pritu's ff !~KISMAT CONNECTION~! pt33/147 - Page 69

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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww mai meri dono ki sweet si bat ko manugi..:)
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Part-23
Nk was so surprised nd shocked to listen all dis...but thought about ak..
Nk-kitna ajib si lag rahi ...wen i didnt know about dis felling to ok..but ab to esse lag rahi bhag ke jau aur ak ko bol du that i love u...but why she said all dis...mohit..nd call to mohit..
Mo-hloo..bol majnu kaise manau wo gussa hai na 😆 ..
Nk-surprised. .haa..kaise malum..
Mo-girls to ek din mai muh fulla leti hai.nd tune to one month ..omg..now sun ...tu unke ghar ja than u do everything like tell first u ..which is in ur heart .nd she will got anger but u will understood ur love for her. ..wo bhut pyar karti hai ..der lagegi but manegi...bas apne dil ki sun aur usi ke according kar ..i knew that u didnt know anything about love..but ..dekhna aa jayga sab...
Nk-thanku yr..i was so tensed ..jo ho jjaye i will do it..but i have problem that i dont know wer is she..she is not attend my calls also...pls u call na to her ..i waana listen her voice. .
Mohit did a confress call to her but she didnt know. .but she said hlooo to mohit..
Mo-are aap kaisi hai kaha hai..apke ghar gya to band tha..nk se bat hui to ussne bola munhe kuch pata nhi..nd laugh..
Nk made face...tere jaise dost hote hai jo pyar ki wajaye natak karte hai .. 😡 ..
Ak-i m fine ..aap kaise hai..wo waha mera man nhi lag raha to mai maa shivu hum apne gao aa gye..vankeda..bas thodi si dur hai two hours. ..apko kuchh kam tha ..kya..
Mo-nhi esse hi nandini ne bola milne ko to ..bas..par aap aa jaiye phiir milte hai..
Ak-wo mai soch rahi thi ...shivu ko bhej du aur mai thode din aur ruk jau yaha..maa ke pass..
Nk made face..mohit laugh..
Mo-haha..rukiye na ..jab tak man kare nk ko to jhelne ki himat honi chhiye ...wo itna bura hai bas apni apni chinta..
Nk- 😡 😡 ..thought ye dost hai ya dusaman..
Mo-kuch aata to hai nhi..only brain use karna jo hai nhi pagal hai na...aap jab tak man kare rahe..i can understand that he is mantel. 🤣 itna muskil hai unke sath rehna ..
Now dis was so over for her..
Ak-mohit ji ..pls aap essa kyo bol rahe..i mean..wo bhut aach means intelligent hai thabhi to sare deasion kud hi leke man jan jate hai..
Mo-amm amm...nk felt so hpy but dis was tana also he can understood. .
Aacha to aap miss kar rehi usse hena ...
Ak-nhi...mai thik hu kush hu..aacha mai rakhti hu shivu bula raha hai..she cut d phone..
Mo-amm amm nk ji.i m sry teri itni burai ke liye but i want to see that unhe koi fark padega ya nhi..congrats yr...ja nd msna ..
Nk-gandha..bye...smile..
Mo-dust ..help ka bhi jamana nhi hai ab...
Now he is sleeping. .but unable...he cllosed eyes nd saw to her only...
Nk-oo god tum ...mai ja raha..mujhe nind nhi aa rahi..i m sry..wen ek din mai meri ye condition ho gai pata nhi ek month kaise manie tumhe but mai manuga..kuch bhi ho jaye ..i will do it..
In morning. ..he said to bye to all nd took permission for going village..
In car..he is listening songs nd smile. ..hindi song..swlly swllly their distance is getting decreased. ..
Now he reached in village ...nd asking adress...nd went near of her home...
She was working in outside ...wore patiyala nd kurti...nk saw to her from back..from mirror. .
Nk-ak..smile. ..meri ak...he opened d door came back of her..
Nk-ak..smile. .
She turned with surprised expression. ..saw to him..
Her heart beat is getting increased so much...nd nk also felt..
Nk-ak..
Ak)-...she was so shocked. .to see to him..
Now some voice came to her in present. .
Ddosttt..
More parts coming soon. .
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Nk saw to shivu...he came but turn back .in other side..
Nk-amm kya hua meri shvu ko haa...what happened. ..meri shivvu to best hai na..
Sh-hai but aap bure ho..mujhse bat bhi nhi ki..aur milne bhi nhi aaye..
Nk-because apki yad mai yaha aaya rehne...apke sath..
Sh-kya..waawww...gave hug..but phir bhi i m angry on u..
Nk-mai tumhari aur baki sab ki ssdness dur karne hi aai...saw to ak..who was so angry. .
Than dev saw to him..nd said jamai saa ..vry happily she said to nk passed smile nd touches her leg...nd thought that she didnt tell anything about dis incident. .
...she told to him to go in house. ..he went saw dis is so small house. ..like in gao..he placed in wooden table..
De-wo maf kariye jamai saa ye bhut choti jagah hai aur hum esse..koi bat nhi mai kal hi chair manguwagi ..
Nk-dont worry aunty i m fine...jab rehni hai to kaise bhi rahe..ak ke liye bhi to sab new thi but wen she accepts all to why i will not...
De-apka badpan..ak tu kya ja pani lana..
Ak went in anger but he passed smile. ..nd ...she came with big pital glass. .
Nk-oomg so big glass ...but he took nd his hand touches to her but she skkiped. .nd nk saw to her..who didnt see..
...nk-wo shivu aap kya kya ki itne din yaha..
Sh-bhut masti gaye ka dud ...maine bacho ke sath kub masti ki..apko pata hai yaha washroom nhi hai boys open nahate hai...sab girls dekh ke hasti hai pehle to bhut ajib lagta tha but ab mujhe bhut aacha lagta hai..
Nk-smile omg whats dis...even i didnt heard dis ...but it is so strange felling. .but i loved dis air...really..Smile. .
Dev-chal ak khadi kya hai jamai saa ke liye khana banana hai na...sam hone wali hai..hum aate hai..shivu was busy to play with nk...in outside. ..both r playing. ..than some girls admire to nk ..
Gi-kitne sundar hai babu ji...ekdom hero ke jaise ...mujhe dekhne do ..mujhe dekhne do...than ak came nd saw to nk nd shivu...made face...but saw to girl's who saw to nk...
Ak-shivu vry shout voice. ..both saw to ak...wo itni sam ko koi kelta hai kya..means chalo ander khana ban gya..nd ..aao..but didnt say to nk..
Sh-ye mamma itna ajib behave kyo kar rahi...hold his hand nd both went in home...now shivu sat on floor ..der was cloth. ..nk felt different. .
Sh-dost yaha esse hi khate hai baith jaiye...
Than in lill table ..ak put thali for both..
Nd gave veg to him...nd chapati dev put butter so much..
Nk-are amma pls ...dont ..
Ak nd dev felt hpy to listen amma..
Dev-aap mere bete ho to aachi sehat ke liye ..kub sara ghee khate hai..
Nk-dis is too much..no i dont waana loose my packs pls..
Shivu nd dev laugh...ak took back chapati nd gave less ghee of chaptai...he passed smile nd she saw ...than he show his hand to her nd she saw watch on his hand...nk smile...but she went...in kitchen. .
Now in nyt ...dev is doing setting for sleep...she is telling to ak for cleaning d room...d bed was so small only for two people. .even room was so small also...
Ak-ho gya..wo mai aur shivu yaha so jayge. ..unko koi problems nhi hogi..ma..
Dev-kaisi pagal hai...jamai saa tere liye aaye aur tu...tu waise bhi unse bat nhi kar pai hai ..ab shivu mere sth soyega aur tu yaha bs...
Ak-par maa wo..
Dev-kuch nhi sunna bas ..than nk came with shivu..in room...
Dev-chalo shivu hum so jate hai..
Sh-nhi mai dost ke sath hi souga...nk smile. ..
Nk-wo..shivu..aap..
Sh-nhi mai yahi souga..
Dev-par beta...mai aap chocolate dungi..phir..
Sh-nhi...
Nk-amma..pls ..itni bol rahi to its oki..
Dev-aap tino yhi so jaiye...ak tu niche gada dalke shivu ke sath yahi so ja..
Ak-par..
Dev-mai chalti hu..nd leave...nk ak felt something different. .she closed d door..
Shivu slept in aks lap..in between nk is trying to spicck but due to shivu he didnt tell ..ak is anger so much..
Now door ringing nd ak opened d door..dev is here to take to shivu..ak said its oki but ..dev took to him..
Now both r alone in room..
Ak turned ...nd nk came behind. .
Nk-ak...
More parts coming soon. .
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Nk-what happened tell..u saw na watch..u didnt understand ..pls..tell..somthing..esse chup mat raho..pls..
Ak is doing work..didnt tell any single word. .
Nk-dekho mai kitni bol rahi tum sun nhi rahi kyo...mujhe bhut buri lag rahi why u avoid to me..i m seeing to u..from nun..pls..
She is doing work. ..
Nk-i m sry for all ..mujhe nhi pata thi ye sab felling ke bare mai now i understood all things..i wil accept all now..tum sunti kyo nhi pls suno na..
He hold her hand..she felt his touch..nd closed her eyes...tears came from eyes...now she turned. .nd tears coming from her eyes...he came lill cclose nd wipe tears from tumb..
Nk-ab nhi roni ..bas..nd his hand sprinting on her hand..
But she throw his hand..
Ak-bas..dur rahiye mujhse..kyo mere pass aaye hai..mujhe aur rulane ke liye..in crying tone..
Nk-shocked. .but came near..nhi..mai apko manne..
Ak-kyo ..aaye hai..i m ok ..kyo wahi bat yad dila rahe jinhe bhul jana chahti hu..koi jarurat nhi hai hai manane ki...wo jisse apne bheja tha wo ab nhi hai yaha..
Nk-pls dont tell..mai tumse wo..
Ak-kya...kuch nhi pls...ek bar bol chuke hio dil tod chuke hai ab pls ..ye sab bato se ..
But suddenly he gave hug to her..she was so shocked. .with this..
Nk-i love u ak...i love u so much ...nd lost in his world...
Ak-she was surprised. ..nd camt believe. .but she was stood like a pillor..
Nk-now i will give u all happiness. .i m sry for all...pls i m sry ..i realise that how much i love u..
But she tried to free her body nd pushing away ..
Ak-dur raho mujhse...with red eyes...bas...mai kon hu ..ek kilona na..jisse jab chaha mang bhar di..kis bat ki saja de rahe hai mujhe aap...kyo mujhe itna rula rahe hai...apko pata bhi hai is ek mahina 15 din kaise cate..avoid haa..mukhse pucho ...apne to shadi kar li bas shivu ke liye..khabhi ye socha is ladki ka bhi dil hai..maine ek din bhi apko kuch bura bola nhi..
Nk-wo mai..
Ak-chup bilkul..aaj aap nhi mai bolugi sirf aur sirf mai..kyo mujhse itni pyare bate ki..kya maine dosti ko bola tha nhi..apne ki ..jane anjane dosti se aage bhi us rat aap bade mai nhi..maine kya galti ki bas pyar kiya ..hena..apne mujhse pucha bhi nhi bas raste alg kar diye...ab pata chala chupi kitna marti hai..aapko aada din barsat nhi hua...mera sochiye nk ..aap...essa koi din nhi tha jab mai darwaje ko nhi dekhti thi...sayad ek call aayga..mujhe samjhege..par nhi apne meri umid hi tod di..
Ab apka jo pyar tha wo in aansuo mai beh gya..ab sirf ek bina heart ki ak hai jiske pass koi pyar nhi kuch nhi hai..hat jodti hu pls ..mujhe kuch mat boliye..pyar ke liye bilkul nhi..jo mujhe samaj hi nhi sakta usse pyar krke mai kya karugi haa..
Nk-ccrying nd his heart was like understand that how much pain he gave to her ..not janbhuj ke but he gave nd felt he will so much love to her...
Wo mai ..nhi janta...jisse pyar kiya nhi khabhi kuch pata nhi wo kaise ..hold her hand..maine us din sochi ki ye sab galt hui hum dono ke bich..par now i will give u so much llove...nd came lill close. .
Ak-oo..ab mai samjhi aap kyo aaye hai..
Nk-matlb...
Ak-ye pyari pyari bate ..isi liye na..ruko...throw her duppta..lo aap mere sasir ko pa sakte hai par mere pass apko dene ke liye kuch nhi..
Now he was so shocked to see her like dis...
Nk-maine is tarike se tod di tumhe..nhi mujhe .ye sab..i love u bas yahi samjhani hai..
She sat on floor. ..mujhe nhi pata..mera brain pat jaiye aur kuch essa waisa karne ki kosish to mai jaugi nhi wapas..i hate u..aap mujhe manne ki kosish bhi mat kijiye..
He took duppta...nd warped arroud her..
Nk-mai tumhe bas hpy dekhna chahtu hu..i m sry for all
Ak-nhi..mere pyar koi pyar nhi...mafi nhi kuch nhi...nd went for sleep...nd wore blanket. ..nd crying. .
Nk-he also lying on bed...mai mana lungi..us time ko to bhar nhi sakti par mai ye dikhani hai ki kitni pyar hai mere dil mai ...ab hamri pyar ki journey suru hogi? ???
So guy's i m sry for late update. .pls press like button if u like this part nd gave sweet comments. .i will wait sry for mistake. ..enjoy..
Precap-rute rute yr ko tu pyar se mana le 😆
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read 1&2parts .Really very beautifully written with diff concept
.im confused who is writing dis ff ruch&pranu both haaa.Btw good work 👍🏼 .our forum has so many creative writers.Anyone of u should have been d creative of YR.Then we fan could have got nice tracks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: munna111

I read 1&2parts .Really very beautifully written with diff concept
.im confused who is writing dis ff ruch&pranu both haaa.Btw good work 👍🏼 .our forum has so many creative writers.Anyone of u should have been d creative of YR.Then we fan could have got nice tracks 😃

😃 tqq yaar 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: munna111

I read 1&2parts .Really very beautifully written with diff concept
.im confused who is writing dis ff ruch&pranu both haaa.Btw good work 👍🏼 .our forum has so many creative writers.Anyone of u should have been d creative of YR.Then we fan could have got nice tracks 😃


Aww thanku yr. ..yup so many writer is here ...who wrote so beautifully ff..os..
But pranu me both r writing this ff... 😊 mai to ready hu yr koi bulaye to sachi 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww puchi awesome update...
just 👏⭐️
i like each nd every bit mainly naksh talks...
wohhh
ak ki dard u wrote veryyy welll...
m proud of u...
super seee uparrr hain ur update...
xcellent nd xtraordinary part...👍🏼
tqq for updating so soon...
nd waiting for aage 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry ki par dadi ji... kya kar rahe hain aap?
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Posted: 9 years ago
congosss 99 pagesss finished to pritu 😃
Edited by --pranu-- - 9 years ago

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