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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-21
He was so worried. ..than she came in room..nd her hair was wet ...nd she stood in front of mirror. ..saw to nk ...nd smile. .
Nk saw to her...now he wore his shirt ...didnt see to her..
Ak-gud morning. .
Nk-gud morning. .
Ak-apka sir dukh raha ..rukiye mai apko...
Nk-wo ..mujhe kuch..
Ak-haa..than ak got call...maa ka hai.
Nd went in baloney. ..than nk thought she is vry upset. .
Nk-ye ise kya hui ..ye to bolegi nhi ..mujhe hi puchna padegi ..jau kya?
here ak was talking with dev...that hii nd al..
De-tu kush hai na ..
Ak-ji .maa..yaha aake mujhe pata chala ki nk kitne aache hai..
De-haa wo aache hai hamara ghar ..aa..
Ak-maa worried kya? ...hua
De-kuch nhi wo mera hath mai chot lag gai accident
Ak-kya?..kaise aap abhi bata rahi ..aap thik hai na..maa crying. .
De-tu ro kyo rahi hai ..mai thik hu ...
Ak-nhi..aap thik nhi hai..aap jhut bol rahi taki meri trip kharab na ho..
Than nk came near of door nd listen..
De-kaise buddhu ram hai...pata chal jata to kya wapas aa jati..
Ak-haa nhi rehna is trip mai...ise jayada hurt nhi hua mujhe aaj tak..sab galt hua..
Aap sab kuch samjhte nhi ..sab ek jaize hai...meri chinta hoti hi nhi kisi ko..
Kya hua ab...koi solutions hai nhi...bas hamesha situation ke hisab se mujhe hi jukna padega ..is bar bhi aap mujhe hi samjvayegi...nd yaha reh kar mujhe compromise karna hoga...
Nk listening all nd his heart borked ...nd so mu h guilt came on his face..he went inside in room..
Nk-how..kyo maine kal ak is marji ke kilaf use touch ki...i m sure ak is talking about me...now i will talk with her it should be must to ask all...
Here dv-kya tu kaha ki bat kaha leke ja rahi hai..
Ak-ab aapko mujhse pyar hi nhi...mai nk se bolugi...ki hum dono apko dekhne aayge bas ..mai to rukugi bhi..
De-haa aana par meri kushi isme hai ki meri beti apni chutti puri karne ke bad..aye ek to tum dono ki shadi esse hui ab ye bhut jaruri hai ek dusare ke sath jayada time bitao tum dono...sayad pyar ho jaye tum dono ko..
Ak-kya aap bhi...kuch bhi..
De-chal rakhti hu...jamai saa bolege ki meri patni ko yaha bhi chain nhi sab tang karte hai..
Ak-blushed kya aap bhi ...aapna khayal rakiyega...nd haa mai aate hi aaugi..nd cut d phone..
Now here nk was so upset nd thinking. .
Ak-smile...apka sir kaisa hai..
Nk-saw to her with anger...fine...howz mom..
Ak-aapko pata..she is fine now...mujhe na god kushi nd dukh sath mai dete hai...par jo bhi hai mai sab kuch face karugi kyoki ye dukh meri kushi se chota hai...maine socha ye khabhi nhi hoga but mili thats gud ..mai na soch liya ab kitni bhi problem aaye i m hpy ..smile so hpy..
Nk-saw to her...bas loudly...aur kitna jhut bologi haa..i know everything. .pls dont thought i m not understand. .
Kya dikhani hai that u r hpy..i saw u r crying reason me. ..sab galt ki na to bol do..
Ak-kya shocking. .
Nk-jo rat ko i did...i crossed all limits. .mujhe nhi pata thi ye kar dungi...but mujhe bhut buri lag rahi because i dont love u..
Ak heart breaking talks...kya..
Nk-haa...hamari shadi dosti everything is compromise for us.. mujhe pata hai tum sad ho ...mujhe bhut guilty hai ki maine tumhare sath wo ki jo galt thi. ..ye physical relationships sab galt thi..
Ak-crying. .mean to kal hua wo kyo..
Nk-sab because i was drunnk but tum rok sakti thi na but nhi ...bina pyar ke i dont love u...now ur way is ur nd mine is mine..nd leave in bathroom..
Ak is crying badly..
Ak-kam se kam meri bat to suni hoti ...kyo meri kushi aane se pehle hi chali jati hai...maine to dil ki bat batai but aap to yahi sochte hai ki sab galt nd went in floor..
Mujhe to pyar dikha par aapko nhi ...she holding her hair nd crying. .
Raste alg ...kyo ..ye hua...mujhse hi galti ho gai mai hu sabke bich fasne wali..
Her eyes becoming red ...now continue she is crying. .
Here nk was talking shower...
Nk-hit on wall...why ...ye kyu hui ...ab mai dur rahugi bas..mai aur hurt nhi karugi...bhut ho gai now ..
Haa ye thik rahegi..
She took step..but still her face was red nd like she cried so much..
She is doing lill work..
Nd nk came ...took his clothes nd leave..
Ak-she cried. ..kyo ..ye sab ..laying on bed nd crying. .
Maa..aap ...mujhe aana hai..
More parts coming soon. ..
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Now nk is talking in phone..
Nk-yes ticket conformed. ..thanku..
Ak-listen all...nk itna huk to hai na ki kya ticket ki bat kar rahe the..
Nk-haa...i waana talk ..that i have some urgent work to we will go today ...night ..pls pack ur all things..nd leave. .
Ak-she packed all things...nd both leaving for airport. .in plen..
Ak-aa...feeling pain in back..she was in seat to she got pain...but didnt tell to nk..aaa...bhut pain ho rahi ...
Now nk saw that some problem with her...he quickly closed AC ...still she was same..
Again nd again touched her back..
Nk-thought kahi ak ko back mai problems to nhi hui..he pressed button. ..nd airhostes came...he asked ..
Nk-i want pillow. .
Ak saw to him...why he asked. .
Air-no...i have no pillow. .
Nk-why ..i want in anger...samaj nhi aati mujhe chajiye bas..
Air-sir chill pls...we will try oki..
Nk-nhi...i want. .she is having problem. ..u cant see...pls ..give..
Ak-saw to him...but not love ...She can't understood what is hks problems what he want. .its oki ..i m fine ...plz i dont waana anything. .
Than one airhostes came nd said gave lill pillow. .nd she took back..
Nk-had hai koi kuch chahti nhi dena...i m sleeping. .
Ak saw to him..he was sleeping. .
Ak-aap kya chahte hai nk...lill cry but hide her tears. .she is taking her bags nd saw watch...tears came...apke liye li thi par ...bas ...wipe her tears...ab no rona ...mai strong hu na..
Nd slept...
Next morning. ...both reached in India. .
Nk didnt talk with herr...but care ...nd she also silent. ..nk informed to all ghat both will come so ...car was in airport. ..nd both going in home...
Ak wore saree ...nd all members r here in entrance. ..shivu also..
Ak touches foot of all..
Gy-howz u chinna...nd ak ...tumne to bhut care ki mere cinna ki...god bless u ..god kare tumhe itni kushi mile ki tumhare pass sadness aaye hi nhi. .
Both saw to each ...she tried to hide her tears. .
Shivu gave hug to ak. .
Holding both hand...
Sh-i lve u mamma...i missed u..next time mai bhi jauva...
Ak-she too gave hug ...crying. ..maine bhi bhut miss kiya apko...apke bina mera moi nhi beta...badly crying. ..like she was in so much in pain...everyone saw nk also...
Shivu feared. .
Sh-i m sry mamma...aapko bura laga...mai nhi jauga apko chodke ..pls aap roiye mat..mere karan sad ho aap..
Ak-nhi...bas ...bhut yad aai na...chalo...both went in room...
Now in night...she was busy in work ...nd gave all things..
All r here...rashmi nanu ...gy3 bm...
Everyone seeing gifts nd all...gy3 nd bma leave..
Ras-aap apna cell dekhaiye...saw nk ak pics nf tease...aap kitni cute lag rahi is dress mai hena ..
Na-haa..ak u r looking so pretty. ..nd ye mark hi sab bol raha hai..
Ak-di kya mark..
Ras-apke lips pe dekho...now its so dark...morning mai to bhut kam tha...nk came..
Ak-saw in mirror. ..wo meri galti hai...embarrassment. ..maine hi bite kar liya..
Na-ab chupao mat ..kyo nk hamari itni pyari si ak ko kyo tang kar rahe huh..
Nk-i want sleep...pls..
Na-ise kya hua..
Ras-amm...he want to spend some time with her...understood. .hum ja rahi..bye...tqq for gifts...nd both leave...but shivu came..
Sh-mai bhi souga...
Ak-aao beta...azj mamms apko bulane wali thi...i missed u so much..
Sh-dost aapko kya hua...aapne mujhe kuch bola hi nhi...aaj mai apko huggi karuga ...nd mamma ko bhi..
Nk-no shivu..bas travel hui na...aap kaise ho...aao..he sat on his lap..now nk is talking with her...nd she saw he was lill hpy with him..
Ak came nd laying. .
Ak-aao beta...
Shivu gave hug to her...she gave so tight hug to shivu...nd saw to nk..who saw to her only..
But cant meet eyes. ..nd turned. ..
Ak tears came ...but she is hiding hher pain...here nk is also unable in sleep..
But after sometimes he sleep ..
Shivu came near to nk ...nd hug...climbing on him...turned other side...
Here ak was in sleep so think nk is shivu..
She holding his shirt nd gave hug...he too gave hug...
Nd both sleeping peacefully. .in each others arms. .
More parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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In morning -
Both was peacefully sleeping. ..nk ak wokeup at d same time. .nd both saw to each..
ak forgot everything nd gave smile. ..nk also..but shivu distrubed. ..nd nk said sry nd leave. .
Ak saw nd felt really bad. ..shivu saw nd hug to her..
Sh-gud mng mamma...i love u...
Ak-i love u too..
Nd shivu gripping vry tightly to her...she shouted lill. .aa..
Sh-kya hua mamma...i m sry mai bhut bura hu na ...apko bhut jor se huggi ki na..
Ak-nhi ..aap mere sweet bache ho...
Sh-mai kal udar chala gya...aap gussa to nhi..
Ak-nhi...chalo sabke pair chu ke aao..
Sh-haa..kissed nd went..
Ak crying nd saw Mark in her shoulder. ..nd crying. .
Ak-kyo inhe bhi mita nhi dete nk..pls jaise bat karna band kar diya ab ye bhi mita do..mai hi kyo..
Crying. .but now she got ready nd went in hull...all r having break fast. .
Dj-ak u enjoyed na...chinna i will give work to u ...pls do all..
Nk-ji...
Gy-chinna food...
Nk-give me food na amma...i waana eat with ur hand ...pls..
Gy-oki...nd he ate from her...nd said bye to gy3 only..
Gy-ye bhi na jaldi..ak ko bhi bol deta..
Now in nun gy3 came near to her..
Gy-ak..thanks. .
Ak-kis liye amma..
Gy-i know u care for chinna better than me...ye prove ki tumne...mujhe proud hai tumpe..thats u r my granddaughter. .
Ak-amma...hug to her..lucky to mai hu..aap jaise maa mili..
Gy-tum kush ho na..chinna ko jab kuch samaj nhi aata wo chup ho jata hai kuch bolta nhi..ho sakta hai ye problems tumhare sath bhi aaye...samal lena ha..
Ak-ji..
Gy-mai chalti hu...mujhe taiyari karni hai..rat ho gai..wo kal 16 days ho jaygi..but someone gave call to her..she leave. .
Now in night ...ak is waiting for nk...now she went in room...to take something. .
Saw from upstairs he came...she is running but saw to gy3 ..she asked from him..about dinner. .he said he had dinner..ak felt again so bad..
Gy-ak is waiting. ..
Nk-haa wo clients ke sath kani padi...amma aaj mai library room mai sougi..kuch work..shivu ak ko distrubed nhi karni tell to her..
Gy3 went in room nd said. .
ak closed d door..
Hug to shivu. .
Nd thought. ..so much...here nk was also unable. .
Ak-apne to mujhse kuch pucha hi nhi...kitna dur kar diya..itna pass lake..
nk-mai kya bolu..i can't understood. ..kya karu mai...sayad meri dur rehna hi ..sab thik karega..
In morning. ..
He went in room. .saw his all things was arrenged clothes watch nd all..
In table also ...she sat all for him..but didn't talk..
now he is searching wer is she...all came in table. ..ak also..he saw nd felt relax ..
She didn't talk..
All went. ..nd gy3 said to ak..
Gy-ak tomorrow get ready fast . ..because tomorrow we have puja..
Ak-ji par kaise puja..
Gy-i will told from u tomorrow. .oki. 16 days puja..called..
Ak-ji..
Now in morning. .ak wokeup nd got ready for puja...all ladies is here...ak nd gy3 sat on puja...now gy3 took her yellow mangalstra nd took back...but gave gold chain in yellow thread...which was pavitra ...nd ak will wore lifetime..she touches foot of all ladies nd all gave blassing to her...

In night ...
She arranged her bed in floor.due to anger ..shivu nk was confused. .why she is doing all. .
Nk-shivu...tell to ur mom...bed mai soyegi..
Sh-mamma...aap upar kyo nhi so rahi..
Ak-because mujhe niche sona hai ..aap so jao phir subah bat karte hai...
Sh-mai bhi apke sath souga..
Ak-nhi aap upar so jao pls..meri bat man lo...jid mat karo..
Sh-ji mamma...nk saw to her...but she slept. .
in morning. ..she wokeup nd got ready for ..
Saw to dev nd hpy...
Ak-mom...aap..hug to her..kaise ho mai aane wali thi..
Dev-par mai aa gai na..
Ak-puja..amma..
Gy-haa..i told na .tumhari shadi ko 16 days ho gai..now aashada maasam dis is not gud for new bride so pls packed ur things..in our customs u will stay in mayka..new bride apne mayke mai two month rehti hai...to i called to dev..
Ak-ye ..
Dev-isi bahane hum sath reh lenge thode din...chalo mai tumhe lene aai hu..
Ak-gave hug to her nd said. ..haa mujhe bhi jana hai apke pass maa...amma mai ..
Gy-jao...dont worry i asked from dj nd alll...no one will tell anything
Shivu listen all nd said i will also go..
Both r doing packing. .
Nk wokeup nd saw she is doing packing. .
He didn't understood. .went near gy3. ..she told about it
No options. ...
She is packed but saw watch. .
Thought...now she wrote something in latter..nd put it on cupboard nd wTch also...
Now in hull..
She is taking blessings. ..nd saw to nk..
She is going expected that nk will tell something. .
He saw she crossed? ???
So guys dis is next part pls press like button if u like this part nd gave sweet comments. ..i will wait sry for mistake. .
Precap-nk thoughts about ak..nd her pain..
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aise hi jldi jldi ff update krti rha kro Ruchi good
Nk bholuram kab smjhoge
Dono dukhi hai
She cried so much
Both care so much for each other and that's most lovable thing
Night hug was nice
Aww she waited and he already had dinner
But their distance is also a treat for me to watch.
Ajj to ak ka dialogue yad aa gya kabhi kabhi paas ane k liye dur jna bhi zruri hota hai to which nk replies dur jne ke kya zrurat hai jaha khade h wahi se ek kadam aage aa jate haihai 😉
Continue soon
Edited by Nairaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyccc part Ruchi dear well done...I hope jald hi naitik akshara ko I love u bole poorer sense mein...all parts are very niceee plz cont next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh

Nyccc part Ruchi dear well done...I hope jald hi naitik akshara ko I love u bole poorer sense mein...all parts are very niceee plz cont next part soon


Tqq so much sameera for liking this part nd gave sweet comments. ..i did next part read this. Yup tumhari mange puri hongi 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
so sweet part sweetu
tqq for superfst update...
nk ki dil tooti and ak ka bhi due to mu
still he cares foe her aww
shivu nd nk care for ak is good
but hugging scene omg heheh
nk avoiding ak and she hurt awww
but waiting for aage jaha nk will realise his true feelings
ddor hone se log aur pass aajate hain na
do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

so sweet part sweetu

tqq for superfst update...
nk ki dil tooti and ak ka bhi due to mu
still he cares foe her aww
shivu nd nk care for ak is good
but hugging scene omg heheh
nk avoiding ak and she hurt awww
but waiting for aage jaha nk will realise his true feelings
ddor hone se log aur pass aajate hain na
do update soon


Awww forcu i did fast..
Tqq tqqq tqq so much for suparfast comments loved it...love u..
Haa both r caring but new new love hai na ..dekhna sure u will like aage ki story ...aww m so hpy u liked it..yup duriya milne ko badawa deti hai..
I will do update next part soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow ruchi nice updates.. naitik ki jealousy ... he become talli and says everything that nice.. now I hope ki naksh ki dooriya jaldi khatm ho and naitik ko ehsas ho ki he loves akshara waiting for next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

wow ruchi nice updates.. naitik ki jealousy ... he become talli and says everything that nice.. now I hope ki naksh ki dooriya jaldi khatm ho and naitik ko ehsas ho ki he loves aksharawaiting for next part..


aww thanku so much misri for reading all parts nd gave sweet comments. ..u like na how sweet i will do update next part soon 😊

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