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Posted: 14 years ago
sharikum inale chech kandayiruno gulal theerarayapol nxt progam yr synops athu pazhayatha enu arinjitum njan enthokayo prathishchu
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ashamol

sharikum inale chech kandayiruno gulal theerarayapol nxt progam yr synops athu pazhayatha enu arinjitum njan enthokayo prathishchu


athu minijannthe synop ayirunnu...njaanum pakshe pratheekshichu😕😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
chech njan monday ulu post cheyu,theernal njan vayikan tharam, njan ipol varum enu paranjanu inalath epsd sahchathu,precap ulathukond rakshapetu vaiuneram nokiyal math njan thane surpse polichu poti
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Posted: 14 years ago
ashatti poyoo? guest vannudaa..atha njan varathathu...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats on the second Thread 🥳
Aweesome upd, lovely part :)
Thanks for the Pm, add me in ur Pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnk u hina 4 ur coments i wil surely pm u
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 13
next day akshi opened her eyes @ saw herself in between natik @ karan,she slightly moved up @ started caressing their hair ,natik wake up @ pulled her in 2 the bed @ hugged her by laying above her,they enjoyed the silence romance,he got separated 4m her wen he saw karan hugging her
ak:ap kaham ja rahe h?
nt:tayar hone
ak:lekin abi toh sirf 8 baje h
nt:apke body guard agaya na ab mein yaham rukhenge toh bahuth problem ho jayengi
ak:teek h toh jaa
karan become happy 2 get akshi alone in his hands just like his father,he played with her 4 a long time,she went 4 a shower after handing karan 2 natik.he take this as an oppurtunity 2 talk 2 karan ,he ordered some choclates @ gave it 2 karan,he become delighted 2 see a lot of choclates@ started jumping with joy becoz akshi never used 2 give him choclates ..
nt:karan,tum pappa se kitna p[yaar karthe h?
ka:(after little thinking,he widened his arms 2 indicate the amount of his love)bahuth...
nt become happy
nt:toh jab mamma tumse poochenge ki tum kiske sath donge?mamma ya pappa?
ka:hm...
natik sat with a curious face
ka:pa...
natiks face lightened
ka:pappa ka nah mamma ka
natiks face turned down.he felt her hands on his shoulders
ak:(smiling)itna azan nah h natik,koi baaat bah koshish karthe rahiye
he angrily went inside,2 impress karan he decided 2 take him 2 an amuzment park.veegaland!!
their day in the veega land started with the grand welcome given 2 them by the staffs @ the clowns(dwarfs),they gifted bouques 2 naksh @ gift & toys 2 karan which was a plesent surprise 2 them.,without wasting time they changed their dresses @ moved 2 the family rides
they reached near fish pond wich was very lovely @ had a lots of beautifull fishes,karan give feed 2 them,the fishes came near him @ kissed on his fingures ,they become totally surprised 2 see this, akshi also 4warded her hands but natik take it back @ kissed on it
nt:""mere biwi ko kiss karne ka haq sirf mera h""
ak:(smiling)nt...
then they moved 2 the world of great acoustics @ dance,the performers are the water fountains @ they dance 2 their favourite tunes,naksh couldnt believe it becoz it was an incredible synchronisation of light,sound @ water.
naksh allowed karan 2 play in the park @ they sat on the bench natik was silent becoz he was thinking how 2 make him agree ,akshi felt bad 4 him,she knew that he was so worried becoz of her ,so she decided 2 complete his wish.but she didnt reveal it 2 him as she want 2 make it as a surprise
ak:(naughtily)ny,ap itna nirash mat huwiye,vaise mujhe pata h ki karan iskeliye kabhi haan nah kahenge phir b mein usse manane ki koshish zaroor karongi
nt:itna ehsaan karne ki zaroorat nah h,ap bas tayar rahiye...
ak:apke ye +ve thinking dekhar mujhe bahuth acha laga,ap ek kaam kyon nah karthe vo saara pyaar jo apne gudiya keliye rakhe ha na vo mujhe diigiye!!😃
nt:kyon ab mein kam pyaar deta h kya ??jo aur pyarr mang rahe h
akshi was somhow controlling her smile
ak:nah nah ap..mujhe bahuth pyaar dete h lekin kya h na ye pyaar isse cheez h ki jitna b mila h na kam h laghthe .aur jabse ye bache ki baat aye ha na ap bas ussi ke baare mein sochthe rahthe h(puppy face)
nt:ap b toh mujhse se zyaada karan ko pyaar karthi h
ak:apko issa kyon lagtha h?mein kya apke ek wish poori karne se inkaar kiya ap toh mujhse naraz ho gaya
nt:ak,mujhe abi janana h ki ap kisse zyaada pyaar karthi h?//
ak:aj mein apko sach batati hoon...sach kahoon toh...karan se!!!
natik knw taht her anwser would b this,he stood up 2 go but she make him sit near her.he was not looking at her so she cupped her face@ make him look in 2 her eyes
ak:reason toh sunkar jayiye!!1
""nt,mein hamesha apne apse poochthi thi ki mein apse ya karan se kisse zyaada pyaar karthi hoon,kabhi mera dil kehthi h ki ap kabhi karan,phir mein jaane lagi ki mein karan se jitna zyaada pyaar karthi hoon utna aur mein apke khareeb aa jaati hoon kyonki karan apki parchai h,apki ""photocoppy""(smile with tears),karan mein apka bachpan dekhi hoon.matlab apke zindangi mein jo hisse mein mein nah tha vo b mein jaane lagi h mahsoos karane lagi h,isiliye mein apse zyaada karan se pyaar karna chathi hoon kyonki isstarah se mein poori tarah apki ho jawoongi!!
natik felt short of words 2 express his feelingshe rested his lips on her 4 head
nt:thank u so much ak,ap hamesha mujhe haara deti h,aj mein bahuth khush hoon!!1sorry meine ap par abhuth gussa kiya
ak:nah nt sorry kehne k zaroorat nah hmujhe bilkul bura nah laga sach!!1
he got somthing in his mind @ covered her eyes with a piece of cloth @ take her in his arms
ak:nt,ap kya kar rah h?mujhe kaham lekar jaa rah h
nt:apko janana h na mein pse kitna pyaar kartha hoon
ak:nt mein toh mazak kar rahi thi chodiye mujhe
he make her sat on the sky wheel ride @ removed the cloth.she was abou 2 scold him wen she noticed were was she,in fear she closed her eyes @ tightly hugged him
ak:nt,mujhe bahuth dar lag rah h,ye bhand kigiye mujhe neeche jana h
nt:bas bas ak,ap itna kyon dar rahi h,mein hoo na,dekhiye kina maza aa rah h
ak:mujhe nah dekhna
she shouted 2 stop it
nt:ak,apki chillane se ye nah rukhegaap mere a nkhon mein ekhiye mujhe kuch kehna h
he opend her eyes seeing the heightness she closed her eyues then he kiised on her eyelids 2 ease out her fear,he pampered her @she opened her eyes lowly,he kept her invobled in the his talks.wen she completely becom out of shock she realised that she was hugging him infront of every1 so he moved back but natik pulled her
ak:nt...chodiye koi dekh lega!!!!
nt:ekhne digiye..vaise b ab tak toh sa b dekh chuke honge ki ap abi tak kya kar rahi thi!!!
ak:dhat...
he take her hand @ slighly met his lips on it
""i love u akshara
i lv u more than thoe heightness that 1 can ever reach
i l u more than those depthness that 1 can ever digg
i l u more than that i have ever found a way 2 say 2 u
i v u akshara
she was very touched 2 hear this 4m him,she gave a peck on his cheeks
ak:i lv u more than u love me
nt:nah...mein apse, zyaada pyaar kartha hoon
ak:na mein
nt:ak.sirf kehne se nah hoga jisse hum pyaar karthe h na uskeliye kuch karna b hoga tab jaake ye kaha jaata h ki ap kissise kitna pyaar karthi h
ak:acha toh mein apkeliye kuch b nah kathi
ny:mereliye kuch karna ka door ap mere baare mein sochthe tak nah
ak:hm..ye toh bahuth bura huwa a,chaliye mein b apkeliye ek surprise paln kiya
nt:sach...kya surprise h??/
ak:nt meine kaha na surprise h!!aur mein apko ek b clu nah doonga!!
nt:vaise b mein saara vakth apke baare mein sochthe rahthe h,ab ye jaane ke baad mein toh gay kaam se!!!!
ak:nt...
they again saat on the bench,karan came @ he want 2 bath in pool so they moved 2 the water rides,akshi saat on the bank s she saw more scared of their mischevious @ less of water.karan always like 2 play in water so he was enjoying madly with natik @ he taught him hw 2 swim @ all.natik came near akshi 2 started counting down,wen he counted zero he jumped in 2 the water along with akshi
ak:ye kyaa h natik apse acha toh karan h
nt:apka ye pyaara bacha hi mujheidea diya tha
karan looked at her with a stern smile
ak:apka beta h na apko dekhkar hi sab seekhtha hoga
nt:ye kaisa rule h?kuch acha kiya toh apka beta ban jaata h aur kuch galath kiya toh mera
akshi smiled hearing his talks
ak:(huggng karn)hamara...ab khush!!!
nt:hm...chaliye ham ek game khelthe h dekthe h ki kon sabse zyaada der tak paani ke andarrahethe h
ak:teek h
nt:toh pehle ap
she dipped in 2 the water.natik got an idea
nt:karn tu yah ruk mein jaakar dektha hoo ki tere mamma cheating kar rah h ya nah
ka:cheeting ap karthe h mamma nah!!!
nt:tu toh mamma s boy h rahega,mein abi aata hoon
he also went under water
ak:nt,ap mein ab tak haar nah mai
nt;mujhe pat ah mein toh kissi aur kaam se ay hoon
ak:kiss kaam
he came near her
nt:i lov u akshara
ak:phir se kitne baar kahoge??
nt:sentence toh ek h h,par mauka toh doff h na,uss din mein hathi par baitkar kaha aj utni heightness par aur ab paani ke andar aur age b muje isse mauka milenge toh mein ye kehtha rahoonga
ak:ap..b..na
she huggd him 2 express her gratitude @ gave him another peck on his lip
they came up .3 of the m enjoyed much @they didnt leave a chance 2 disturb akshi @ she tried 2 defend them back
akshi cahnged karans dress as he w ant 2 play more in the park,he ran 2wards the garde n.she looked back but didnt see natik,she went 2 dressing room.,shocked 2 see natik standing there,he came near the door @ locked it
ak:nt ap door kyon lock kar rah h
nt:kyonk hame changr karna h na
ak:toh ap bahar jayiye
nt:nah jaa sakthe h hamare pass irf 10 minutes h uske baad ye rooms bhand kar denge phir subah h nikal paayenge,isiliye hame sath m change karna hoga
ak:sath m bilkul nah
nt:karna h pdega ak,apko yaad h meine kaha tha ek din apko mere saamne change karna h padega aur vo din aj h
ak:toh,,,phir ap apna ankhen bhand kigiye
nt:kyon mujhse kya chuppana
ak:pls...nt...dekhiye hamare pyaar ki khatir
nt:tek h badle mein mujhe kya milega
ak:jo ap bolenge!!1
nt:hm...toh...ap kitna vakth tayar hone mein laghthe h utna kisses agree???
ak:u r impossible teek h par haan cheating mat kigiyega
nt:poori koshish karoonga!!
he waited for 5 minuts now he cant wait more so he looked back but he was not much lucky becoz she hd already cjanged in 2 a saree ,nw she was trying 2 tie it around her waist,he came very close 2 her @ huggd her,
ak:apne...cheating kiya na...
ntnah...meri itna khush kismat kaham thoda late hogaya...:
she was very nervous 2 do it infront of him,so he helped her 2 do it,she felt a tingling sensation wen he touched her bare stomach,he sat on the ground@ corrected the plates of her saree
nt:ak,bahuth khushkismat se milthe h isse pati
hr eyes filled with tears @ she make him stand@ gave a pasiionate hugg 2 him
ak:aur vo khushkismat mewin hoon
she didnt wait him 2 ask she showred 5 kises on his face soon she realised wat she did @ tried 2 ran away 4m him but he hold her hand@came infront of her she moved back seeing him coming closer 2 her.she was trapped in between wall @ natik,she closed her eyes
nt:""u can close ur eyes wen u dont want 2 see it but u cant close ur heart wen u dnt want 2 feel my love""
she opened her eyes,he grabbed her by the waist caressing her face with the back of his fingures,he pressed a soft kiss 2 her 4head ,then near her ear making her shiver,he bent down 2 kiss her collar bone while she held him tightly,she slighly pushed him,she smiled at him with all her lv @ affection
ak:nt...ap b change kigiye...
he understood her embartessmebt ,he put a shirt @ asked her 2 put the buttons,she started doing it by continuosly loking in his eyes @ was smiling while he slipped his hands around her @ taced her face with his face,she asked him 2 stand staight
ak:jab ap button lagane keliye khade hote h na toh ap bilkul ek bache ki tarah lagthe h
nt:bache dil se sache hote h aur hum b apse sache dil se pyaar kartha h
aak:ap aur apki batein!!!
they came out @ they saw karan coming with a girl of same age as karan!!!???
so guyss hws this
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Edited by ashamol - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ashattiyee 👏👏 excellent update...oro partum enikku valare ishtammayi...morning scne thottu end le dressing room vare ellam adipoli...precap kalakkan...akshi sarikkum njettum...pavam naitik karaninte support kittan peda paadu pedunnundu 😆 fish pond scene adipoli...ethra possessive aanu naitik alle 😳 sky wheel scne gambeeram..loved the way he expressed his love to akshi😳😳 pond scne kalakkan...underwater romance ishtamaayi 😳😳cheria cheraia kaaryathil polum asha shradha cheluthunnundu...keep it up...athanu ashattiyude vijayam...👏⭐️ dressing roomil nadannathu entha😳😳nalla kalakkan adipoli gambheeran sadhanam😳😳👏
Edited by pvlaks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

edited

WOW asha nice part iloved it😳
I like that sence akshara tell to naithik i love karan wow what a scence yaar fab👏 writing yaar
and finally akshara naitik ki wish poorikaraygi wow😳
i like the romance in changing room wow tooo romatic 😳 😍
in this part i imagining all scences😍 asha
and thanks for pm and waiting for next part how naitik react to hear akshara suprised
Edited by fazeel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
asha so cute part well written
thanks 4 d pm

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