Jaadu ye kya chal gaya(part 16@pg 65 updated)

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hazra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#241

wow

aussum update

waiting for naitik's surprise..

continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: honeey_16
Awesome update dear😳wow it was really different.... the update was very nice, mindblowing, superbbbbbbbbbbbbb👏 ... l love it 😍 plzz cont soon..😃

thanks maheennnnnn............😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: sadhz
hey i m new reader😊😊 luv ur ff......... plzzzzzzzzz add me 2 ur pm list.......... pm me when u r goin 2 update. waitingggggggggggggggggggggggggg

ya sure........😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: rose_e
nice chapter shreya gr8 job👏👏👏👏 awosome yaar 😳natik romance scene was mind blowing😃i love it ☺️ keep it on 👍🏼
And thanks 4 pm

thanks a lot...........🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: DaZzLiNgShReYa

<div></div>thanks akaisha.......

awwww...so sweet anytyme di..thanks for the pm..update soon..tc..

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Shreya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#246

hey hi guys.....bck with the next part after a long tym........

PART-12

they both sit in the car.......

naitik:akshara..........pta nai ye gadi start nai ho rahi..............

akshara:kya????plz naitik.....bahut hogaya mazak......plz gaddi start kijiye........

naitik:nai akshara mai mazak nai kar raha........sach me ye start nai ho rahi........

akshara:ap bhi na naitik ye sab apki wajah se hua hai........

naitik:ab isme meri kya galti.....

akshara:apki hi hai....na ap kal jhuth bolte....na ye aj sach much kharab hoti........

naitik:acha akshara.............thik hai aap jiiti....ab chaliye.........

akshara:fir se muje kal i tarah apne apko thakana hoga........😳

naitik(locking her arms on his neck and pushing her towards him):nai nai akshara..............aj maine surprise dena hai to bhugatna to muje hi padega........😳

akshara:nai nai naitik.........ap chodiye muje....sab dekh rahe hai.......ap bhi na kahi bhi shuru ho jate hai........😳

naitik:kuch nai hota akshara.......dekhiye ham pahunch bhi gaye.......

akshara:kya itni jaldi..........muje to pta bhi nai chala..........🥱

naitik:ap mere sath jo thi.........

akshara:apko aisa kisne kaha.....mai to hritik roshan ke sath thi......

naitik:vahi samaj lijiye.........hmmm.mai to koi ehemiyat hi nai rakhta hu.........

akshara:acha acha ab pahunch gaye........utariye muje......

naitik:ok ok muje bhi apko packadne ka koi shok nahi.......vaise ap kitni bhari hai uff..........

akshara:ok ok sorry bus........chaliye.........

naitik:thik hai........

they reach the place and naitik closes akshara's eyes..........

akshara:naitik ab mai akhe khol lu........

naitik:ha kholiye........

akshara:(screaming)naitik ye kya............ham trolley me hai.......apko pta hai na muje uchai se bahut dur lagta hai........

naitik:akshara..........vaha dekhiye.......uper lovers point hai...........ham bas pahunchne hi wale hai.........

akshara:naitik muje yaha lovers point nahi sirf khai dikh rahi hai..........uff naitik maine vapas jana hai..............plz plz vapas chaliye.......

naitik:akshara....ham do pahado ke bich me hai..........jaldi hi ham uper lovers point pe honge........

akshara:naitik muje uper lovers point nahi........sirf swarg dikh raha hai........plz waas chaliye......

naitik:ab ham udh kar to vapas ja nahi sakte........(then he finds akshara hugging him tightly)

akshara:naitik muje isse bahut dar lag raha hai..........

naitik:akshara ab ap mere sath hai.......darne ki kya bat......

akshara:naitik...ap sath hai yahi to dar hai.............

naitik:(releasing her from his arms)acha......to fir ap akele hi khade rahiye......

akshara:nahi nahinaitik......plz i am sorry.......😉

naitik admires her beauty throughout........

naitik:akshara ham pahunch gaye..........

akshara(opening her eyes):thank god........

naitik:ab chale lovers point........😳

akshra:ab chalte hai.....thank god ham zinda hai.......😲

will be back soon............

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Edited by DaZzLiNgShReYa - 15 years ago

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shriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#247

hey luv it yarr
do cont...😳😳👏

Edited by shriyakhan - 15 years ago

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Arshi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#248

soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet shriya ...very nice part 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
just love it yaar 😳😳
cont soon

Edited by mari-d - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#249

ohhhh....wowwww! ..
datz wt i call a awesum updatee...😆
shreyaaa ..u made i dear ...i loved it though outtt! ...😉

xtremly cuteee ...n i din find it bore nywerr ...ttly romanticcc ...n awessumm ..
really lovedd ittt ..😳😳😳😳😳

sply ..dat height ka thing ws FAB baby! ....i apprciate ua ideaa! ..u hav update it afta soo long ..n um happie ki u made it amzingly! ..👏..👏..👏..👏

wowwwww! ....keeep on ua gud work deaar! ...n keeep rawking lyk dizzz! ..um w8ting 4 d nxt parrt ...update soon ...👍🏼..