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avisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: rainanaksh
ohhh..u like it..naksh ke sabse mast romanic scene..thanks

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz
Please update next part raina

i will try tomorrow

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avisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: rainanaksh
i will try tomorrow

yeah please. ... just can't wait any more now!!! 😭

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

PART 9
he made her fell on his hard chest..she could hear his heartbeat which was beating rapidly..
nk-ab karo mere saath dance..it was request yet a command..he racked his hand on her waist and puled her more into him..she don't have any choice other than placing her hands on his shoulders..they both started to dance but his gaze was burning her..
ak-naitik ji pls..mai thak gayi hu..
she just try to run from his unbearable stare..
nk-accha..mere saath aap thak gayi hain..aur uss alok ki baahon me..khushi se dance kar rahi thi..
ak-naitik..ye aap..kya
and she looking in his eyes..naitik completely in akshara so much that..he had give himself into the monent..insted of controlling his desire..his passion and desire he went on and on..
he hugs her while dancing..and started kissing her neck..so akshara closes her eyes in anticipation..
and antra and alok watching them..
alok- ye natik tumhara boyfriend hai ?
an-hai bhi aur nahi bhi.
al-matlab
an-matlab ye ki hum kal hi mile hai..
al-oh..
an-aur akshara
al-hmm..i love her from my college days..
an-nice..so use propose kab kar rahe ho..?
al-propose ? inn dono ke dekhkar lagta hai ki mujhe akshara ko propose karna chahiye..see they looks perfect..
an-ho sakta hai..par mai toh kal naitik ko propose kar rahi hu
al-ohh nice..good for u both..
and here naksh
akshara knows about naitik's feelings and helps him understand the situation..akshara want to tell him that no matter how much he tries to hurt her..the pain of having to do so refflets in his eyesm.which speaks volumes of his love..so even if ther hearts have not met there are distance between the two needs to be coverved..
she is unable to bear naitik's gaze and akshara looks away but for naitik who was cought in his own web of feeling and emotions who inspite of trying hard could'nt keep himself away from her..akshara holds him by her arm..he ups her face and turns her to face him..and when she does..he gives her one longing glance and dips her..thus ending the dance and sheer brilliance that rolled out for the people..
akshara quickly pulled him back..and ran from there..so he ran behind her leaving the diso..he tried to find her but she was nowhere here..thats when the security guard told him she already walked out alone and the diretion..which been told..
the road was empty and he could'nt find her..he was getting panic seeing the darkness..which would made her scared..but more than that he curshed himself for being harsh with her..
nk to himself..ye maine akshara ke saath bilkul theek nahi kia..wo jaisi bhi hain..hai toh meri patni hi..aur maine aaj ye sab..i am sorry akshara..
he break his car when he saw her seating on the small stone and silently sobbing..he came out hurriedly..
nk-akshara aap..
he try to came near her..
ak-pls naitik..
nk-akshara aap yaha kyu aa gayi?
ak-aapko kya fark padta hai?
nk-matlab?
ak-aap toh aise keh rahe hai naitik jaise aap kuch jante hi nahi hai ..
nk-akshara wo mai..
ak-kya naitik..boliye..
nk-i am sorry akshara...
akshara smiled on this..
ak-sorry..itna aasaan hai na naitik aapke liye..par mere liye nahi hai naitik..
nk-aap aise mat kahiye akshara
ak-nahi naitik i am sorry..jo mai aapki life me aayi..maine aapki life kharab kar di..hai na natik..
nk-nahi akshara pls aap aisa mat kahiye..
ak-naitik..mujhe hotel chalna hai..hum wahi chalkar baat kare..
nk-hmm..
but again antra came here..
an-naitik tum dono yaha kyu aa gaye..
nk-kuch nahi bas aise hi..
an-ye akshara kyu ro rahi hai?
nk-meri wajah se
an-tumhari par kaise?
nk-kuch nahi..
and he quickly went to take akshara but she denied..
ak-mai khud chal sakti hu..and trio came back in hotel..
ak-mai room me hu..
nk-hmm..
an-naitik pls kya tum aaj mere room me so sakte ho..
nk- shocked..kya?
an-hmm..pls
nk-mujhe neend aa rahi hai..GOOD NITE..
and he quickly went from there..
an-koi baat nahi naitik kal subah hi tumhare room me aakar mai apne dil ki baat tumhe keh doongi..and she too went in her room..
NAKSH IN THIER ROOM..
akshara is waiting for him..as they need to talk to eachother..she is wearing a night gown..
and lying on the bed..when naitik came in room..
he silently came in room..and start hanging his clothes..he was about to put his shirt off..when akshara came..
ak-naitik
and he turns to face her..
nk-hmm
ak-toh kya kehna chahte the aap
nk-I LOVE U AKSHARA
akshara is soo shoked to listen this
ak-kya? kya kaha aapne
nk-I LOVE U AKSHARA
ak-phir se..naitik ye koi mazak nahi hai..ki jab chaha pyaar ho gaya..aur jab chaha alag ho gaye..pyaar ka matlab aap nahi samajhte hai..
nk-mai janta hu ki mai pyaar ka matlab nahi janta..par aaj mai itna toh jaan gaya hu akshara ki mai aapke bina nahi reh sakta..
ak-jane dijiye naitik..ma sab janti hu..aap..
nk-haa mai janta hu ki maine aapke saath jo kiya wo galat tha..par I AM SORRY AKSHARA...mujhe maaf kar dijiye..ab se mai aisi bewkoofi phir kabhi nahi karoonga..SORRY..and he holds his ears
on this akshara's eyes became teary and she quickly hugged him
ak-I LOVE U TOO NAITIK
nk-thank u akshara..thank u
and he kissed on her forhead
ak-chaliye naitik ab hum so jaye..warna kal last day goa me enjoy nahi kar payenge..
nk-hmm
and both lying on the bed..side by side
AT NIGHT
naitik came near akshara..and hugs her from back
and akshara woke up by this
nk-relax..you will enjoy this..he whispered in her ears.trailing his hand over her body.akshara felt the hair on her back stand up and goosbumps.on her arms at his touch.she silently prayed to god to take care of her tonight

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

PRECAP..naksh making thier love whole night..and in morning antra came in naitik's room..
sorry friends for late update..this is really a bad update..i know it..i have break my promise for romantic update.so sorry specially avi..but i promise next part will definately be a hot one..
thanks for reading this..
hit like button if u all like it..

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

beautiful part raina
but most beautiful is last scene
exicted to read next
please update soon but after tum mile

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varsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

hai raina dear don't say sorry yaar😊

very cute update yaar

love the sweet and cute love between naksh an thanQ 4 naksh milan really love it 😳

well done dear 👏

i'm waiting 4 naksh romance😳

pls continue soon...both ff

thanQ 4 cute ff

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avisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

so sweet of you! !! but I seriously loved this part... its simply amazing and so so sooo nice... don't say like that cuz I know every body liked it 😊 and this part too was no less 😉 but waiting more eagerly for the next! !!!! 😆

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
beautiful part raina
but most beautiful is last scene
exicted to read next
please update soon but after tum mile

thank u sooo mcuh sonal..

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran
hai raina dear don't say sorry yaar😊
very cute update yaar
love the sweet and cute love between naksh an thanQ 4 naksh milan really love it 😳
well done dear👏
i'm waiting 4 naksh romance😳
pls continue soon...both ff
thanQ 4 cute ff

thank u sooo much varsha..for liking this part..i am soo happy..that u all always liking it