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varsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: rainanaksh
aree tum pink ke aage wali ho na..

ha tum pink ke age wali ho sona

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varsha

@CuRlyTalEs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

dessert time

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cutebharti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

A big congratulation to u raina and ty for mentioning me as I am not so active in forum.update soon

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: cutebharti
A big congratulation to u raina and ty for mentioning me as I am not so active in forum.update soon

my pleasure dear..

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ----varsha05---
dessert time

who are u ?
where is my varshanakshiran..?

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varsha

@CuRlyTalEs

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

tere paas hi ho meri raina

only just varsha😆

tu kaha pe hai meri miss raina

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ----varsha05---
tere paas hi ho meri raina
only just varsha😆
tu kaha pe hai meri miss raina

abhi ghar par aayi hu..

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varsha

@CuRlyTalEs

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

now cocktail party

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

PART 20...

akshara quickly came and hugged her friend...

ak- wow what a surprise rituraj...tum yaha..

rr- wo sab kuch bataunga akshara pehle mujhe tum apne dosto se toh milwao..

ak- ohh ha bhool gayi...

she take him near the gang by holding his hand..

ak- rituraj...ye hai meri best friend varsha..

rr- hi varsha...

vr-hello ! ( she gave him a sweet smile )

ak- ye hai samar...

rr- hi samar...

sam- hi...

ak- ye hai...mohit..

rr- hi buddy...chotu

mo- what do u mean by chotu...meri hight itni bhi kam nahi hai...

rr- sorry yaar..

ak- sorry mohit ye rituraj na bilkul pagal hai... kuch bhi bol deta hai...

mo- its ok akshara...

ak- aur ye hai naitik...

rr- hi naitik...

ak- naitik ye mera dost...

cuts in between

nk- sabse accha dost hai...right

ak-hmmm...

naititk gave a big fake smile...

kaki- beta agar tum sab ek doosre se mil liye ho...toh chalo khana kha lete hai...

rr- ha kaki par pehle ye toh bataiye..ki hamare dulhe raja aur kaka kaha hai...

kaki- beta wo dono jaipur gaye hue hai...kal parso tak aa jayenge...

rr-iska matlab dulte se pehle hi barati tapak pade...

ak-accha theek hai ab mere bhai ka koi mazak nahi...

vr-ha akshara chal...mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai...

and all came together on dinning table...

akshara quickly came and sat beside naitik...and rr beside akshara...

all start eating thier food...

but naitik is not interested there...so akshara notice it..

ak-naitik kuch khao na..kabse baithe hue ho...

nk-nahi mera mann nahi hai..tum sab khao..

ak-pls naitik kuch toh khao..

vr-ha naitik subah se tumne kuch nahi khaya hai...

rr-jane do naa uska mann nahi hai..toh phir kyu peeche padi ho...akshara tum apna khana khao..dekho naa apna kya haal bana liya hai...lagta hai tumhare naye dost tumhara bilkul dhyaan nahi rakhte...

nk- ha shayad lekin ab tumhare purane dost wapas aa gaye hai..toh tumhara acche se khayal rakhenge...

naitik angrily went from there...

rr to akshara- aise dost hai tumhare jo zara sa mazak bhi bardast nahi kar sakte..

ak-tum bhi na rituraj...naraaz kar diya naitik ko...

she too take her food and went behind naitik...

varsha is very happy to akshara taking side of naitik...

naitik is sitting quitely in the hall..and akshara came there with food...

ak-naitik ye kya hai ?

nk-matlab...

ak-matlab tum waha se kyu chale aaye ?

nk- akshara...mai

ak-janti hu...rituraj aisa hi hai naitik...wo bina soche samjhe kisi ko bhi kuch bhi keh deta hai...mai bachpan se use jaanti hu...

nk-haa par mai aisa hu...

ak-ye bhi mai janti hu...

nk-nahi tum nahi samajhti..

ak-ab ye hamari problem nahi hai ki mai tumhe bachpan me nahi mili...par itne dino me mai tumhe riruraaj se zyada samajhne lagi hu...

a big smile came on naitik' s face..

nk-sacchi...

ak=mucchi...

and start lauging on this...

ak-accha ab toh kuch kha lo...

nk-par akshara mujhe ye rajasthani khana accha nahi lagta..

ak-bina khaye kasise pata chalega...

and she put one peice in his mouth...

nk-wow yaar..ye toh sach me bahut accha hai...

ak-haa..kaki bahut accha khana banati hai..

nk-aur tum ?

ak-wo toh tumhe baad me pata chal jayega..

nk-aur wo baad me kab ayyega ?

ak-jab tumhari aur meri...stops...??? i mean...kuch nahi...accha tum khana khao..mai aati hu...

AFTER DINNER..

all started to decide their room...

kaki- aisa karte hai ki...ye dono ladkiya toh ek room me reh lengi...aur tum chaaro ke liye...?

ak-mai batati hu kaki... aisa karte hai ki samar aur mohit ek room me ho jayege aur naitik aur rituraj ek room me...

nk-nahi mai mohit ke saath reh loonga..

ak-ok...chalo mai tumhe room dikha du...

mo-akshara mujhe room pata hai...

varsha starts launghing...

ak-varsha...

and all came in thier rooms...

akshara and varsha...

ak-tu pagal ho gayi thi kya aise kyu hasi sabke saamne...?

vr-tera plan jo flop ho gaya tha...

ak-plan..kaisa plan ?.. maine koi plan nahi banaya tha...

vr-accha..naitik ko good nite kehne ke liye use jo room tak company dene wali thi...wo kya tha ?

ak-hmmm...par mohit ne uska popat kar diya...

here naitik mohit...

mo-bechari akshara...

nk- bechaari kyu ?

mo- tujhe uspar bilkul taras nahi aata kya ?

nk- kyu ab aisa kya ho gaya ?...jo mai uspar daya karu ?

mo-wo tujhe room tak company dene wali thi..par maine uska popat kar diya...

nk-ohhh...!

mo-ha yaar mujhe ab uske liye bahut bura lag raha hai...

nk-mujhe bhi..

mo-aaaiii...tujhe kyu lag raha hai...,mere dost..

nk-jo tune use yaha tak nahi aane diya...isliye

mo-hey bhawaan...mere buddhu ram..mai toh isliye ker raha hu...kyunki uski life kitni complicated hai..

nk-complicated wo kaise ?

mo-dekh jise rituraj jaisa dost mile..aur tere jaisa diwaana...uski life toh complicated hi hogi naa..

nk-ek minute ek minute...kya kaha tune..mera jaisa kya ?
mo-diwaaana...

nk-tu kya bakwaas kar raha hai ? zara mujhe samjhayega...

mo-kyu tu akshara ko like nahi karta ?

nk-maine aisa kab kaha ki mai akshara ko like karta hu...

mo-aree yaar par kuch toh feelings hongi naaa..

nk-what rubbish yaar...wo meri ek acchi dost hai...aur kuch nahi...

mo-accha sirf ek dost..

nk-hmmm...

mo-toh phir wo sab kya tha...use beach par bachana...phir yaha tak uske liye aana..aur abhi rituraj par gusaa karna..

nk-maine wo sab ek dost hone ke naate kiya hai bas...aur ha ab tu ye bakwaas band kar...mujhe neend aa rahi hai...good nite

mo to himslf...kya yaar naitik ek ladka hone naate teri dil ki baat mujhe samajh me aa gayi...toh akshara toh pakkka ye samajhne lagi hogi..ki usse pyaar karta hai...

here rituraj and samar...

rr-ye tumhara dost aisa hi hai kya ?

sam-kaun naitik..

rr-hmmm...

sam-nahi yaar wo toh bahut accha hai..

rr-par mujhe nahi lagta..

sam-mai uske baare me zyada toh nahi jaanta..par jitna bhi janta hu...he is very good frind..

rr-aur akshara ke saath..

sam-use bhi apna dost hi maanta hai..

rr-okkk...good nite..

sam-good nite...

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

NEXT DAY IN THE MORNING...

akshara came i and kocking at the door...rr open the door...

ak-ye lo rr ye tumhara dhoti kurta..aur ye samar kaa..jaldi se pehen ke neeche pooja me aa jao..

rr-abhi aata hu...

and then she came and knocking at the next door...mohit opened the door..

ak-ye lijiye mohit ji..apka aur naitik ka dhoti kurta...pehen ke jaldi se neeche aa jao..

mo-par kyu ?

ak-kyunki aaj ghar me pooja hai..isliye..

mo-par naitik toh so raha hai..abhi jaga deta hu...

ak-nahi nahi rehne do mohit...abhi use sone do...jab uska mann kare toh uthne dena...ok

mo( smiles)..ok nahi jagaunga uss khadoos ko...mai abhi ready hokar aata hu..

after some time...all boys and varsha too came in the aangan for pooja...except naitik and akshara...

kaki-ye akshara kaha reh gayi...?

vr-aunty wo aa rahi hogi...

when akshara came down...wearing a beautiful red coloured saree...

rr-wow akshara tum bahut khoobsorat lag rahi ho...

ak-thanks...

akshara signled about naitik to mohit but he nodded hids head in nooo..

vr-naitik abhi tak aaya...

mo-pata nahi so kar bhi uta hai ya nahi...mai dekh kar aata hu...

rr-aisa lagta hai ki kahi ka rajkumaar ho...makes a irritating face..

ak-mai dehkti hu...

quickly she came in the room calling naitik naitik...

where as naitik is not able to wear his dhoti...

akshara starts laughing on his condition..

ak-ye kya hai..tum abhi tak ready nahi hue..?

nk-kya akshara...isse de toh diya..par ise mai pehnu ga kaise...aaj tak kabhi nahi pehna..

ak-koi baat nahi..mai pehna deti hu...

suddenly he remebers about mohit's words...

nk-nahi mai try karta hu...tum rehne do...

ak-maine kaha na tumse nahi hoga...mai kar deti hu...

nk-ok...

she came near him...with a big smile on her face...and helped him..by tying his dhoti...

ak-ye lo...ho gayi tummhari dhoti ready...bahut handsome lag rahe ho..isme

nk-thanks...

ak-ahmmm...ahmmm...

then naitik saw her in saree..

nk-aree tumne bhi toh saree pehni hai...acchi lag rahi ho..

ak-sirf acchi..

nk-haa...aaur kya kahu ?

ak-kuch nahi...ab chalo..warna pooja ke liye late ho jayenge...

both went down..in aangan to join the pooja..

vr-akshara ja tu naitik ke bagal me baith jaa...

ak-ok...

she was about to go near him...when mohit interrurpt in between...

mo-akshara aisa karo ki tum rituraj ke pass baith jao..

she makes a big sad face and said..ok..and sat beside rituraj..

here naitik..

nk--tune akshara ko uske paas baithne ke liye kyu kaha ?

mo-kyu meri marzi...tujhe akshara ke paas baithna hai kya ?

nk-nahi..par..

mo-tu use apne paas nahi baithana chahta..aur rituraj ke paas bhi nahi dekh sakta..wah wah !

nk-tujhse na kuch kehna hi bakwaas hai...

mo to himself...sorry yaar akshara ko tere paas lane ke liye use tujhse door hi karna padega...

pandit ji start their mantras...and did the pooja...

he asked one boy to lagaofy roli to everyone...rituraj was about to get up...

when naitik stands up...and took the thali from pandit ji...

nk-mai teeka laga deta hu...

and he start doing his work one by one...

at last he came near rituraj and akshara...

he put the teeka on rr's forehead...and now its akshara's turn...he was about to put the teeka...but due to lost his balance...he is about to fall on her..and that teeka filled her maang...

SO FRIENDS HOW IS IT...

SOORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE...

BUT HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...

SO DO LIKE AND DO COMMENT...

ONCE AGAIN A BIGGG SORRY TO ALLL...

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago