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Posted: 15 years ago
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well im back again this time with a shava oneshot.this is done specially for sonal(sonalwade)
hope u like it and sorrry for th delay!!


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it was getting darker as the sun went down, and dark clouds formed outside as the signs of an arriving storm crept in.the lights had been lit and still she was sitting in darkness in her room.there was a storm brewing inside her.
she sat on the couch near the window .the curtains were rising and falling due to the strong wind blowing outside.tears rolled down her cheeks as she thought of the her moments with shaurya.yes shaurya was her husband he was her life.he meant everything to her and she loved him immensely and it was the same back till. till the model arrived.she cried her heart out thinking about the changes that had come in his beahviour after lavanya's arrival.
she had been crying all day long and hadn't had any food since the morning.she was looking really worn out.many a times rajshri,sunanina chachi and dhania had come to her room to urge her to eat but she din't feel like.
she felt thirsty and slowly got up and went to the bedside table.she took the jug and found it empty.this meant she had to go down to get water and she had to face their questions.
she wiped her tears and proceeded towards the door.she went down the stairs at a slow pace ,went ot the kitchen asked dhaniya to fill the jug and bring it upstairs.she walked back slowly and she suddenly felt dizzy ,she tried to call someone but culdn't and was falling down when she felt 2 hands gripping her firmly.she fainted.
it was shaurya he had come back from work and was abt to go upstairs when he saw varsha.she was abt to fall on the ground.he took her upstairs and laid her on the bed.
rajshri called the doctor and shaurya sat by her his hands in hers. varsha had not talked to him properly for the last few days.she din't even answer his questions.
he turned to the door hearing footsteps the doctor had arrived .he quickly got up and went out.the doctor checked on varhas and came out.she said that varsha was having high fever.and she had low pressure too. rajshri told her that she hadn't had any food from the morning.
shaurya was shocked to hear that.the doctor asked them to give her full rest and gave some capsules and gave them a prescription.
omi kaka took it from shaurya and he went out to get the medcines.shaurya went to leave the doctor till the door.rajshri was sitting by varsha when shaurya came up.she asked him to take care of her and went out.
shaurya closed the door behind her and went to change.he changed into a t-shirt and pyjamas.
omi kaka brought the medicines and dhaniya had brought food and water.
shaurya was keeping everything on the table when he heard varsha whimper in sleep.
he went near her to catch the words "shaurya".... "shaurya" mujhe chodke mat mat jaana "
he went and sat near her.he took her hands in his and kissed the top of it. he had no clue why varsha was saying this.he loved her like anything.she was his life ..
he sat by her resting his head on the bed rest her hands in his.he dozed of soon.
varsha opened her eyes she was abt to get up when she saw shaurya sitting next to her. holding her hand.a tear escaped her eyes and as if knowing about this shaurya woke up that moment.he looked at varsha and saw that she was awake. he ran his hands though her hair. he kissed her for head.he helped her sit up. she looked down afraid to face him.
shaurya lifted her face and asked her whether she has any doubts on his love. varsha culdn't hold back longer and she cried. shaurya said i don't know why u felt so but please understand ur my life and i won't be able to live without u.varsha hugged shaurya and cried and cried he hugged her back and patted her back. varsha told him about the problems and shaurya told her that he liked her the way she is.he brought her food and fed her with his hands.he made her have the medicine and they both decided to watch a movie.
they both sat watching t.v which was adjacent to the bed.
varsha fell asleep resting her head on his shoulder.he switched off the tv and made her sleep.

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please do hit the button if u like it!!😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sethu................I loved the description at the beginning................It's just pitch perfect............The similie that compares the outside storm and the storm inside Varsha's heart was just amazing...............Good thought! 👍🏼 And yeah!Thanx 4 the dedication..............it felt special! ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice oneshot..............
thanks for the pm......
ananya_krish thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey ya it was amazing. one shot:-)👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow thats a nice and cute one...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey shwetha...
thnx 4 d dedication dear.....it felt very special yar-lik appu said....
n ure oneshot ws jst simple marvellous......
i totalllly luved d expressions u used esp d first para...hats offf 2 ya......
i luved d entire scene........
2 tell u honestly u hv improved a lot shwetha...*clap* *clap* *clap*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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simply gorgeous........................👏
outstanding.....keepi it uppppppppppppppppp

& thnxxx alottt for the Dedication 🤗
Edited by starry.phoenix - 15 years ago
Anurulz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey it was a beautiful oneshot..great work..
sonalwade thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnx a lot dear atlast i got d shot
thnk u so much
gr8 shot hope creatives read ur shot and they will show d same in d serial too
but really luv ur shot
and hope u will make some more shot of shava '
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
will u na

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