The blossoming love:Naksh FF-Part 2 updated(12/26)

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Aminah

@hottieaminah13

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi guys!I know i already have one ff which is yet to be updated..I will update it as soon as i get an idea😛!

But this idea of the FF is closest to my heart...It reflects my friend n her bf.It shows that a distant relationship can also be believed n is worth it.About my friend n her bf..You will gradually get to know more about her after the 1st part.

Charactersketches:-

Akshara:-

1)A 15 year old girl(do not find it stupid plz...This age factor will hve a big role in this ff).Lives in Mumbai.

2)A very beautiful and very sweet girl.She loves her friends.

Varsha:-

1) She's akshara's age.

2) She is also very pretty.She is good in studies n is the head girl of her school.She is potrayed as bestest

frnd Of akshara.

Aminah:-

1) She is also one of the friend of Varsha and Akshara.She loves Akshara to the core of her heart and can do anything for her.

Naitik:-

1) Lives in Delhi.He is 17 years old.He is a boyfriend of akshara for 2 years.He is good looking and is very sweet.

Shaurya:-

1)He lives in Delhi too.He has a little bit friendship with Naitik.He is also 17 years old.He is also good looking and has a relationship of 3 years with Varsha.

These are some of the sketches of some the the characters.It potrays my friends n my class.We all r 15 years old n lives in pakistan.AKshara is potrayed as Naima.Varsha is potrayed as Fatima.And aminah is potrayed as me.All the facts i told of the characters of the ff r true n is of my friends.This ff will tell about how my friends undergo problems to be whom they love.It will i hope make you believe that distant relationships can work too.Plz guys read this ff...Its a reality!

Edited by hottieaminah13 - 15 years ago

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Bhavya

@VivaciousBhavya

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Posted: 15 years ago

sounds good

a real life ff !!!

update soon

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ankita

@ankita2407

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Posted: 15 years ago

your ff sounds very interesting !!!!!!!

please update soon

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Aminah

@hottieaminah13

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Posted: 15 years ago

The comments wasn't much to continue writing the ff.But still i will!

Part 1:-

"Oh god!aaj akshz jaldi kaisai aagai" said aminah hitting plafully akshara's arm.

"Tum bhi naa aminah,jaldi aaon too problem,aur late aao too bhi problem!" said akshara while puting her bag on her chair of her class,the most popular one *P-III-C*

"hey,I'm just joking yar"aminah said giving akshara a hug.

akshara smiled n said,"wiasay,varsha kab aaigii?I want to discuss something very important with you all!"

"oook..something tells me that it includes naitik" aminah said winking and looking at akshara's all red face.

"subah bhi,shaam bhi,akshara kai moo pai sirf naitik heee hota hai"said varsha while entering the class.

"shut up varsha,tumhara moo pai bhi too sirf shaurya hee hota hai." said akshara.

"ohh god u guyzz!stop taunting each other,tum dunoo kai moo pai apnay bfzz kaa naam hota hai har moment." said aminah.

"ohh..kyon aminah,tumhara moo pai kisi kaa naam nahee hota?yahh phir humsay chupa rahee hoo?" said varsha.

"arghh!varsha,chup kar..merai moo par kisi supid kaa naam nahee hota!"

"ohh god..chup karoo..merii bhii too kabhi sunnn liya karo,kuch baat karni hai tumlogo sai."said akshara wih her face gradually becoming pale.

"akshara?kiya hoa?jaldi batao"siad varsha all of a sudden getting serious by seeing akshara's face.

akshara..getting a little bit private said "remeber i told that mainai naitik koo phone kiya thaa wednesday koo but he was in tuition so we talked by sms n then when he was over,i called him,he said he dont hve credit so cant talk so i got angry n said kai tumharai paas merai liyai hee credit nahee hota n i hung up?!?"

"haan bataya thaa'said varsha.

"ohh god,dont tell me tumhara naitik kai saath breakup hogaya?"

"shut up aminah..i hope that doest hapen, well actually then i called him on thursday but he ignored my calls then i send him thousands of msgzz of apology n love onezz but he didnt replied.Then i tried calling him on friday,saturday n sunday but he ignored again.

"ohh my god!" said aminah.

"yar..i'm so worried,n even my cellphone broke yesturday so i want one of u to call him n tell him that i'm sorry n u know some emotional drama!"

"sure yaar..i'll call him today."

"yar,i was crying so much yesturday night" akshara said graudually her eyes turning teary.

Precap:-

Aminah calls Naitik but he doesnt answer.

Akshara will get caught by her parents for her talking to boyz,naitik in particular.

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Archana

@.Sunshine.

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey dear......

ver very very nice.....

d concept is very differnt....rlllly liked it...

cont. soon dear.....

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musenartist

@musenartist

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Posted: 15 years ago

a different concept there................and I liked the convos b/w the 3 girls...............good going! 👍🏼

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Aminah

@hottieaminah13

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanks everyone..I'll post the next part soon of my both ff's!

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Aminah

@hottieaminah13

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Posted: 15 years ago

Here go part 2.. :)

Part2:-

"Chal yar akshzz..cheer up!Miss riya kaa period hai n agar voo tumhei aisai dkehai gii too zarroor comment maray gii" said varsha.

Akshara and Aminah both laughed, varsha hated miss riya but buh..miss riya,the diplomatic one loves favratousim and likes varsha a lot!The 3 of them took their seats next to each other n waited for miss riya to come.Th whole day went by...Aminah, as soon as she reached home, ate lunch n went to her room to call naitik.She dialed naitik's number.

"Hello, whoes this?" said naitik on the phone.

"Umm..naitik, Aminah here, Akshara's friend." said Aminah.

"Oh,hi, kiya hoa?bolo!"

"Y r u acting so cool? Tell me do u sincerly love akshara or not?"

"hey, I love her alot, she's my life, n if yur asking me this question because we havent talked much lately, haina?"

"U guessed right..Do u even hve any idea how much she's missing you?She was actualy in a bad mood thw whole weekend. Kyon nahee baat karrahei ussay?"

"OMG!She's crying, arghh! Please tell her that my phone got stolen on thursday n at the same time i got flu, i was helpless.I could have called her by landline but i was to weak to go there.Tell her i'll call her today, for sure!" naitik said getting totally sad.

Aminah realised that he was acually saying true so she replied, "Its okay, but please call her today, bye"

Aminah hung up. She was so happy for Akshara that she actually did a cute dance in her room n then quickly dialed Akshara's cellphone but nobody picked it up.

She tried again n again but no use.

She went to take a rest helplessly n in the evening, she dialed akshara's cellphone again. Somebody picked it up but nobody answered, she herd noises as if akshara's mother was shouting or something.

Aminah got scared n ended the call. She didnt knew what to do so called Varsha n told her everything that hapened.

"OMG! Aik kaam karoo Amii..Mughay lagta hai akshara is in in trouble, although i hope not. You call naitik n tell her not to call akshara today n avise him to call only when you or I say him to.

"Okay!"

Aminah quickly dialed naitik's number n thought if it isnt to late to call.

"Hello, aminah again, kiya hoa?" naitik asked confused.

"Tumnai abhi tak akshara koo call to nahee kiya naa?"

"Abhi karnay hee vaala thaa kai tumhari call aagai, kyon kuya hoa?"

"Oh thank god, abhi nahee call karo, I feel akshara's in some kind of trouble." She told naitik everything n they said "Iss liyai uskoo call nahee karo, call jabhi karna jab mei yaa varsha kahei too.Okay?"

"OMG! I hope akshara's fine, Well, shoot.. I'll not call her, dont worry."

"Thanks"

Precap:-

It will be cleared that akshara is in trouble n her parents will put some type of restrictions for her, read the next part to find out what type of restrictions.

I hope you like the part. Do comment, thanks!

Love,

Aminah* =)

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Aminah

@hottieaminah13

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Posted: 15 years ago

Here go part 2.. :)

Part2:-

"Chal yar akshzz..cheer up!Miss riya kaa period hai n agar voo tumhei aisai dkehai gii too zarroor comment maray gii" said varsha.

"Hello, whoes this?" said naitik on the phone.

"Umm..naitik, Aminah here, Akshara's friend." said Aminah.

"Oh,hi, kiya hoa?bolo!"

"Y r u acting so cool? Tell me do u sincerly love akshara or not?"

"hey, I love her alot, she's my life, n if yur asking me this question because we havent talked much lately, haina?"

"U guessed right..Do u even hve any idea how much she's missing you?She was actualy in a bad mood thw whole weekend. Kyon nahee baat karrahei ussay?"

Aminah realised that he was acually saying true so she replied, "Its okay, but please call her today, bye"

Aminah hung up. She was so happy for Akshara that she actually did a cute dance in her room n then quickly dialed Akshara's cellphone but nobody picked it up.

She tried again n again but no use.

She went to take a rest helplessly n in the evening, she dialed akshara's cellphone again. Somebody picked it up but nobody answered, she herd noises as if akshara's mother was shouting or something.

Aminah got scared n ended the call. She didnt knew what to do so called Varsha n told her everything that hapened.

"OMG! Aik kaam karoo Amii..Mughay lagta hai akshara is in in trouble, although i hope not. You call naitik n tell her not to call akshara today n avise him to call only when you or I say him to.

"Okay!"

Aminah quickly dialed naitik's number n thought if it isnt to late to call.

"Hello, aminah again, kiya hoa?" naitik asked confused.

"Tumnai abhi tak akshara koo call to nahee kiya naa?"

"Abhi karnay hee vaala thaa kai tumhari call aagai, kyon kuya hoa?"

"OMG! I hope akshara's fine, Well, shoot.. I'll not call her, dont worry."

"Thanks"

Precap:-

It will be cleared that akshara is in trouble n her parents will put some type of restrictions for her, read the next part to find out what type of restrictions.

I hope you like the part. Do comment, thanks!

Love,

Aminah* =)