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Posted: 15 years ago
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well after watching the friday episode i felt to write something.my track starts from there. when akshara was praying to god.then soon rajbanna comes nd calms her down she says bauji pls trust me i m not involved in this.then rb says dont worry i hav ful trust on u .he says now wipe ur tears nd come down.seeing akshara coming with rb everyone is shocked.daddajee says rajbanna?????????.then mamaji says beta!!! thare se ye asha nahi thi issi ke karan aaj is ghar ki beti ne is ghar ke niyam tode.rb says nahi mamaji issmein akshara bitiya ki koi galti nahi hai agar hai to nandini aur mohit ki.gayatri says aapko to kabhi bahu ki galti dikhaai nahi deti.u always feel that akshara is right nd we all are wrong.gm could say more rb cuts nd says u ll hav always misunderstood akshara whether it was a time when nandini but dj cuts him.everyone starts yelling at akshara.after hearing all this at a akshara says bas kijiye bahut bol liya aaplogon ne meri koi galti hone ke bavajood mujhe itna balabhura bhola maine mmafi bhi maangi.bauji mujhe maaf kar dijiye ye log kabhi aapki baat nahi manenge.par mujhe khushi hai is baat ki kam se kam apne mujhe samjha.suddenly a car is heard.bhabhimaa says is waqt kaun aa gaya?soon we see shaurya coming inside.seeing shaurya everyone is shocked.akshara ran towards her daadu at starts crying shaurya consoles her nd says why u called me akshara in haste i was in office nd u even said not to tell an1 at home.akshara says daadu take me home ri8 now i dont want to be in this house .shaura says what happened she says dadu ill tell u the matter at home ri8 now i dont want to be in this house.ill bring all my stuff will u help me daadu.akshara then go to her room nd brings all her stuff with the help of shaurya.he again ask akshara tell me the matter.she says ill tell u by the way to our house.everybody is standin nd naitik is also watching akshar coming down with a big bag then akshara goes to rb nd says i m sorry bauji but i could not tolerate any more neglection from this family .i want to go forever to my home.naitik nd company is all shocked .rb says bitiya but then aksh says pls bauji allow me to go to my house.then akshara leaves.she does not look at naitik nd then goes.

at maheshwari house

rajshri says maa varsha choti.then all women folk says what happen why u r so tensed.rajshri says ratan called just now nd informed that maa is coming nd she would be reaching now.everyone is tensed.varsha says now naani will again starts yelling at me.daadi says come down she has promised akshara .

in the car

akshara is crying.shaurya stops his car .he says akshara now tell me the matter.akshara tells him the whole story.after hearing this he says u would have told me that time i woild have yelled at them.how can they .akshara says leave it daadu lets go home.

at maheshwari

everyone is shocked to see akshara.vishambhar says akshara.akshara ran towards him nd starts crying at the top of her voice.everyone gets tensed.kaka ask akshar what happend why u r here at so late.akshara is not in a position.soon they she shaurya carrying akshara bags.rajshri gets more tense.she ask then shaurya discloses all the matter.everybody gets shockd .dadi ask varsha to take her upstairs.then in the living area everyone sits nd says how can they do this to akshara .how can jamaisa mistrust her.suddenly nani makes the entry.she says arrey ye kya unlogon ne meri rajkumari ko itna rulaya .wo samajhte kya hain apne aap ko galti koi aur kare aur saza kissi aur ko.she then ask shaurya take me to that house.ri8 noweveryone gets more tensd they say how can u go there maa but nani asusual says tum log bas yahi bat karte raho main dekhti huun unhe.shaurya could say anything but he gets beating from nani's batawa.he says okk nani.

at singhania house
everyone is sitting.rb breaks his silence now says to mamaji now ur happy what u wanted has been fulfilled.he says yes now the trouble has gone away .suddenly nani comes inside nd says trouble has not goneaway samdhisaa.everyone says nanijee.she says jitni bholi dikhoo huun utni huun na.meri naatin ne kya kiya jo aaplogon ne uske saath ye bartav kiya.mamajee says that u know she has made the reputation of this house at hell nd ur asking us what ur daughter has done.nani says samdisaa nandini is not my daughter.its urs.aap log to aise keh rehe hain jaise meri naatin ne pyaar ki hai.arrey aap apni beti ko samjhaiye.ussne aap logo ki maan maryada ka khayal thodi na rakha.mamaji says to apki beti ne usse ye sab paath padhaya .nani says to kya aapki beti koi choti bacchi hai ki use jo padhaya jayega wo padh legi kya uske paas itni akl nahi hai.bhabhimaa says issmein nandini ki kya galti hai to wo naadaan hai.bahu ko use rokna chahiye tha.nani says to 28 saal ki ladki naadan hai to 19 saal ki ladki samajhdar hai?nani further adds that aapki beti ko ye khyal nahi aaya ki jab prem kiya to use samajhna chahiye ki uske ghar ki maan maryada kahaan gayi?nani could says further but shaurya says nani ab bas bhi kijiye aur chaliye yahan se.nani then leaves.
after nani leaves mamaji says ye dekh tunne kis ghar apne munna ka byah te kiya jinnhe koi tameej nahi hai.rajbanna says kyun mamji aapko bura kyun laga.kyunki unhone sach kaha ki nandini ki galti hai ya issliye ki unhone jo bhi kaha aapke paas unke koi sawaal ka jawab nahi tha.sahi kehte hain log sacchi bate hamesa karvi hoti hai.aur aap sab ko is liye bura lag raha hai ki aapko kissi ne aayina dikhay.nd then rb leaves from ther.
frnds tell me do u like this or not.pls do give ur comments on it
Edited by shiraja - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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umm... i dnt think akshara will herself leave the house.. it does not go with her image..
she would be thrown out... if ever this kinda thng happens..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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actually i wanted that akshara should too hav some self respect nd this is only the beginning tomorrow ill add more to this.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shiraja

actually i wanted that akshara should too hav some self respect nd this is only the beginning tomorrow ill add more to this.

oh.k.. all the bst..
btw.. plz read my one shot too... n comment on it.!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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okkkkkkay ill read ur one shot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really nice!!!!!👏👏👏
I just wished that in the serial too she had left the house on her own rather than being thrown out.😍😍😍
Please do update soon.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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frnds ill update this tomorrow as i lost the page in which i had written it.tomorrow theres a holiday so ill search it or ill write the fresh.anyway happy lohri and makar sankranti to u all.i hope all ur saddness get burns nd may the coming year bring happiness to all indiaforum members and specially to yeh rishta forum members

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