MY FIRST FF 'Bas pyarr ho gaya' updated 2nd part on pg-12 - Page 5

Originally posted by: rainanaksh

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Originally posted by: rainanaksh

ok abhi likhti hu..

Originally posted by: rainanaksh

ha yaar pls jaldi karo..

Originally posted by: SONAMB404

i will update it tomorrow

Originally posted by: SONAMB404

okay

Part-1

The story starts with mandir where akshara comes with her mother rajshree to take blessings of radha krishan..where naitik also comes with her sister rashmi..

Akshara(to her mom): maa vo dekhiye na radha krishan ki Jodi kitni sundar lag rahi hai..

Rajshari: ha kitni sundar chavi hai bal gopal aur radha rani ki..

Bhagwan kare tujhe bhi koi aisa jeevan sathi mile..jo tujhe bahut pyaar kare..

There rashmi to naitik: dada chaliye andar chal ke puja kar lete hai..

Naitik: chalo rashmi

He is about to go when he saw that the palki of radha krishan is about to fall and he runs in hurry to save it..

Akshara see all this and smiles lightly..

Naitik see akshara and become mad for her..he continuously looks at akshara..

Next day :- naitik meet his friend mohit at morning walk

Mohit:-kya naitik tu aaj kal kaha gayab rehta hai...

Naitik:-kahi nhi yaar

Mohit:- bhai kuch toh hua hai..tu kuch badla badla sa lag raha hai..kahi pyaar vyar toh nhi ho gaya tujhe..bol na mere bhai

Naitik:- (smiles lightly)pagal hai kya tu..mujhe orr pyaar..no way

Mohit:- chal thik hai tu keh raha toh main man leta hu..

(In akshara house)

Akshara: maa mein bhi apki madad karu puja ki thal sajane mein..

Rajshri: ha kyu nhi

Akshara:- maa ek baat puchu

Rajshari:- ha pucho

Akshara:- maa pyaar kaise hota hai...

Rajshari:- ye kaisa sawal hai..

Akshara:- maa please btayie na pyaar kaise hota hai...

Rajshari:- acha acha btati hu..!!! jab pyaar hota hai toh pta nhi chalta bas ho jata hai..

Akshara:-sach mein..kya aise hota hai pyaar..

IN AKSHARA COLLEGE:

Akshara: ye varsha pta nhi kaha reh gayi

Varsha(akshara friend):- akshara!!akshara!!Main yahan hu

Akshara:- kaha thi tu..main tujhe hi dundh rahi thi..chal ab jaldi kar class ke liye late ho jayege !!

Varsha:- chal

(In a resturent)

Mohit:- vo dekh bhai ye kya likha hai

Naitik:- kya likha hai

Mohit:- daal baati banana ka competition ke bare mein likha hai

Naitik:- ye khana banana bahut hi asan hota hai

Mohit:- achha..itna confidence..toh thik hai hai tu bhi iss competition mein part le..aur jeet kar dikha toh manu tujhe..

Naitik:- ha ha..thik hai

Competition day:-

Naitik:- mohit se keh toh diya hai ki jeet kar aunga par mujhe toh gas bhi jlana nhi aata..

Ab kya karu mein..then he see akshara from back who also take part with varsha

Naitik:- Excuse me miss..

Akshara:- yes

Naitik:- naitik was astonished to see akshara..he was losted in akshara's eyes..

Akshara:- yes..kahiye

Naitik:- kya aap please meri thodi si madad kar dengi please..

Varsha:- kyu hum tumhari madad kyu kare..

Naitik:- ji please meri thodi si madad kar dijiye..please

Akshara:- okay..

Varsha:- lekin akshara tut oh mere sath meri help karne ayi thin a..

Akshara:- main bas thodi der uski madad kar ke aati hu

Vr:-okay..jaldi aana

Ak:- okay

Nk:- thanks meri help karne ke liye

Ak:- it's okay..apko dal banani ati hai ?

Nk:- no

Ak:- toh fir..iss competition mein participate kyu kiya

Nk:- (softly says)shayad kismat le ayi

Vr:- akshara jldi se yha aa

Ak:- bs abhi ayi..varsha plz main plz thodi der uski help kar doon

Vr:- tu mere sath ayi hai ya uske sath..thik hai ja

Akshara start making food on naitik side..naitik is continuously looking akshara

After some time..when competition is about to end.

Ak:- yeh ho gaya..

Naitik:- thank you soo much..lekin ye kya hai

Akshara:- ye meri recipie ka secret hai

Varsha:- akshara jldi aa na..competition khatam hone wala hai..

And the finally bell rings..and judges ask everyone to show their dishes..after some time they announces the results..

And the winner is naitik..they call naitik on the stage..

Naitik receive prize and starts giving a speech..

Naitik:- yeh trophy mein unhe dena chunga jisne meri bahut madad ki..aur vo hai miss...

then he remember that he forget to ask her name..

ak:- sorry varsha..mein teri help nhi kar payi

vr:-pagal hai kya..mujhe bilkul bhi gussa nhi hu

ak:-sach mein

vr:- haan..acha tu mere sath concert mein aa rahi hai ya nahi

akshara:- konsa concert

varsha :-arre tu bhul gayi..tere fav. Singer ka concert hai..

ak:- arre ha main bhul gayi..pta nhi ma permission degi ya nhi..

vr:- aunty se mein baat kar lungi.

ak:- thik hai..

they both reach home...

varsha :- (to rajshri) radhe krishan aunty..kaisi hai aap

rj:- mein thik hu beta..

vr:- aunty hume apki permission chayie..

rj:- permission kis liye beta

vr:- meri ek friend hai uski shadi hai kal..

rj:- toh

vr:- toh aunty mein chahti ki ap akshara ko mere sath beje..0

rj:- thik hai beta..tum le jao akshara ko apne sath

vr:- thank you aunty :)

NEXT DAY

vr :- akshara tujhe kya hua..

ak:- varsha tune maa se juth kyu bola..tu janti hai na main maa se kabhi jooth nhi bolti..

mujhe nhi jana kisi concert mein..mujhe ghar jana hai..

mein ghar ja rahi hu..mein ma se juth bol ke tere sath nhi chal sakti..

she leave from there in anger..

Rj:- beta tujhe toh apni friend ki shaddi mein jana than a..

ak :- nhi maa..meri koi friend ki shaddi nhi hai..

varsha ne apse juth kaha tha..usse mere sath concert pe jana tha..

rj- smiles

ak:- maa ap mujhse naraz nhi hai

rj:-nhi..bilkul bhi nahi..mujhe pata tha..aur mujhe ye bhi pata tha ki tu mujhse kabhi jooth nhi bolegi

ak:- toh maa mein concert pe

rj:- ha ja na