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Posted: 13 years ago
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As it was shown yest manager os d main culprit...akshara d very nxt day goes to office as in a hurry naitik has forgotten his lunch box n overhears manager ...n den wid d help of naitik she exposes manager n d mu b/w naitik n shaurya gets resolved n both apologise to each other n akshara ...



D other day naitik was sitting in his room n he realises dat dis year alshara's b'day got spoilt n he decides to celebrate d b'day of his love n make it a surprise for her...


Next day naitik talks to dj n he agrees...although g3 dint like it but she cant say no to munna so she also agrees n naitik invites ms, rashmi's family n nandini's family for d party... :)


--------it is d day decided for d party-------



Naitik: akshara i know ki aaj sunday h but mujhe office me bohot jaroori kaam h...to jaana padega...aap ek kaam kijiye naksh ko lekar apne maayke chale jaaiye ...main ofgice jaate hue aapko drop kar doonga aap jaldi ready ho jaaiye...


Akshara agrees n gets ready. Naitik drops her at ms n den cums back to ss as he has to prepare for d party...d whole day he works for it n in d evening akshara cums home wid ms n is surprised to c d decorations as everything is done according to her taste n likings ...colours , designs everything ...she is just very happy n thnx everyone...



Naitik : jyaada emotional hone ki zaroorat nhi h ...ye to hona hi tha naksh ke saath aapka first b'day h ye to yaadgaar hona hi chahiye...isliye andar aaiye n cake kaatiye...



Everyone gathers around d table for cake cutting...



Akshara:(sees d cake) arre ye to mera fav cakeh ...thank u ...n den blows d candles n cuts d cake wid naitik n duggu...feeds dem n wen naitik feeds him she saz ...



Cake to achha h but thida alag h...



Listening to it rashmi saz



Rashmi: bhabhi alag to hona hi h ...dada ne khud jo banaaya h ...subah se 10 cakes kharaab kar chuke h n den ise banaaya ..



Mohit: to ye h iske alag hone ka raaz isme bhabhi ke liye naitik ka pyaar shaamil h...


Akshara is really touched by dis n w/o wasting a sc she places a gentle kiss on naitik's cheek n hugs him...



Akshara: thank u ...mere b'day itna special banaane ke liye ...pyaar jataana koi aapse seekhe n while saying dis she has tears in her eyes...



Naitik: akshara, aap hi kehti h na ki bachha jo dekhta h wo seekhta h ...to sochiye agar duggu aapko har baat par rote dekhe ga to rona seekh jaayega so plz aap rona kam kijiye...



Akshara:wid a smile in her face...aur aap kya gussa karna sikhaayenge mere duggu ko...



N everyone laugh n enjoy d cake...



O dining table akshara is again glad to c everything of her choice only starting from teekha paani poori to chinese everything was just for akshara only...



Everybdy had deir dinner n leave...



--------------nalsh room ------------------



Akshara: duggu dekha aapne aapke papa kitne achhe h n mamma se kitna pyaar karte h...aaj aapki mamma bohot khush h ...aap bhi khush ho na????



Duggu just givrs a killer smile like his papa n den sleeps



Naitik cums in d room



Naitik: kya baat h hamaare nawaab saab aakjbohot jaldi so gaye ...lagta h inhe bhi laga hoga ki mamma ko papa ko return gift dena hoga to main kyun kabaab main haddi banu



Akshara : return gift lene ke liye pehle gift dena padta h jo aapne abhi rak nhi diya h ...pehle gift dijiyaebaad me return gift ki baat karenge...



Naitik:standing in front of akshara ...gift to aapko aapke b'day se pehle hi mil gaya tha ...yaad nhi aapko aapne last yr kya kaha tha n den dey both remember wen akshara said mujhe hamaara bachha chahiye ...but phir bhi agar aapko chahiye to ye lijiye n den naitik takes out a big photo frame which has photos of naksh wid duggu n naksh at various functions of deir marriage n on top of f d frame oit was written 'ek pyaara sa sansaar'



Akshara: ye to bohot khoobsoorat h ...i just luv it...n she abruptly saz i luv u naitik i luv u sooo much i luv u n kisses on his cheeks...n after realizing wat she has done she starts blushing...

Naitik:hamaari shaadi ko teen saal hone waale h but aapka sharmaana aaj bhi ...haaye kya baat h...aaj bhi aapko sharmaate dekh kar hamaari shaadi e pehle ke din yaad aa jaate h n rememberig deir old daz naksh hug each other titely n d scene blurrs...
---------in d morning----------
Naksh r lying on d bed titely hugging each other ...

Guys dis is my first ever creative writing on dos forum ...do leave ur comments...plz bear wid d formatting as i m thru phone...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sona simply wow😍
loved it lovd it lovd it...😳😳😳
superb os...😃😃naitik ka cake banana...aksh ka kiss...n sabse best naitik ka gift😳😳😳main show main bhi yahi dekhna chathi thi ki pichle year ki promise ke bare main naksh bath kare..lekin...but i loved ur os...keep writng...😃😃😃
Edited by ammu4u - 13 years ago
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ye lo di🤗🤗
awesome os di😳😳😳
nk ka gift awww😳😳...i expected that in d show
keep writing di😃



Edited by srkfan4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks u for this beautiful os 👏
awesome os sona👏
ye serial mein hota tho acha lagega🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow di...it was perfectly perfect n ek dum mast lyk u...
luved evry bit of it di...
i mus say u r a vry gud writer...

keep writing my shona di..
Edited by -Naksh4ever- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice and awesome os sona
once again ak b'day celebration and b'day party is awesome,
the naksh gift and return one is good
keep writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice os...👍🏼
loved it...
so hume ek aur writer mil hi gaya😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wonderful os👏
awesome
keep writing😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: naksh_manju

thanks u for this beautiful os awesome os sonaye serial mein hota tho acha lagega


Hame achha lagega isliye hi to cvs aisa dikhaate nhi...
Thnx for d appreciation...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: srkfan4ever

ye lo di
awesome os di
nk ka gift awww...i expected that in d show
keep writing di





Thnx for d appreciation...

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