OS :Prelude to a Loving Start

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Prelude to a LovingStart



She was irritated, felt disgusting to the core. How can she watch a movie of Katrina Kaif after what happened yesterday??? . She desperately needed this shit to get out of her mind. No way she was going to miss the first show of her favorite hero's movie, Then let it be the fact that ultimately she would watch his favorite heroine's movie.


Duh! She carried her bag and called Varsha.


"Tumhe pta nahi Varsha, muje kitna ajeeb lag rha tha kal" She hissed from between her teeth, almost burning with rage.

"Samajhte kya hai vo khud ko????" She continued.


"Unhe katrina pasand hai to isme mai kya karu. Muje Katrina nahi pasand hai to mene bol diya . Infact muje Aishwarya zyada pasand h!! . Ye to had hai Guest vo the humare aur daant sab muje rahe the. Haan mana muje dekhne ke liye aaye the Naitik ji but unhe meri pasand na-pasand ka khayal to hona chahiye na ????" She said not even taking a proper breath in between. While leaving varsha completely baffled what was she up to.


Varsha eased akshara while indicating the driver to slow down the car.

"Listen, Calm down for a second...Think again... Kya pata Naitik ji itne bhi bure na ho jitna tum soch rahi ho ... Akshara! You know how male ego is? Abhi tum apna mood kharab mat karo, Warna rithik roshan ki itni achi movie dekhne mai mazza nahi ayega " Varsha cooed in a caring tone, trying her best to ease akshara.



It was pretty obvious for both; Naitik and akshara, to take this small topic on the heights, both were strong personalities and their conflict on meeting first was pretty obvious and justified. While the fact was simple, each one has its own dislikes and likes, then why both fought for something sheepish like this. It was because both wanted their partner to mold in a frame exactly the way they did, a perfect match, same thinking and likes, but neither one of them thought for once that different choices make different persons.



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God! She was making him crazy day by day. Leaving him completely ablaze every time. He kept on thinking how can a girl argue with him. With a matter of fact she was to be his wife, and she can't even respect his likes and dislikes. And on the other side he felt happier that they haven't yet agreed to this relationship. How can he agree to marry such an arrogant girl??? Really could he?? He was feeling helpless. Definitely he wanted to throw every thought of Akshara out of him mind. How can she affect him up to such an extent in just one meeting? He cannot even think of something else right now.



"Sees like someone is missing bhabi " Mohit teased naitik to which naitik got more restless.



"Mohit please mujhe iss bare mai koi baat nahi karni" Naitik growled, knowing the fact that he desperately wanted to talk to him about this matter.


"Achcha calm down naitik, here the ticket to first show of Katrina's new movie" Mohit said in his monotonous smiley way.


Wow now when naitik heard "Katrina's" name from mohit he got a flashback of akshara? How she fought with him saying she like aishwarya more?? Naitik was getting sicker! And more.


Finally naitik agreed for watching the movie, just for the sake of the hope that he would feel better. On a complete different note not knowing that Akshara was also going to watch the same movie.

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"Jindagi na milegi dobara" She cried out of joy.


"Chalo let's get popcorns and seat fast" Varsha said, bathed with zest and anxiety.

"Yup lets go" Akshara said in her fast feeble tone.




On the other part, Naitik and mohit were late. Too late. They rushed to hall as soon as they reached there.


Naitik ahead of mohit made the pace for them to run through the hall. Finally he saw two seats empty there at the end of row of balcony. Finally taking his final breath he placed himself on seat while wiping out the sweat from his brows.



The very scent. The very magnificently magnetic scent. He turned around to figure out the lady sitting right next to him. He was not able to see her clearly as it was all dark. But one bright light reflected on her face left him in a deep shocked. It was the same girl which ruled his mind few minutes ago.


"Akshara ji" he spoke with those baffled expressions.


"Naitik ji" she turned aside looking at the manly figure sitting beside her. Not thinking how loud she said it.

"Shush...dheere..." Varsha whispered, knowing the reaction of irritated audience sitting in the hall.


"App yahan kya kar rahi hai????" Naitik whispered.


"Apko kya lagta hai mai kya kar rahi hu...?" she replied with a cute pout.


Again this girl rules his emotions. He was so angry! How can she easily cut off his every statement? He just let it go in an easy manner. He was here to watch the movie so he would just watch the movies not the girl sitting beside him. He took an oath.



The movie went on, with funny moments in which he heard her oh so light melodious laughs, few emotional moments in which he could hear her silent sobs, little intense moments in which he could see her clutch her dress in anticipation. She was full of emotions.


In the whole movie he just observed her. Her laughs, her cries, her beautiful eye's which sparkled in that golden shine, everything perfect. He never saw her with so much patience. With so much LOVE!


The movie ended. It was time to leave. But no naitik wasn't happy! It ended why oh why??? So soon??? He was left to observe so many other sides of her.

"Chal varsha..." she said while getting up from her chair. But the thing which happened in next moment left her almost baffled.


He caught her hand, for first time he felt her soft alabaster skin, which radiated a perfect mixture of warmth.


Mohit knew they needed time so he left the hall with varsha. The whole hall was empty except the couple and the silence between them.


Lot things were to resolve. A lot of things were to clarify. A lot of things were to be framed. But on the first part a base of a strong relationship.


Both talked, knew each other's brighter side. After all it was just a prelude to Love storm. Prelude to a brighter start.

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Okay so here it was. Do tell how was it . Good?? Bad?? Fugly??

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janhavi58 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its been so long u didnt write anything i guess, but this was truly awesome, i remembered their argument...😆
amazing description of akshra from naitik's point of view...
so good OS, thanks..!!😃

i am off to see that scene...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ugh ! My pm aren't sending .. so please don't kill me if you don't get any PM of this :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: janhavi58

its been so long u didnt write anything i guess, but this was truly awesome, i remembered their argument...😆

amazing description of akshra from naitik's point of view...
so good OS, thanks..!!😃

i am off to see that scene...😆

Hey thankew so much ! ya even i like that scene ! 😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS..

I remembered their first fight in terrace..

dat was really golden days in YR..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awsm dear.i really like all ur os.keep writing more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wat is meant by OS...i dont knw...im a newbie

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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb os mishti
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its a nyc one ...u made me remember deir first fight ...ohhh i just luv dat scene

thnx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerakumari

wat is meant by OS...i dont knw...im a newbie


OS is a small fanfiction !

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