Poem on NAKSH...

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_vinita_

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: cuteupasna
wah wah kya khub likha hai👏
luv u 4 dis again di grat work😉 😎

thanks upasna.. i'm sure even u can write.. atleast try it once 😉

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_vinita_

@_vinita_

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sweet_deepshi
fabulous job di...!u r a very very good poetess...!⭐️/5 stars!👍🏼

thank you sweet heart 😳 as i've promised very soon one 4 u also...😆

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_vinita_

@_vinita_

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Tafseer
hey another great attempt yaar...its too good...👏 4th n 5th stanzas are very good...keep it up Vini......👍🏼

thanks taffy... waise i knew ki u're going 2 love that part.. bahut dil se likha hai 😳..u known what main toh aur detail main likh rahi thi but then i controlled my emotions nahi toh again ppl would have thought ki naitik lusty hai🤣

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_vinita_

@_vinita_

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: nahtani88
its really amazing
write more
👏

thanks Amy 😃... waise earlier i've written on YR also... 😆

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_vinita_

@_vinita_

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: fazeel
wow nice poem on naksha yarr it too good 👏

thank you sooo much fazeel.. i'm glad u liked it 😆

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Hey Vini🤗

very nyc poem yaar👏👏👏👏👏👏.............evn btr thn d earlir one😳😳😳😳😳

each n every wrd is juzzzz perfect⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

the best line is "Her cute 'baalon ki lath' increases his desire"🤣

evry line is filled wid love❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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_vinita_

@_vinita_

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: divi4u
Hey Vini🤗

very nyc poem yaar👏.............evn btr thn d earlir one😳

each n every wrd is juzzzz perfect⭐️

the best line is "Her cute 'baalon ki lath' increases his desire"🤣

evry line is filled wid love❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

thanks divi 🤗... but i'm right naa it does increases his desire... waise slowly i'm realizing one thing u ppl only want masala,,,😆 if dimri cannot fulfill our dreams.. i'll do the needful 😆

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_vinita_

@_vinita_

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: RACHANA_M
Awsome nice poem dude

thanks rachana...😃

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: gutky

thanks divi 🤗... but i'm right naa it does increases his desire... waise slowly i'm realizing one thing u ppl only want masala,,,😆 if dimri cannot fulfill our dreams.. i'll do the needful 😆

its d only thng which inc. his desire

haa v r only such poems n FF, OSs bharose😆😆😆