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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kahivansh

beautiful loved it.👏

so sweet of u dear thank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
please update it asap
eagerly waiting for your next update..
you are a great writer
loved this ff very much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAMB404

please update it asap
eagerly waiting for your next update..
you are a great writer
loved this ff very much

thanks dear for your sweet comment..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rainanaksh

thanks dear for your sweet comment..

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Originally posted by: SONAMB404

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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 21
nk and ak are about to go their home..when a man -sorry sir :(
nk-kya hua?
ak-?
man-ji sir vo bahar snowfall hua hai..aur itni raat ko aap dono ja nahi sakte hai..kyunki car..
nk-oh shit to kya ye raat hame yahi set par rehna hoga
man-ji sir
nk-nahi mai yaha ruk sakta..mujhe kal london jana hai..maine koi packing bhi nahi ki hai..no i have to go..
ak-par hum kaise jayenge nk
nk-kuch bhi ho jana to padega hi..mai kal ke meeting jane nahi de sakta ak..
man-sir par aise me kahi jana sahi nahi hoga
nk-theek hai par yaha aas paas koi hotrl hai jaha hum reh sake
man-sorry sir wo bhi nahi hai..pls sir hum aapko shikayat ka koi mauka nahi denge..
nk makeing faces while he listen this
ak-mai ek baat kahu
nk-kya?
ak-nk tum chaho to mere ghar chal sakte ho..yahi paas me hai
nk-kya! tumne pehle kyu nahi bataya..ha zaroor chalunga
ak-thanks
nk-thanks tumhe nahi mujhe kehna chahiye
ak-uski koi zaroorat nahi hai..
and ak takes him to her home..she opens the door.
ak-welcome in my home nk
nk- :)
ak-tum baitho mai coffee banakar lati hu..bahar itni thand hai
nk-hmm
and she goes to make coffee for nk
nk is roaming here and there in her house
nk-ak?
ak-ha nk (from kitchen)
nk-ye wahi frame hai na jo..
ak-ha nk
nk-yaha tum teeno ki saath me koi photo nahi hai
ak brings coffee for him..wo kal hi toot gyi thi isliye maine rakh di
nk-oh
ak-ye lo coffee
nk-thanks
after some time..
ak-mai dinner banati hu
nk-rehne do ak mai aise hi theek hu..tum pareshaan mat ho pls
ak-isme pareshaani kaisi nk..mai aati hu..tumhe khana khaana hi padega
nk-ok lekin ek shart par
ak-sahrt kaisi ?
nk-yahi ki mai tumhari madad karoonga
ak-accha tumhe aata hai khana banana
nk-itna to aata hai ki kisi ki madad kar saku
ak-ok to phir chalo..mai change karke aati hu..
nk-hmm
nk in kitchen waiting for ak to come ad here she comes wearing a beautiful black coloured nighty..nk is astonished to see her but but but..
ak-to ready
nk-hmm
ak-to aisa karo nk tum ye vegetables kato mai mai roti ke preprations karti hu..and she starts doing her work..but nk continuosly watching her when he cuts his figer..
nk-ahhh.
ak-kya hua nk..she gets tensed to see him
nk-kuch nahi bas ye ungli.
ak-ye tum bhi na
she quickly puts his finger in her mouth to suck the blood
nk-ak mai theek hu
ak-ise theek kehte hai..dekha na kitna blood nikal raha tha
nk-janta hu par
ak-kabh apni bhi care kia karo nk..hamesha dusro e baare me hi nahi soochna chahiye
nk-hmm
ak-ab ye hmm..kya hai..chalo yaha baitho khana mai banati hu
nk-sorry ak
ak-sorry worry kuch nahi baitho..aur waise bhi boss se kaam nahi karwate
nk-boss..ha abhi batata hu..
and she starts running in the kitchen and nk behind her..suddenly nk's legs in stuck somwhere and because of this he loses his balance and fall on the ground with ak..
he is over her...and a romantic eyelock..
he wants to get up quickly but again he slips
nk-wo mai..
ak-...
and part away from her
ak-wo mai..tum baitho mai khana lekar aati hu
nk-mai bahar hu
ak-hmm
they both eat their dinner silently without talking to eachother..to break this silence
ak-kal tum london jane wale ho
nk-ha ek meeting hai
ak-akele
nk-matlab
ak-matlab aur koi office se
nk-nahi mai akela hi junga
ak-tum sneha ko saath le jate
nk-kyu wo waha kya karegi
ak-nk dost hone ke naate tumse yahi kahoongi ki ab shaadi kar lo
nk-dost..
ak-hmm..sneha bahut acchi hai aur tumse bahut pyaaar karti hai
nk-pls ak
ak-pls kya nk hamesha tum mere..
nk-hmm..waise bhi mujhe iss bare me koi baat nahi karni hai..
ak-par
nk-ak mujhe bata do mai kaha so sakta hu..neend aa rahi hai
ak-ok..
she take him to her bedroom..
ak-nk tum yaha so jao..mai drawingroom me so jaungi.
nk-nahi ak tum itni thand me..nahi tum apne room me so jao..mai bahar so jaunga
ak-nahi nk tum
nk-maine kaha na..
ak-ok nk..
nk-good...good nite ak
ak-gud nite..
nk went to drawingroom and slept on sofa..
here ak is not able to sleep..wo kuch dino se apne aur nk ke beech hui baate hi sooch rahi hoti hai..their first meeting in office,party scene,ad kiss,and their jungle nite too..
ak-nk mere paas hokar bhi kitna door hai..us din agar ??..to aaj mai aur nk saath hote..
when she heard some noise from outside..
ak-ye bahar kahi aaj phir se..
she went near her window to see..it
one man everyday waiting for outside..and sometime watching in the house..at night
ak-yeh phir yaha..kahi nk ko pata chal gaya to
suddenly she closes the window..
but that man is still there for her..
after sometime man rings her door bell and nk wake up on this..ak comes in drawingroom
nk-iss waqt kaun aay hai
ak-koi nahi hai nk..tum so jao pls..
nk-aree aise kaise..tum yahi ruko mai dekhta hu
ak-jane do na nk
but he did'nt listen to her and opens the door
nk and ak both came at the door
nk-ji kahiye
man-mujhe madam ji se kuch akele baat karni hai
nk-akele..jo bhi kehna hai yahi kehiye
man-par aap kaun ?
nk-kyu aapko kya karna hai?
man-wahi to saab ji mai inhe itne dino se keh raha hu ki jaise aap ke saath ye raat bita rahi hai waise mere saath bhi
nk-aaaye..agar ek bhi shabd ab muh se nikla to yahi jaan le lunga..
ak-nk pls jane do andar chalo
nk-aree aise kaise ak..ye
man-ha ha le jao madam aise hi nazaayas rishte banati rahiye...waise ye hai kaun sahab pehle kabhi yaha nahi dekha
ak-nk pls andar chalo
nk-abee oh jaana chahta hai na mai kaun hu..ha to sun pati hu mai inka..aur agar abhi tu yaha se nahi gaya na..
man-maaf karna sahab ji..
and he quickly ran from there..
PRECAP -nk meets rr in london.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow raina the update was sooo cute and nice... really enjoy it...i love angry naitik and i love the dialogue pati hu mai inka😳😳 and ha love there romantic eyelock
plz continue soon both ff


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part Raina
Waiting for next part
Do update 2nd ff
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran

wow raina the update was sooo cute and nice... really enjoy it...i love angry naitik and i love the dialogue pati hu mai inka😳😳and ha love there romantic eyelock

plz continue soon both ff


thanks varsha..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz

Awesome part Raina
Waiting for next part
Do update 2nd ff

thanks dear u like it..i had written this part in so quickly only on ur deamand otherwise will update it tomorrow

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