Hum rehein gai saath saath hamesha:Naksh one shot

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guyz!I really got inspired of everybody writing one shot..i thought i should also give it a try,i will continue writing more if u like it!
Its the night of the reception,naitik n akshara comes it their room..naiitk suggests that they shoudl change first so they got to change.They have an attached bathroom so first akshara goes to change in the bathroom..wen coming back after changing..she was walking strangely,when naitik asked her wad hapened..?,she hesitated n replied that she slipped n her ankle is paining..naitik become worried..he said let me look..she says no thats okay..i'm fine..he gots a little irritated n said "oh plz akshara..i noe u're paining..let me look..n thats final..sit down!"akshara got a little scared by naitik's behaviour n obeyed him..she sit on the bed with naitik..naitik is looking at her leg n applying some oil..akshara is having shivers..naitik after puttig oil aks her if she's okay..n she blushingly says "yes,thankyou!"..naitik notices this n he held up her chin n siad that "now akshara..husband n wife mei thankyou kabsee."she again blushes n naitik holded her hand n cmae near her..he was on akshi's lap n got the hold of her face n kissed it..akshara was feeling shivers..she was getting backwards n hse didn't noticed that she wud fall if she wud move more backwards as the bed was finishing..she moved more backwards n she was falling wen naitik holded her n siad dekha sharmanei kaa nateega..they both laughs n they hve a cute eye lock moment..then akshara broke away n said i think we should sleep..i hve to get up early tomorrow..naitik grumpily siad "ok!"..she layed on the bed with naitik n naitik put his arms around her..akshara felt a little shiver bhut then she got used to it n they both slept peacefully..but hten naitik suddenly woke up n remembered that akshi have to wake up early n she couldnt wake up without an alarmclock..he set the alarm n slept with still his arms around her!
so how was it guyz?plz leave comments if you like it! 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok i guess nobody liked it!hmm..?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice!!!😉
no plz don't say that none liked it.
its just that the forum gets active at night !!
well wriiten !! i liked the idea!!😛it was so sweet of naitik for setiing the alarm clock!!
soo caring!!😳😳
well u shuld surely write more!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohh thnkz nasco..thnks for telling me that people get active at night..i guess i was getting impatient!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was awesome 👍🏼 ...continue writing more....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey, it was nice....write more..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey, it's really nice....write more..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was rlly nice...pls continue soon..rlly romantic and naitik being soo caring...wonderful
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Posted: 15 years ago
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reallllllly nice yar......
luved d way naitik kinda scolded her.........sooo sweet of him 2 apply oil n set d alaram clock 4 her......
u realllllllly shld write more dear..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very sweet and cute 1..luvd it..u shld write more...i luvd dat part"naitik putting her hand ovr akshi and sleeping""☺️

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