Tum Dena Saath Mera-Naksh FF part 13 @ pg 47..

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey kamaudi plz updt ur FF aftr exams:)

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Originally posted by: divi4u
Hey kamaudi plz updt ur FF aftr exams:)

sure di..

18th march.. pakka.!!!

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Divya

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Originally posted by: moonlight08
sure di..
18th march.. pakka.!!!

k k

i'll wait.......i really love ur FF

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hey guys..

i know.. i know.. FF likhe hue bahut time ho gya hai.. kya karu.. was so busy with exams.. but im finally back with 11th part of Tum Dena Saath Mera.. and this part is entirely.. entirely dedicated to divi di..😃 vo agar mere peeche nhi padti to i think 11 part to 2012 mein hi update hota..😆😆

but here i go.. previous part on page 32..

part 11

naitik sees a teddy bear which has "i love you naitik" written on it.. naitik is thoroughly touched by this gesture of akshara.. he doesn;t know how to react on this..

Naitik : akshara.. ye kya hai.?? ye aapne kiya.??

Akshara : ha naitik.. ye maine kiya.. aap mere liye itna kuch karte hai.. to kya main aapke liye itna bhi nhi kar sakti.?? main jaanti hu jo aapne mere liye kiya uske saamne ye teddy bear bahut chota hai..

naitik stops akshara..

Naitik : akshara.. aisa mat kahiye.. iss teddy mein aapka pyaar chupa hai.. duniya ki badi se badi cheez iske saamne pheeki hai.. sach akshara.. muje bahut accha laga aapne mere liye itna kiya.. thanx akshara..

Akshara : bus.. ye thanx vanx chodiye.. aur ise vaha side table par rakh dijiye.. taki jab meri aur aapki ladai ho.. to aap ise dekh kar ye samajh sake ki maine jo bhi kiya hoga vo galti se hi kiya hoga..

Naitik : kya akshara.. itne acche mahaul mein aap ladai le aayi..

Akshara : aap to bura maan gye naitik.. n she kissed his cheeks lovingly..

Naitik : muje chodiye akshara.. muje neend aa rhi hai..

Akshara : accha ji.. maine aapko pakad rakha hai ya aapne mujhe.??

Naitik : aap hi ne muje apne pyar mein jakad rakha hai ki main to dekhiye hil bhi nhi paa rha hu..

Akshara (blushing madly) : kya naitik.. aap bhi..

Naitik : main bhi kya akshara.??😳

Akshara : kuch nhi.. aap so jaaiye.. muje bhi bahut neend aa rhi hai..

good night..

Naitik (disappointed) : good night akshara..

naitik ne good night to keh diya.. lekin he wasn't feeling sleepy.. nor was akshara.. but she was badly embarrased that she couldn't even dare to look into naitik's eyes.. as a result.. she was shivering badly..

Naitik noticed this.. and went on to hug her tightly..

he was humming the song jab koi baat bigad jaaye..

Natik : tum se mil ke hua yakeen.. hum pehle bhi mile kahi.. silsila.. ye sadiyon ka.. koi aaj ki baat nhi..😳

Akshara as a result almost fainted out of shock.. love.. and embarassment..

Akshara : naitik.. ye aap kya kar rhe hai.. aur ye man hi man aap kon sa gaana gungunaaye ja rhe hai.??

Naitik : tum dena saath mera.. o humnava.. na koi hai.. na koi tha.. zindagi mein tumhare siva.. tum dena saath mera.. o humnava....................

that's it for today.. hope u all enjoyed it.. next part i can;t promise it will be soon.. but it will difinitely be there one day..😆😆

comments.. suggestions and complains always welcome..😃

Regards..😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey nice update 😃 thanx 4 continuing ff.

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madhavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Good goingv kaumudi 👏 lakin ye to batan tha ki aage kya huva 😉 tum bhi na cv ki trha hami dremdikhke bhag gayi galt baat . 😳

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466726

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Superb update dear 👏 Thanx 4 continuing wid d ff nd thanx 2 divi as well 4 coaxing her 2 cont 😃

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

wow di... really nyc update... thanx for the pm.. plz cont soon!

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Originally posted by: madhaviben
Good goingv kaumudi 👏 lakin ye to batan tha ki aage kya huva 😉 tum bhi na cv ki trha hami dremdikhke bhag gayi galt baat . 😳

di aap to kitne samajhdaar ho.. khud hi samajh jaao na aage kya hua..😛