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Nairaksh

@Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Yeah I know but khud ko trouble kr k frens ko happy krna even friends don't like this na..

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: Nairaksh
Yeah I know but khud ko trouble kr k frens ko happy krna even friends don't like this na..

yup...

she took kal poori din rest...

now she is fit and fine totally...

busy in rakhi celebs...

r u having bro????😊

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Nairaksh

@Nairaksh

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: --pranu--

yup...
she took kal poori din rest...
now she is fit and fine totally...
busy in rakhi celebs...
r u having bro????😊

Of course, one elder bro and two cousins and my dad for rakhi

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Of course, one elder bro and two cousins and my dad for rakhi

r u well prepared for rakhi?

and gifts????? 😃

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

ak:yes nk hum issi pe jaayengi apni date pe spl wali...

nk:cycle pe?????? 😲

ak:yesss

nk:nahii plss isme nahi aur u know mujhe cycle chalaana aata bhi nahi...

ak:kya?? cycle chalaana aati nahi

nk:haa plss na hum iss bike pe hi chalthe hain

ak:no ways...

and waise bhi ye date akshu ki style mein hain na tho hum issi mein jaayengi...

mujhe nahi pata tha meri bandar ko cycle chalaana nahi aata...

and 😆

nk:tho isme kounsi badi baat hain????

nahi aatitho nahi aati...

waise cycle bohot boring hain..

bohot mehnat karna padega isse chalaane mein...

ak:just wait and watch meri bandar ki cycle pe sawaari karna kitna maze ki baat hain

aaj tumhari akshu tumhe dikhayegi...

nk:ok meri maa chale ab...

warna iss pe jaate jaate hi raat hojaayega

ak:tension math lo wen akshu is here... chalo

nk:par hum jaa kaha rahe hain...

ak:shhh kitni sawaal poochthe ho ab baitho chup chaap...

nk:akshu r u sure na????

mujhe giraaogi tho nahi

ak gives a glare look tho nk sits on cycle and ak strts cycle...

ak was so much njoying but nk was so scared like in serial...

ak:agar darr lagi tho mujhe kass ke pakdo...

nk:tightly grips on her waist...

ak felt something wid his touch...

but after sometime both strted njoying the ride...

she stops near a big mall...

ak:nk hum isme chalengi aur shopping karengi...

nk aapjakae iss cycle ko parkkarke aayiye mein aapka yahiwait karungi...

nk goes the watchmen sees nk with cycle and smiles at him..

nk feels awkward but doesnt say anything and leave...

here nk comes near ak...

ak catches his hand like couple catch...

he was lostin her shopping world...

she took nk to allshops...

firstly she was feeling hungry...

tho both went in subway and ate hot dog and pizza by sharing it...

after eating a little sauce was spread near akshus lips...

nk caught the moment and look here and there...

wen no one is looking at dem..

nk :akshu..

ak:haaa

he licked the sauce with his tounge akshu was embrassed as nk did it in public place..

ak:kya hain ye???

nk:meri share

naksh 😆

they go further into mall

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

then they go into mens shop..

akshu selects so many dresses for nk and asks him to try dem...

they r so trendy and modern and nk never wore dem...

nk:akshu u know i dont wear such type of dresses...

ak:haa i know try karo ab...

meine tere liye teri pasand gagra pehn sakti tho tum kyun nahi...

nk knews its impossible to win akshu..

and tries all dresses...

after trying nk too likes dem so they buysome trendy dresses which suited on nk...

after dat they go in girls shop...

both together selects some indian western dresses...

ak goes to try dem...

nk saw a beautiful saree so he took it and went near akshus trial room...

wen he was about to call ak...

he saw ak mom and rr mom ciming in same side...

nk gets tensed and doesnt understand where to hide...

nk:agar sab hume yaha dekhli tho???

suddenly ak opens the door thohe too gets into the trail room with force...

it was a small one so due to force naksh gets pinned to wall...

ak:nk ye kya hain????

nk shuts ak mouth wid hand..

he sees from hole after a while and sees that they left..

he takes hand from her mouth...

nk:sry

woh ur mom and all r outside iwas tensed and in dat pata nahi kya karu and i did dis so sryyy...

he was in his own world...

when suddenly he realise ak was wearing a mini skirt looking really hot

he was lost in her and admiring her beauty..

ak feels shy with his staring ..

ak:nk ye tum kya dekh rahi ho in tender voice

nk:--

she look straight into his eyes which were already lost in her beauty..

she too got lost in his beauty...

nk couldnt stop him...

so he passionately kissed on ak bare shoulder...

ak too felt him and pulled him towards her ...

even they dont know as within a fraction of seconds both strted kissing each other lips...

no one was ready to leave..

after a long competitive kiss naksh kiss got a break due to a knock on the door...

they came in reality...

and soon came out of trail room..

they did lots of shopping...

after lots of fun..

naksh were walking on road side...

wen ak found ic cream

ak:nk ice cream??????

nk:ok u wait here i will bring

nk brought an ice cream

ak:tumhari kaha hain????

nk:kya hum donon keliye ek kaafi nahi hain

ak blushed

nk:baad mein sharmaayoye abhi filaal eat icecream warna ye melt hojaayega...

they both strt eating ice cream wen ak pulls it from nks hand and bhagofy...

nk too runs behing her and catches her both fell in park area which they came to njoy...

all ice cream gets ruined naksh looks at each other and strt 😆

nkbrings another one and both eat it..

they njoy there resting their head on one another...

later ak takes nk to her real world...

ek orphanage jaha pe akshu kar hafthe aati hain...

nk:ak yaha???

ak:haa aayiye aap meri bhi duniya dekhni hain na...

she took him inside...

where all kids becamse excited seeing akshu...

both came in and gave all gifts tothem which she shopped fordem

nk remembers his words when in mall he asks akshu as y she is wastingso much money on unnecessary thing for which aksshu just smiled

in present akshu was lost with kids and playing like a kid...

there were many kids some disabled and some having health issues...

nk was lost in akshu innocence..

when father came near nk

fr:hii beta..

nk:namastey father

fr:aap ak ka????

nk:frnd

fr:ooh may god bless u both

nk smiles and asks ak yaha kab se????

fr:akshu yaha har sunday aatihain

bohot acchi bacchi hain aur bohot pyaari bhi hain

par thodi sharaarthi hain

woh yaha ki bacchon ki har zaroorat poori karthi hain...

aur sabse zyaada she has no ego ...

bohot lucky hain uski hone wali hubby...

nk was touched with this side of akshu...

he always thought ak bacchi hain bachpanaa hain usme...

par aaj akshu ka ye side dekhke nk garv mehsoos kar raha hain ki ak uski hone wali better half hain...

he was just smiling looking at her wen akshu came near him and keechofy him to play...

both enjoy playing wid kids...

later they leave...

so frnds this is next update of ruchis ff...

as her hand is not well i continued the part..

hope u will njoy dis part...

plss press like button and give ur reviews...

spl note plss read the strting part on page 76...'

precap:naksh ki midnight chai on roads of udaipur...

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

NEW PART UPDATE ON PAGE 76-77

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

very good part...
naksh ki outing was superb.. their masti in mall and with ice cream was nice... then akshu ka bachho ke sath khelna and naitik ka proud feel karna is superb
precap is also too good

Edited by Pragati-naksh - 10 years ago

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Nairaksh

@Nairaksh

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Too good Ruchu, pranu
Cycle day out was also nice and trial room romance, ice cream scene everything was just too good
Specially the last part orphanage scene really touched me .
But nk feels proud of his would be better half? ?
Abhi to usske chances kam hai rr aur rj ke karn
Pr Hero aur heroin ke milan ke bina story puri kaise hogi...

Edited by Nairaksh - 10 years ago

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
very good part...
naksh ki outing was superb.. their masti in mall and with ice cream was nice... then akshu ka bachho ke sath khelna and naitik ka proud feel karna is superb
precap is also too good

tqqq sooo muchhh bakki 😃

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