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Posted: 15 years ago

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ~*~Part 5~*~ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘

Ur FF is simply outstanding ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. NAITIK is damn cuteeeeeeee and so sweettt.. I knew it that u have something special for AKSHI ๐Ÿ˜Š. Well written and edited๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. My eyes were full of tears when NAITIK said this award is just of AKSHI..Whatever I m today is bcoz of AKSHI...woh saari raat jaagti thi mera kaam finish karwaane ke liye..DADDA JI se mujhe sair par na le jaane ki baat karti thi....khud bimaar hone ke baawjud bhi mere liye itna kuchh karti thi.....meri har galtiyo ko maaf kar deti hai......๐Ÿ‘. He is simply oitstanding. And after this hall was full of applauses ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.
I love it....................... I like it......................i enjoyed it....................
I can imagine whole scenenario๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜.
And after awrd speech AKSHI's weted eyes...............khushi ke aansu. She wants only to feel her presenece in her darling hubby's life but her hubby dedicated his whole life-love to his sweet & innocent wife ๐Ÿ˜ณโ˜บ๏ธ. And after this NAKSH's phone convo.....was so magical. They both were expressing their love in naughty style๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. KHANA dekhkar NAITIK ko AKSHI ki yaad aayi. And when he said dont say thanx AKSHARA lagta hai apne client se baat kar raha hu....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ Bilkul thik kaha hamare cutie NAITIK ne. Afterall NAITIK ne galt toh kuchh nahi kaha. Jo bhi kaha SOLAH AANE sach tha woh. But after this NAITIK's promise to AKSHI to be with her everytime...to go to movie....spend more and more time with her bring tears on my eyes๐Ÿ˜ญ. How innocent love they have...โค๏ธ. They r really magical couple๐Ÿ˜.
Very magical FF dear. i like it. Good job๐Ÿ‘ Keep it on๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Edited by pankhi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pankhi

Before saying anything for FF I want 2 say sorry to u dear. U dedicate this FF to me and ๐Ÿ˜กI--foolish girl๐Ÿ˜ก was not there to read it. I m so sorry dear๐Ÿ˜ญ. Actually I went for 20 days trip. I was not in home. And my whole 20 days shedule was very tight.

I m very sorry dear. Sachchi kaan pakad ke sorry I will not repeat my mistake again in near future. Sorrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

~*~Part 4~*~

Ur FF was so sweet๐Ÿ˜ณ. Everything is there. ๐Ÿ‘Love-sadness-careness-anger-respect-excitement everythingโญ๏ธ. NAITIK was so excited and nervous in flight. poor man didnot get chance to call his lovely wife. And AKSHI was also so concerned for him. And when NAITIK called her..her exxpression was mix up of happiness-careness and idol bahu. She asked him whether he called to MOM or not. So sweet a GOOD D-I-L๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. And when she said "NAYE SEHAR MEIN AKELE" stole my heart๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ. When she said โ˜บ๏ธI LOVE U โ˜บ๏ธ....My dil goes hhhmmmhmmm. And when she messaged him that "u r luking handsome".....โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ. So sweet. NAITIK to handsome lagega hi afterall itni sweet aur samajhdaar wife jo hai uske paas . And whole family was so excited to see NAITIK on T.V.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿฅณ And NAKSH's convo was so meaningfull. How maturely they talked to each other....AKSHI was trying her level best to calm down his nervousness and NAITIK was listening her each & every word just like a good husband๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜. Verys ensitive-romantic-meaningfull scene ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ. Finaly NAITIK bagged an ward and thanxed 2 everyone ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘ except AKSHI ....???? But why he forget to mentione her name..??? ๐Ÿ˜• I think he will tell something special for his lovely wife ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰. Poor AKSHI was sad. I am also feeling bad for her. I hope NAITIK will surprise us in his next WINNING SPEECH. I have full trust on NAITIK and u. I know u have something special and different for AKSHI dear๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. Very sweet and nice FF dear ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. I like it๐Ÿ˜ณ. Keep posting ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.
For ur FF-------
Very soon I will read ur **part 5** and give my comment bcoz I have short of time. Plzz try to understand

aww.. plz dnt apologise pankhi.. itz really k.. i understand.!!
n thnx so much for ur wonderful comment.. loved it from the bottom of my heart.!!!!
thnx again.!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rose_e

**part 3**
Dadda ji is 2 much. Naitik ko toh dara hi diya. Aur naitik ko 2-2 award mil rahe hai ๐Ÿฅณ . I m so happy. Young achiever and best director [:D/] . Good going Naitik. keep it on. I am proud of u ๐Ÿ˜Ž .
Par bechaari Akshara nahi gayi Naitik ke saath. Naitik in delhi akele akele.
**part 4**
Very good FF. Naitik aur akshara ka phone conversation bahut achchha tha. Aur Naitik ki award speech bhi achchii thi. PAr usne Akshara ka naam nahi liya . Aur kisi ne ghar mein dhyaan bhi nahi diya ki Naitik ne Akshara ka naam nahi liya .
**Part 5**
Naitik ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘. I m so happy to listen his speech ๐Ÿ˜ . Kitna cutely usne Akshara ko thanx kaha [:D/] . He is so cute. I love it. Keep it on๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ .
And sorry for late reply. main baahar gayi hui thi. Kal hi aayi hu wapas. Sorrryyyy for late reply.
And thax for PM ๐Ÿ˜ณ

u read all the parts in one go.??
thnx yar.. n plz dnt apologise yar.. i understand..
n thanx so much for ur lovely comments.!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pankhi

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ~*~Part 5~*~ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘

Ur FF is simply outstanding ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. NAITIK is damn cuteeeeeeee and so sweettt.. I knew it that u have something special for AKSHI ๐Ÿ˜Š. Well written and edited๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. My eyes were full of tears when NAITIK said this award is just of AKSHI..Whatever I m today is bcoz of AKSHI...woh saari raat jaagti thi mera kaam finish karwaane ke liye..DADDA JI se mujhe sair par na le jaane ki baat karti thi....khud bimaar hone ke baawjud bhi mere liye itna kuchh karti thi.....meri har galtiyo ko maaf kar deti hai......๐Ÿ‘. He is simply oitstanding. And after this hall was full of applauses ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.
I love it....................... I like it......................i enjoyed it....................
I can imagine whole scenenario๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜.
And after awrd speech AKSHI's weted eyes...............khushi ke aansu. She wants only to feel her presenece in her darling hubby's life but her hubby dedicated his whole life-love to his sweet & innocent wife ๐Ÿ˜ณโ˜บ๏ธ. And after this NAKSH's phone convo.....was so magical. They both were expressing their love in naughty style๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. KHANA dekhkar NAITIK ko AKSHI ki yaad aayi. And when he said dont say thanx AKSHARA lagta hai apne client se baat kar raha hu....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ Bilkul thik kaha hamare cutie NAITIK ne. Afterall NAITIK ne galt toh kuchh nahi kaha. Jo bhi kaha SOLAH AANE sach tha woh. But after this NAITIK's promise to AKSHI to be with her everytime...to go to movie....spend more and more time with her bring tears on my eyes๐Ÿ˜ญ. How innocent love they have...โค๏ธ. They r really magical couple๐Ÿ˜.
Very magical FF dear. i like it. Good job๐Ÿ‘ Keep it on๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

thnx a lot pankhi.. again.!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlight08

aww.. plz dnt apologise pankhi.. itz really k.. i understand.!!

n thnx so much for ur wonderful comment.. loved it from the bottom of my heart.!!!!
thnx again.!!!

so sweet of u ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: DaZzLiNgShReYa

nice part dear......cont. soon......

thank u so much...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello guys.. bak with Tum Dena Saath Mera again... sry for being late but i just got busy with school stuff.. moreover my result will be out in a day or two.. because of which m having sleepless nights.. nevertheless.. here i go.....
Part 6...
it's one o'clock rite now.. akshara has gone to sleep.. but still.. there's no sign of sleep in her eyes.. she cant help remembering the words said by naitik for her.. she is lying on the bed.. n suddenly she sees naitik's foto.. she takes the foto in her hand.. and...
" aap bahut gande hai naitik.. aap mujhse itna pyar karte hai.. mujhe itni respect dete hai.. meri itni care karte hai... kyon naitik.?? mujhe itna palkon pe mat bithaiye.. mujhe itna hawa mein mat udaiye ki jab main neeche giru to aundhe muh giru.. uss pal main toot jaungi naitik.. aur fir main abhi jud nhi paungi... "
she says this.. n with tears in her eyes.. as she is looking at naitik's fotograph.. she feels that naitik is saying ...
" kyon na bithau main aapko palkon pe.?? aur agar aapko girne ka dar hai na.. to mera vada hai aapse.. aapke lie main humesha peeche khada rhunga.. aapko kabhi girne nhi dunga.. aur.. tootne ka to sawal hi nhi aata.. kyonki main aapko girne hi nhi dunga.. aapko toot te hui dekhna to bahut door ki bat hai..."
akshara is happy at this.. though this is purely her imagination.. she could sumhow sense that watever she has imagined would be true.. no matter how difficult the journey of life may be.. it was her belief that naitik wud always be there on her side to lend her support whenever she will need it...
coincidently.. back in delhi..
naitik.. while lying on his bed..
"kash.. aaj akshara mere saath hoti.. unki awaaz mein jo khushi dikhi.. vo unki aankhon mein bhi dekh pata main.. par.. koi bat nhi.. agli bar sahi.. agli bar mere har chote - bade kam mein akshara mere saath hogi.. main unhe khush dekhna chahta hu.. aap chinta mat kijiega akshara.. aap kabhi bhi mere hote hue apne aap ko akela nhi paengi.. apke har kadam pe main aapke saath hu.. taki agar aap ladkhadane lage.. to main sahara ban ke aapko bacha saku... ye mera vada hai aapse..."
he takes out his wallet.. sees akshara ( in foto ).. wishes her gud nyt by kissing her fotograph.. sets the alarm for the next day.. n goes to sleep...
the same goes for akshara....
Next morning..
Akshara is bit late in getting up..
Gayitri : bhabhi ma.. dekhiye bahu ko.. kitni der se so rhi hai.. uth hi nhi rhi hai.. pta nhi kya ho gya hai use.. main jaa kr dekh kr ati hu ki use akhir hua kya hai..
Bhabhi ma : rehne de choti dulhan.. kal rat mein sote sote use bahut der ho gyi thi.. kareeb 1 baje tak to vo sone gyi thi.. aur pta nhi munna ke bina use kab neend aayi hogi..
Gayitri : arre.. to kisne bola tha use ek baje tak jagne ke lie.. so jati vo.. ab dekhiye.. uth nhi rhi hai..
Bhabhi ma : choti dulhan.. tum bekar mein pareshaan ho rhi ho.. munna ko award milna tha.. aise mein uski patni nhi jagegi to kya hum or tum jagenge.?? aur dekho.. munna bhi aata hi hoga.. vo udaipur pahunch chuka hai.. vo aaega.. aur khud hi jaga dega bahu ko.. tum rehne do.. bechari ki neend agar nhi puri hogi to kahi beemar na pad jaaye.. vaise bhi garmi itni ho rhi hai.. kahi kuch ulta seedha ho gya to.?? sone do use... chalo...
GULABO.... zara ye matar cheel de...
Gayitri : ji bhabhima.. aap thik keh rhi hai.. bahu rat mein der se soyi hai.. use sone deti hu main..
A while later.. Naitik arrives...
Naitik : ma.. main aa gya..
All come rushing out to welcum him.. except akshara..
he takes blessings of all.. n asks for akshara.. he is told that akshara is asleep..
Naitik : so rhi hai... abhi tak.?? tabiyat to thik hai na unki.??
Bhabhi ma : ha.. ha.. munna.. vo kal rat mein bahut der se soyi thi.. islie.. aur vaise bhi abhi 730 hi to baje hai.. islie humne sone dia..
Naitik : hm.. unhi ke lie to maine apni flight change kar li.. subah 5 baje wali kar li.. aur vo hai ki so rhi hai... huh..
Gayitri : naraz kyon hota hai munna.. ja.. uthale jaa ke use.. vo bhi khush ho jaaegi.!!!
Back in Naksh's room..
Naitik enters the room.. and is stunned by akshara's beauty.. usually.. she is the one who wakes him up every morning.. but now.. naitik has got the golden oppurtunity.. he thinks sumthng.. and then proceeds to the bed..........................................................
to be continued..
comments.. complaints and suggestions are always welcum..
press the lyk button if u think this is worth mentioning.!!!!
Regards...
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update dear...good luck for your results..
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow vwryy nice yaar!!!!
best of luck
and very cute n lovely updte!!!
cont.sooon plssssssssss

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Posted: 15 years ago
wowww dear very nyc update
i luv d cuteness in ur FF
n way u wrote their feelings ws awesome !!!
cont. soon n All the Best 4 ur result !!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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