My First FF- In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein-Pt25 @ Pg140 - Page 9

Hi !!!!! saru nyc update ... Luved d naksh ka chup chup ke milna nd d match update ... Precap wazzz fab waiting for d nxt part update sooon thanxxx for d pm

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

Amazing,superb,fantastic nd funfilled part di.it is vry vry entertaining 4rm beginning 2 ending.i already read it 5 times.i thing i saw full part lively,especially d match.u described it beautifully nd in detail.(now i thing my comment is going 2 b longer)d first scene is too funny.i thought mohit get one more chance 2 pull naitik's leg.but our munna become too smart,he jumped through balcony.afterthat naksh's drama infront of them.when naksh argued na,i laughed so much.their turning back smile was d best,kya ullu banaya naksh ne un logonko.akshi got permission 2 wear suit,usmein bma ka reason was hilarious-dj in T-shirt,wow 🤣 u described d match vry well.naitik gave tips 2 akshi,so sweet of him.last ball mein hi sahi,akshi ne munna ko out kar hi diya.now abt naksh k chori-chupna milna.luvd it.naitik said r8 akshi ne use pehle hi clean bowled kar diya hai.bechare boys,mohit ki over confidence,uff.i enjoyed girls batting more than boys.i already know girls going 2 b win.phir bhi jab wo jeethi na,main tho jump karli,like them.i appreciate u 4 this,aapne match k excitement barkarar rakha.nd d last ball was d hilarious.ye ladkiya kuch bhi kar sakthi hai,dono pathiyan kaise apne balance kho gayi 🤣but naksh rocked,akshi's wink nd naitik's hosh khona wow.i liked one thing,u didnt brought naksh's in btw d match.i mean if naitik want akshi 2 win,he can it easily.but he didnt it or akshi too.they played d match with full of spirit.ha last mein akshi wink kiya,ye cheating thodi na. All over d part is bestest 🤗w8ing 4 nxt part.i know it is going 2 b fun nd romantic.naitik blackmailing other.wah wah munna,all d best.but munna ko khana banana aatha hai.kisiko mat bathana nahi,specially mohit ko 🤣

hey rasha... a big hugg for a lovely comment... 🤗🤗... I'm very very veyy glad that u liked the part... I'm so happy too... n reading such a long part for 5 times is great... I think I myself didn't read those many times after it came from editing... now after many jatkas naithik n akshara have to be smart naa... or else they will be caught red handedly... 😳😆... n haa they maintained the difference between helping n winning... n becharee boys... girls have become so smart n clean bowled them... lol... n I'm happy to know that I have kept ur exitement of ur match till the end though u know the result...

n haa as u said next part will be funny n romantic... both... waise where munna also knows everything... he also knows only some like chai... soup... pastha etc... for dinner toh they have to prepare even more... lol.. 😆😆... u can see boys hardwork next week... 😉😆😆... n also our munna's naughtyness... 😉😆😆

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

U said bhola is in boys team.aftr d match g3 said that she send Mj nd bhola 2 mandir b4 d match itself.is it a blooper?

haa... its a blooper... ofcourse I recognized it before posting... but still I dont want to change it because I dont want bhola n maharajji to help boys in cooking... lol.. 😆😆... so kept it like that... 😉... n waise she will send him in the middle of the match... like when girls r batting... not before the match... 😉😃

Originally posted by: shiramaheshwari

Hi !!!!! saru nyc update ... Luved d naksh ka chup chup ke milna nd d match update ... Precap wazzz fab waiting for d nxt part update sooon thanxxx for d pm

Thanku so much... 😃... I'm so glad that u liked the part... I'll be contnuing soon... n u r welcome... 😃

I have a suggesion di.naitik says akshi luking beautiful in hindi u always wrote that 'aaj aap bahut khubsoorath hai' i think it is not suitable.'aaj aap bahut khubsurath lag rahi hai'-i think it is more suitable.i noticed it so many times,but forgot 2 mention.

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

I have a suggesion di.naitik says akshi luking beautiful in hindi u always wrote that 'aaj aap bahut khubsoorath hai' i think it is not suitable.'aaj aap bahut khubsurath lag rahi hai'-i think it is more suitable.i noticed it so many times,but forgot 2 mention.

oh thanku rasha... I dont know that it have to be written like that... I'll keep it in mind while writing next time...😃

nice update,loved the cricket match part...😊

Originally posted by: anamika00

nice update,loved the cricket match part...😊

Thanku so much dear... 😃

1st of all comgrats for ur new thread 👏 & once again awesome update 😃 naksh r the best...👍🏼 ab toh naitik balcony kudne me maahir ho gaya hai 😆 thanks for the pm & cont soon...😊

@saman: Thanku so much saman... I'm so glad that u liked it... balcony part is still some more pending... it will be coming soon... 😃

@sameera: Thanku sameera... I'll be continuing soon... 😃