Tum Dena Saath Mera-Naksh FF part 13 @ pg 47..

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Drishti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: moonlight08
yeah.. quite true yar.. i love tis quote..
thnx fir ur compliments are...

do read the next part too.. it has been updated..

aww ure most welcome 😊

aww thnuk so much

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Drishti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

hey firstly im rlly sorry for commenting sooo late...was out of town

the update wassss awesomeee!!!..it was mind blowing...loved it..so romantic

keep it up...n do continue soon

if u dont mind...cud u pls pm me the next time u update??

thnks...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Drishti...
hey firstly im rlly sorry for commenting sooo late...was out of town
the update wassss awesomeee!!!..it was mind blowing...loved it..so romantic

keep it up...n do continue soon

if u dont mind...cud u pls pm me the next time u update??

thnks...:)

hey thanx a lot..

yeah..

will surely do that next tym.

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Drishti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: moonlight08
hey thanx a lot..
yeah..

will surely do that next tym.

ure most welcome 😊

okie...thnks

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457639

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Drishti...
ure most welcome 😊
okie...thnks

yar m not having enuf of ur signature.... everytym i read it... i feel lyk m lost.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Drishti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: moonlight08
yar m not having enuf of ur signature.... everytym i read it... i feel lyk m lost.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ayie...lol...i noe its rlly rlly nice...and sooo true

hey do one thing..y dont u set is as ur signature also?...like if u want to

i wont mind...😊

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#97

Originally posted by: Drishti...
ayie...lol...i noe its rlly rlly nice...and sooo true
hey do one thing..y dont u set is as ur signature also?...like if u want to

i wont mind...😊

arre no yar...

i wud put sumthng dats better than urs.!!!!

fir aap mere signature ki tareef karte nhi thakoge.!!!

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#98

hello guys..

me bak with yet another part of Tum Dena Saath Mera... hope u all lyk it.!!

Part 5...

naitik goes to collect the award

Naitik : ye award mera apna hai.. is award ke liye main kisi ko bhi thank u nhi bolna chahta hu.. ye mera apna award hai.. aur main ise kisi ke sath bhi share nhi karna chahta.....

Singhania mansion..

Akshara is a bit surprised at naitik's speech.. she wanted him to be confident.. but she never wanted him to be so much over-sonfident that he even forgets to thank his well-wishers..

Delhi :

Naitik : bus ye award main share nhi.. kisi ko puri tarah se dena chahta hu.. i want to dedicate this award to my very beautiful and loving wife.. without whom i wud have never acheived anythng in life... akshara.. ye award aapke liye hai.. iss par mera ya kisi ka bhi koi haq nhi hai.. agar aap na hoti.. to aaj main yaha nhi khada hota.. thank u akshara... thank u so much jo aapne mera humesha saath dia.. har mushkil daur mein aap mere saath khadi hui aur meri har galti ko nazar andaaz karti chali gayi... mujhe vo din aaj bhi yad aate hai jab der raat tak jaag kr aap mera kam khatm karvati thi.. daddaji ko manati thi ki mujhe aaj sar par na bheje... chahe aapki tabiyat thik na ho.. lekin fir bhi meri har baat maanti thi.. aaj main sochta hu.. agar aap nhi hoti na akshara.. to main kuch bhi nhi hota.. aap mera saath yun hi deti rhiega akshara.. mujhe bahut khushi hogi.. thank u...

the whole hall is filled with sounds of applause.. eveyone was happy for this youn acheiver.!!!

Singhania mansion :

akshara is moved.. her eyes are filled with tears of happiness.. she had expected her name to b called out by naitik in order to acknowledge her presence in his life.. but she had never expected so much.. she was surprised at naitik.. not even once did he let her noe that he was planning sumthng lyk dis for her.. she was very happy today.. on noticing that naitik had moved downstairs after collecting his award.. she decides to call her.. but just den.. her fone starts to ring.. very obviously.. it's naitik on the other side..

Naitik : hello akshara.. soyi to nhi na aap akshara.??

AKshara : arre nhi naitik.. abhi tak aap nhi soye.. to main kaise so sakti hu.. vaise naitik.. thank u..

Naitik : thank u... par kyo.??

Akshara : aap to aise keh rhe hai.. jaise aapko kuch pata hi nhi hai..

Naitik : oh.. aaj ke liye.. kya akshara.. aap mujhe thank u mat bola kijiye.. mujhe accha nhi lagta.. mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise main apne kisi client se baat kar rha hu.. jo bat bat par thank u aur sry bolna padta hai..

Akshara : arre wah.. main bolu to main aapki client.. aur aap bolein to.??

Naitik : arre.. meri baat alag hai.. accha chodiye.. ye sab batein jab main ghar aunga.. tab karenge. accha aapko pta hai kya... yaha par bahut hi accha khana mil rha hai.. aur main aapko bahut miss kar rha hu..

Akshara : aapko meri yadd khana dekh kar aayi hai.??

Naitik : arre nhi akshara.. vo bat ye hai.. ki kuch dino se main kaam mein itna busy tha.. ki aapko dhang se waqt hi nhi de paya.. kitna man tha aapka.. mere saath movie dekhne ka.. dinner par jaane ka.. bus islie.. par vaada.. ab se saara wakt aapka..

AKshara : naitik.. aapne itna socha.. mere liye vahi bahut hai.. thik hai.. jab aap vaapis aaenge.. tab ghumne chalenge hum..

Naitik : ha.. bilkul..

Akshara : vaise aap kal kab aa rhe hai naitik.??

Naitik : kal subah meri 7 baje ki flight hai.. to main 930 tak pahunch jaunga..

Akshara : arre wah.. sambhal kar aaiega.. (n she yawns.)

Naitik : ha.. akshara.. aap chinta mat kijiye.. lagta hai aapko neend aa rhi hai.. jaaiye.. or so jaaiye.. kal mil ke bat krenge.. gud nyt.. aur i luv u.!!!!

Akshara : ha.. naitik.. gud nyt.. and i luv u too.. kal nikalne se pehle mujhe fone zarur kijiyega.. bye.!!!

Naitik : bye.!!!

Akshara prepares to go to sleep.. puts the hall in order.. switches off the light fan.. n goes to sleep..

she is very happy she wants to be with naitik at this time.. but unfortunately.. she cant.. so.. thinking of naitik.. she goes to sleep.. it's 1 o'clock rite now..............................................

to be continued..

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Regards.!!!