi baithu hu..waise chori tu kush to hai na...jamai saa to bade choghe laga hai..
Ak-ji...nk shivu sat on floor. ..but baisaa said..
Ba-chori...tu udas laga haa ke..nk saw to ak...actually both...mai na thi ab tu bhi jamai saa ke sath baith aur unhi ki thali mai kha...dono ko pyar bhadego...
Ak-par mai kha lungi..waise bhuk bhi nhi hai..
Nk-but u r great ..smile. .sachi essi hoti hai..waaw yha kitni aachi aachi rasam hoti hai.. (ab to aachi tarika hai ak ko manane ki)..kya mai kila sakti hu..i waana ..pls..aap boliye na..
All r laughing to saw nks exicment. ..aww...ak ffelt so hpy in her heart but anger is must..
Bai-ak mana nhi karte...kitne pyar karne wale pati ko to bilkul nhi..all insists so much...no choice. .she sat near...of him took one bite..
Nk-can i ...baisaa...he gave bite to her...she is having. ..she is doing all because she dont want to hurt to anyone. ..nk is feeding. .
Ba-kitne sanskari hai..dev tere to bhagye khul gye...chori tu bhi kila na..
Ak-wo...she is feeding to him..he ate with smile. ..now he clean her lips. ..
All saw his care for ak ..now he is doing from heart ...ak had no choice to protest. .so she was silent. .
Now dey had der breakfast. ..nk nd baisaa ...is Talking with each...than shivu came ...
Sh-dost apko pata hai..
Nk-what...
Sh-yaha mela hai kal...hum jaiyege...na..bigg wala..
Bai-kub bada mela lagehe yaha.. sab jode mai jawehe...yaha ki vesbhusha pehen ke..aap to ram ki chavi ho jamai saa ...aap to bhut hi sundar dikhoge...
Nkz-waaw...so nice ..we will go...pls apni mamma ko bol do na..
Ba-mai bolu hu..pura gav le jaye..aap usi ke waste to aaye ho..hum sab abhi chalte hai..kal mele mai jawege..chori..
Ak came..
Ak-ji baisaa..
Ba-aaj jamai saa ko gav guma ke la...hum bhi jayge...kal mele bhi dono jode mai taiyar hoke jana...
Ak-ji baisaa wo..
NkZ-mai to puri yhi ki cloth pehnuga...
All becoming agreed now..
All r walking. ..more parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Nk saw to all like stranger. .. 😆 ...der costumes. ..all ..was vry strange..
Nk-yaha sab essi hi rehti hai...means no gumna nd all ..how..
Ak-ye inki sanskrtii hai...jisse ye jude hai jiwan hai inka...sayad inki mehanat sehi aanaj milta hai...in our village. .rice production hota hai..jisse city mai beja jata hai..
Nk-thats no nice...waaw...dey sees...that wife was in gungat..omg ..why dey wore big cloth...kiski wife kon hai kaise pata chalegi...agar koi dusare ki wife ko le gai to...
Bai-laugh...aap badi soni bat karo ji ..ye nai hai saram hai...yaha essa hi howe hai...ak ko bhi pehna de kya..
Nk-no..how kaise i will know. .pls ..baisa essi nhi karni na..
All laughed so much..dis times ak also..nk saw to her ...nd said ..
Nk-no pls...meri to diniya sad ho jaigi..agar kisi ko le gai to..phir to meri wife pit hi dengi..kya sochegi sab..wife se mar ..omg..all r laughing. .he told all dis for her happiness (sayad is hassi se ak ke pain kam ho jaye)..nd how mai ghar jaugi..amma will ask wer is my wife to..sab pitegi mujhe..
Ak-in laughing tone..kuch nhi hoga mai hu na mere to dil mai hai aap ap kuch bhi bole mai to bol ke aa hi jaugi..but stop..wo..
Nk-smile ab kitne bhi parde aa jaye par mai apni wife ko to leke jaugi hi..
All passed smile. ..nd returned home...
All did dinner...nd shivu sleep with baisaa ..ak is doings preparation ..nk went near..
Nk-tum abhi bhi gussa ...means..
Ak didnt say nd went for sleep. ..
Nk-smile koi bat nhi...man jaogi..gud nyt..nd went for sleep. .
In morning. ..he is going to take bath..saw ak is doing somthing. .
Nk-what is dis..
She took two wood nd adjust saree ...
Ak-wo maine ye saree laga di...ab kisi ko koi problems nhi hogi...nd koi kuch dekhega bhi nhi..
Now he passed smile for care of him..
He wore kurta nd dhoti he know to wore because in his custom doti is must na..
Baisaa gave pagdi ...nd he is looking so smart ...waaw...
But he is searching to ak wer was she...
Now he listening voice of gunguru...saw nd lost..
She was wearing lehnga sidha duppata nd waistband. .nackless earrings. ..but not mangtika lill sindur nd mangalstra. ..
Looking so much preety...like koi chu de to meli ho jaye..
Ba-kitni aachi laga hai...kisi ki buri najar na lag ..jaye...kyu jamai saa nd laugh...bas mari chori konajar lagao ge ke..
Nk-lost ..break..hmm..wo..haa..smile. .kya. .
Sh-chalo na dost..
Nk-chalo...
All r going. ..dis was so big mela..like in movie. .so crowd is here..
Now he is seeing to her..nd she also but nk saw here nd der..
Both r felling strange. ..ak saw bangles...dev baisaa is in other way..
Ak -chalo shivu ...hum chudi lenge...nd nk is walking behind. .
But some girls following to nk ...
All went in shop...ak is seeing. .
Nk saw ..-pls aachi si dikhaiye na...
Girls-babu ji...hum apko kab se dekh rahe hai aap bhut aache lag rahe..shivu laugh nd ak got anger...again dey came behind. .
Nk-omg ye tarif hai kya...babuji..i m looking oldies shivu..
Gi-nhi aap to hero hai...ekdom sehri wale..
Nk-smile thanku.but i loved to my wife..
Gi-kitna aacha bolte hai..
Ak is seeing nd so much in anger...
Ak-tumhare pariwar ka kii nhi...batmiz kahi ki..
Sh-mamma aap jko ho rahi ho..
Ak-aap chup raho shivu bas..apke dost ..kya jarurat thi itni smart lagne ki..means ...kya jarurt hai bat karne ki..
Gi-hamari madad kar do chudi pehnane mai..
Nk saw to ak..who was so jealous. .now he tease to her..
Nk-of course. ..give me ur hand.. because my wife dont want to wore bangles from my hand...kisi ko bhi sachi...
Ak-jao na phir piche piche mat aana..going. ..to take shivu...chalo kuch mat bolna bas...wrna kuch bhi ho jayga...shivu was laughing. .nk following to her. .
Nk-jayada ho gai kya ...oo god maine aur gussa kar di...
She took bangles nd try to wearing. ..
Ak-ab ye jaiyegi bhi nhi...oo god...but nk hold her hand. .he is taking back but ...he hold tighty...vry ...nd wore to her..
Nk-u love me so much..why u r not expressed. ..
Ak-because i hate u..aur bhi...nhi karti hu..pls jo karna hai kairye..mujhe jane dijiye nd going. ..nk followed to her..
But suddenly his watch went on fire..he saw but she is going. .
Nk-omg..my watch..ak ki di hui no ..kahi ye jal gai..no..
Here ak is not listening his voice nd turn...
Saw he is entering his hand on fire ..she worried nd feared... 😲 ????
What will happen. .
So guys after a long i gave update. .i m sry for late..
Pls press like button if u like this part nd gave sweet comments. .i will wait..waaw..pls dont mind nd ignored my mistake. .
Thanku...
Precap-nk took care of shivu on behalf of ak...she saw???
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
naitik ka akshara manao mission.. wow superb part.. naitik chala gao apni akshara ko manane.. naksh in gao awesome.. shivu and naitik scene was cute.. devyani ka jamai sa ki khatirdari karna.. akshara ka roothe rahna.. all scenes are awesome fantastic.. hope ab naitik akshi ko jaldi se mana le

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