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Posted: 14 years ago
se u at 12,apozhethekum njan type cheyam
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part 1


next morning
akshi opened her eyes @ saw herself in his arms,she felt bad, becz of her he couldnt sleep properly 4m previous 2 days,while she was thinking these he woke up,his hands were paining as she rested her head in his chest through out the whole night.she said sorry but he told her 2 leave it,he become relieved felting she was absolutely fine now,he placed her head on her lap,she caressed his hair with 1 hand @ he hold the one @ caressed it,he placed a soft kiss on it,suddently a note(100 th sorry note,i thnk u remember) flewed @ fall near her heart❤️,natik understood this @ he waited till her 2 read it.

Bhool se koi bhool hui to
bhool samajh kar bhool jana.

Are… bhoolna sirf bhool ko,
bhool se bhi hame na bhulana.


risthe main dooriyan to aati rehti hain

Phir bhi dilo ko mila deti hai risthe

Wo risthe hi kiya jo naraz na ho
Par sache risthe rishton ko mana leti hai

s-some
o-one
r-ememebering
y-you


after each sentences her eyes filled with tears,a tear fall 4m her eye wen she completed the last sentence.natik caught it @ place a kiss on it
nt:apki anzoo b apki tarah bahuth sweet h!!
akshi blushed,she couldnt resist herself he kisses him on his 4head @ cheeks @ stopped at his lips,her shyness was preventing her,she closed her eyes @ kisses on his lips
nt:ye sab toh teek h,kal apne bataya nah ki ap mere wish poori karenge ya nah???
ak:kaisa wish mujhe nah pata!!!(more & more blush)
nt:nah pata abi batati hoon
he tickled her 2 make her remember
ak:;bas..bas...mujhe pata h.ap toh isse pooch rahe jaise ye koi tofa h jisse ap mangthe h mein apko lakar doon
nt:hm..kya karein,ab mujhse aur intezar nah hota,ab jalde se jald mujhe ek choti si akshara chahiye!!apko pata h bachpan mein,mein hamesha chahtha tha ki mere 100 bache ho vo b 59 ladka &50 ladki,
ak:(smiling loudly)100 bache!!baap re!!mujhse toh ek b samal nah jaata,kai ap ab b yah toh nah chahthi h???
nt::oh god nah,tab mujhe kya pata tha ki ye sab kitna mushkil h,kal mein sab jaan li,par ak,usse pyaar samjha tha toh vo zyaada nakhre nah kartha h na,,(holding his collar)akhir beta kiska h???
ak:sirf apka??
nt::apka b h,par karan mera photocopy h isiliye toh apke body guard bankar ghoom rahe h!1,ab mujhe b apke ek photocopy de do!!1
ak:par mujhe toh hamesha se ek hi bache ki icha thi,i thnk its better
nt::kya??bilkul nah ap apni decision badal ligiye
ak:;nt.yah h teek h,hum apna saara pyaar,time,care sab karan ko denge,2 bache hone par bahuth problem ho sakthi h,unke beech ego,aur mujhe pregnacy ki takleef b udani nahi padthi
nt:ye sab sirf filmy dialogues h ak,ap issmein mat padiye vaise b hum do hamare b do
ak:phir b
nt:pls ak,ap meri icha poori karenge,sirf ek baar aur
she was so confused
nt:toh teek hum ek voting kar lethe h,uske hisab se ab decision karan lega!1
ak:teek h,mujhe poora vishwaas h ki vo mera side lega kyonki mujhe lekar vo bahuth possessive h
natik jerked @ he sat up,he was sure that karan would support her,so he changed his track
nt:ak,ab itne badi decision karan kaise lega??hum khudi sochthe h
ak:boln se pehle sochna chahiye tha ab karan lega apki wish ka faisala

they came back 2 cochin by evening,they went 4 a walk in beach.they sat on the beach 4 having a drink,they were sitting face 2 face & karan on the table between them,natik was really in a romantic mood(obviously),he crossed their fingures @ pressed it,a killer smile was playing in his lips ,akshi understood this @ take back her hands back,then he pointed his cheeks asking 4 a sweet kiss,she rolled her eyes at him,karan was involved in his own world so he didnt notice it,he slowly bent 2wards her but before that waiter came @ take the orders,he began 2 tickle her legs with his legs(under the table)1rstly she ignored it ,he began 2 trace through upwards so she gave a kick using her leggs
waiter came @ gave mango juice,akshi shared her juice with karan but he want 2 have it alone so he moved 2 nearby chair,
nt:ap chahe toh mere sath share kar skthi h
ak:nah ap pigiye
nt moved his chair 2wards her
nt:pe loonga magar apke sath
they shared it looking at eachothers eyes @ holding each other,karan saw this @ he also want share his juice with akshi,natik put another staw in the glass @ 3 of them had it 4m the same glass
they started walking,karan was in between them holding their hands ,they talked 4 a long time @ was enjoying very much,then they settled on the beach enjoying the beauty of gods own country😉,natik @ karan started making house using sand@ they slowly completed its 1rst floor
,akshi was eagerly watching it,karan asked who all will stay in this house @ natik replied only he @ karan she didnt like this @ destroyed their house
ak::mere bina ghar ka haal isse h hoga @ she ran away 4m there.they chased her,natik almost reached near her but karan was far behind them
akshi slipped @ fall down @ natik 22 knowingly fall near her,they had an cute eye lock session(like the yesterday😉😉😉 1)waves crept in 2 them making completely wet but they were unaware of it,natik covered the distance @ bent down 2 kiss her but karan jumped in between them ,they suddently sat up ,karan tried 2 walk @ he walked 4 some distance,then will ran 2wards akshi @ would give her a kiss,he was smiling at everybody,some foreigners came @ shopok hands with him,natik already taught him hw 2 say words like good morning @ hello,he wished everybody with his babyish voice
natik take the oppurtunity @ laid on her lap
ak:apko toh bas ek mauka chahiye
nt:mauka mila toh fayda b udana chahiye
he slowly kissed on her hands
karan saw this,he couldnt digest it😡,he came near them @ asked natik 2 get up but he didnt as he get this oppurtunity less during these days so he dragged him @ himself sat on her lap
natik didnt say anything as he want his support in chote akshi matter he was trying 2 impress him in all possible way
while they were returnig they saw an ice scream parlour,natik brought 2 cones karan sudently take 1
ak:nt.ap nah khayenge
nt:ye apkeliye nah mereliye h,apko bukhar tha na so no ice scream ap toh bas hame dekthe rahiye
ak:;nah mujhe b chahiye mein ab bilkul teek h,hw mean nt??
nt:ak,ab kuch nah ho saktha kyonki uss shop mein saara cones khatam ho gaya apka man h toh ye khaligiye
ak:;koi baat nah ek toh h na hamare pass hum ississe share karenge
nt:nah ak ap khayiye
ak:;hum share karenge,hum alag thodi na h
both had it 4m the same cone at a same time
nt:;ak,mein ek aur lata hoo
ak:natik,par apne hi toh kaha tha na ki saara icescream kahatam ho gaya phir
nt:(stern smile)vo kya h na agar mein apse seedha sjhare karne ko kehtha toh ap nah manenge isiliye mein choot bola tha!!😳😳😳
ak:ap bilkul pagal h
nt:;vo toh h lekin apke pyaar mein haan
ak:shythaaannn...ab chale
they returned after watching the worthfull sunset

night
akshi came after a shower@ saw karan 2 natik fighting with the pillows,she noticed that natik was not defending him back where he always used 2 win
ak:kya bat h natik ap aj jaanpoochkar har rahe ho
nt:kyonki issmein mein haarkar b jeet jate h
ak:;vo kaise?
nt:agar ye jeet jata toh isko kitni khushii milega ,aur uske khushi dekhkar mere khushi 2 times ho gaata h.phir jeet toh mera huwa na!!!
ak:wow nt,i cant believe this ap toh ek typical pappa banthe jaa rahe ho,laghtha h ab mujhe b zyaada pareshan nah kaoonga hein
nt:(naughty smile,
pushed her 2wards him) iska credit toh ye chota badmash ka h,apko toh mein kabhi b pareshan kar sakhi h kyonki ap par mukhe poora haqqq hhh
he started hitting her with pillows @ karan 22 joined them after sometime he become tired 2 soon slet but our naksh were still fighting,in the middle her locket got sruck with his shirt,she tried it 2 unlock but she couldnt so she unbuttoned his shirt,natik acted as she was akshi
nt☺️☺️😳:"""nt ap kya kar rahe ho,karan udd jaayenge,apko iske siva kuch sujhtha h nah...chodiye na,,,mujhe,,jaane digiye..."""😍
ak:ap kabhi nah badlega,
nt:kyon mujhe badlna chahiye ap kahe toh mein vo b kar saktha hoon
ak:(smiling)kabhi nah ap jaisse h mujhe vaisse h ache lagthe h
nt:jaisee matlab??
he bent down,as soon as she closed her eyes,he couldnt controll his smile seeing her shyness
nt::baap re ap abi b kitna sharmati h!!!!
ak☺️:apna...bahuth bada vo... hein...
nt:thank u thank u
they slept in each others arms after giving a cute kiss on each others cheek!!!!!!!!

precap::2 major decisions
  1. karan kiske side mein??
  2. chota munna ya bada munna??
cacth it on nexr monday!!1
do read @ comment &hit the like butoon


Edited by ashamol - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ashattiye adyam congrats...puthiya threadnu...pinne nalla kalakkan update 😛 valare manoharamayirikkunnu...oro partum enikku ishtamaayi...naitikinte asha kollam...kourava pada venam enna asha.😳pavam akshi thendipoyene 😳...karaninte kurumbu enikku nanne bodhichu...nalla chekkan..kollam...naitikine mookku kondu ksha varappikkum😆 beach scene kalakki...thudakkathile avrude conversation was beautiful 😳...kochikku thirichu vanna sesham ulla part super...juice scene enjoy cheithu...last part athigambheeram..naitikinte dialogue enikku valiya ishtamaayi...precap adipoly...ini adutha monday ennuvarum...kaathirikkunnu 😃
Edited by pvlaks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
congratz asha 4 the 2nd thread 🥳 u r doin a fabulous job 👏 plz do cont ur ff as it z not only close to ur heart but our's too n i'd b grateful if u pm me wen u update the 1st part 😊
Edited by Edbelab - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Edbelab

congratz asha 4 the 2nd thread 🥳 u r doin a fabulous job 👏 plz do cont ur ff as it z not only close to ur heart but our's too n i'd b grateful if u pm me wen u update the 1st part 😊

ofcorse yaar i wil b back with my updates after some more time😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ashamol

ofcorse yaar i wil b back with my updates after some more time😃

i'll wait 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
1st of all congrats for ur new thread...👏👏 again one more mindblowing update...👍🏼 waiting eagerly for next part i think karan to needs lil sis...😛 hope for the best thanks for the pm & cont soon...😃
Edited by saman.17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
woww... nice part aasha... 👏👏
👏loved the cute scenes on three of them...
first scene is too good... liked naksh der... 😳
beach scene is soo cute ... 😳
n interesting precap... continue soon... awesome part... 😃

Edited by saru.g - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice part asha
waitng for next monday
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Posted: 14 years ago
eniku orikkal koode vaayikkanam...kashnam kashanm aayittu vayichathalle...innu ithu thanne pani.😳

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