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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: avinaksh
nice part ruchi... specially the classroom scene 😳 and defending each other! ! hope they realise their feelings soon 😊

Thanku avi baby for liking this part ..always waiting for ur comments. .dear...definitely they realise in next part dear😳

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part-15

Both r lost in each other than in reality varsa akshra akshra ..both came in reality natik put his hand on her hand nd sit in chair lost In their eyes yes no kiss its dream😆 they broke their eyelock

Na-akshi wo sab ho gaya 😆sry maine jo kiya abhi uske liye

Ak-kya I m sry natik jo maine kiya wo galt

Var-kya kiya kuch nahi ek dusare ka hat pakad k baithe ho pata nahi kaha khoye hue ho

Both-kya😲

Both-sad matlab kuch bhi nahi 😆

Var-kuch karne ka irada ho to mai jau but yaha nahi kahi dusari jagah kisi ne dekh liya to

Ak-chup kar essa vaisa kuch nahi hai hum bas act kar rahe the kyo natik

Na-confused haa haa

Ak-mai aatu hu tu chal to mere sath

Var-kaha bye natik

Na-bye par akshi esse nd smile akshi felt so shy so she leave

Seneha saw both of in corner nd make cry face

Na-ye kya ho gaya hai kyu mai akshi k itna pass jana chahta hu mai mohit se puchta hu

Here akshi to varsa

Ak-ye natik ke samne kya bakwas kar rahi thi tu bichara aur mere bare mai kya soch raha hoga waise bhi is dream ne meri halat kharab kar di hai

Va-tum dono ko dekh k saf pata chalta hai kitne bechen ho dono kya dreams ha

Ak-told everything about dreams ..pata h abhi to maine use kiss kartehue socha she told continuous so this thing also said

Var-laugh kya itna sab ho gaya 😆ab bata rahi hai mujhe tu tujhe pyar ho gaya hai

Ak-kya shocked nahi nahi essa kaise shy

Va-dekh jab tu usee dekhti hai to pyar aata hai use koi kuch bolta hai gussa aata hai aur to aur har jagah wo hi dikhta hai ye love hai nd smile

Ak-vry shy kya varsa nd gave smile nd hug to varsa

Va-ja bol de usee

Ak-par kaise wo kya sochega mai kaise bolugi mujhe saram aaygi bhut

Va-to wait kar uska wo kya bolega

Ak-nahi agar usne kuch bola nahi to nahi nahi mai bolti hu kya karu natik tum kya sochte ho

Here natik went to mohit

Na-mohit mujhe tujhe kuch batana hai wo mai akshi wo

Mo-ate samosa in cantin nd said pyar karta hai aur kya

Na-waaw mohit ye mai bolne ja raha aur tune bol diya par tujhe kaise pata

Mo-sale jab se wo mili haibas akshu akshu hamare liye to5 minute ka time nahi

Na-kya yr sry na mujhe kuch bata na

Mo-kya batau

Na-yr usse kaise batau

Mo-propse karke sayad

Na-par wo bura man gai to

Mo-nahi manegi par yr ek gana yad aa raha hai

Na-manega to hai nahi suna hi de bakwas

Mo-mere dost k liye hum nahi tere dusmno mai kyo hamko diwana banaya banaya kyo hamko diwana banaya hum to hai tere dosto mai kyo akshi ne tera dil churaya churaya ..waah waah ek dost ki sabse badi chori

Na-smile tu bhi na pagal hai bilkul mai kab batau

Mo-dekh parso clg mai big party hai uske agle din bata de smile mai chahta hu dost wo teri life mai jaldi se jaldi aa jaye

Na-haa tu thik bol raha hai nd gave hugg yee

Vry hpy

Mo-ye pagal ho gaya

Here akshi

Ak-tu thik bol rahi hai is party k bad mai natik se sab kuch bol dungi next day clg mai

Va-gud

Ak-mai natik ka fav pink color ki saree pehen k party mai jaugi

Here natik-mai perpole color ki jekect pehnuga akshi ko bhut pasand hai ...

Ak-mai chalti hu varsa

Na-mai chalta hu mohit byee

Than both leave but in gate both saw each other

Na-smile bye akshi

Ak-byee than akshi dupata suddenly udofy on natik face

Na-are ye phir se

Ak-went near to natik nd swly swly took her duppata ye bar bar tumhare face par

Na-koi bat nahi ab to mera hak ho gaya hai is par

Ak-to listen this her heart beat happens so fast nd said bye to natik she went on auto

Na-bye wo din kab aayega jab sari chizo ka huk mujhe mil jayga akshi

Here akshi sit on sit of auto

Ak-mai to humhe sab huk dena chahti hu natik aur sare huk pana bhi chahti hu par bhut jald hum ek dusare ka hak aur love sab pa lenge

Than rain coming suddenly. .

More parts coming soon. ..

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Ak-are bhaiya ye bharish

Men-medam lagta hai aaj bagwan bhut kush hai

Ak-haa aur mai bhi waaw barish she took her hand on out of auto nd water falls swlly swlly on her hand she felt this sudden auto stop she is still in dream than she swlly swlly take her face on rain water falls on her face she colse her eyes nd felt this sudden some cheeks touches to her nd said akshi

Ak-open eyes natik

Na-in dream bahar aao na pls

Ak-par nd swlly swlly she leave auto nd went in barish open her hand

Here natik stop car saw rain than he saw akshi sit next to him

Ak-bahar nahi aaoge

Na-par tum yaha aachanak nd he also took akshi hand nd went in barish

He open his both hand nd surround on gol cercole ...nd louldy said akshiii

Here akshi also said natikkk

Than music played la la la la uth rahi hai koi halchal kul raha hai sara aalam gul rahi hai sanso mai (both saw on same time dream)ansuni si ek tarumang stop mujhe

Both saw dream same time in dream

Akshi stoodup nd natik took akshi hand on his hand swlly swlly he put his hand on akshis waiste nd pull vry close again (ek ajnabi ne ye kya kar diya ehsas dil mai ye kya bhar diya) akshi breath heavy touches to natik she close her eyes her face is upar so water falls on her face natik saw her Nd swlly come so close than he put his hand on akshi face nd moves his hand ...he touch her eyes than nose than cheeks nd lips ..she breath heavy

Ak-natikkk with huskey voice

Na-moves his hands on akshi tummy akshi wore saree so her hands moves on her shoulder

Na said-ssshhh in low voice nd smile come so close just little gap in both of them her lipe shivering natik put swly

his leap on her lipe nd moves swly but her breath touches him so he doesnot control to himself nd moves her lips so much like he is so hungry ...

In reality both saw same dream nd smile sab aankho k samne dono ek dusre k future ko dekh rahe ho than akshi ka ruthna than natik ka manna akshi ka natik ko chaye dena natik ki sarart saw both of them infront of their eyes

Ak-kya hamari life itni aachi aur pyari hogi

Na-haa akshi hamari life bhut pyari hogi

Ak-mai tumhe bhut pyar karugi hamari kushiya ek dusare se hi chalu hogi aur katam bhi ek dusare par

Na-mai pyar ko khabhi khone nahi dunga bhut sara pyar dunga tumhe hamari life bhut sundar hogi

Ak-iii love u natikkk loud voice

Na-iii loveee uuu akshiii so ooo muchhh

Nd both dance on road eyeryone saw themnd laugh but they r in their dreams hpyy so hpyy this is love they r falling in love

But natik stoodup in road nd little car light put his face ?????????

Precap-what happened

So gys I dont know I m gud or not but jo I felt I wrote pls give ur views that u r liking this part or not .agar u like to press like button nd give comment ..I m waiting ...

Sry for mistakes

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
jaldi likho babes..

U tooo darling...😆😆

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: --pranu--

U tooo darling...😆😆

Ye wala I will write tomorrow ...hote hote pyar ho gaya wala I write now..

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

U said u will update by afternoon???

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Omg pichi sab ka popatiya hi popatiya ki 😡

sab kuch dreams dreams hain aaj..

ab mujhe bhi nahi pata shayad mein dreams mein comment kar rahi hoon hehehehhe...

nice part finally naksh ko hua pyaar ka ehsaas...

Mr.india jaise precap???

Update soon...

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

awesome part ruchi
par hamara popat kar diya..its ok
full on naksh part..love it
par pls jaldi se wo ek doosre ko propose kar de..
naitik ka accident mat karwana pls
ur starts **** / 5

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Omg pichi sab ka popatiya hi popatiya ki 😡
sab kuch dreams dreams hain aaj..
ab mujhe bhi nahi pata shayad mein dreams mein comment kar rahi hoon hehehehhe...
nice part finally naksh ko hua pyaar ka ehsaas...
Mr.india jaise precap???
Update soon...

🤣Popat 😆maja aa gaya 😆 thanku for liking this part 😃dreams reality bhi hogi soon than u give comment in reality😃yr dont know precap sun k aage padoge ya nahi😲😲

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
awesome part ruchi
par hamara popat kar diya..its ok
full on naksh part..love it
par pls jaldi se wo ek doosre ko propose kar de..
naitik ka accident mat karwana pls
ur starts **** / 5

Thanku sonal for liking this part😃papat😆yup I will do update next part soon sonal..

Yaieee mere star bad rahe hai 👏⭐️