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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

So, finally Akshara's final exam day has arrived. It has been so many days since Akshara slept peacefully. After all the household work, she had to teach Rashmi for sometime and then at night learn her lessons. She was really tired after all these and also partly due to the exam stress. She used to stay up till late night and do her lessons while Naitik used to keep her awake(which he didn't want to, but due to Akshara's insistence)with mugs of coffee. He also used to help her out with some tough portions and to reduce her workload, used to do his domestic work all by himself.
So, the exam day has arrived and it was 5:00AM in the morning. Sudden buzzing of the alarm had waken up Naitik and he switched on the bedside lamp. In the blaze of the light, he saw his beautiful wife sleeping peacefully next to him. He had insisted, the previous day that she should sleep properly that night, else she would fall sick during the exam. He didn't want to wake her up that early, so he kept gazing at her and his thoughts began to go back. Suddenly the scenes of their first meeting, their fight, their first date, their college meetings, their first kiss in her terrace, mehendi night fight, the seven vachans, and suhaag raat fight, flashed in his mind. Though, he had sworn to himself that he would never let any external force in the world come in between then and destroy their relationship, he still felt scared. But suddenly he noticed the traces of sindoor on her forehead and said to himself that nothing of that sort is going to happen because she is now his personal property and no one could take her away from him. He smiled at his own thought.
He suddenly started to caress her face and a hair strand had fallen on it due to the wind. Suddenly he remembered that instance from their first date of how he asked her not to remove it and later he himself removed it. He gazed at her longingly as the hair strand moved around her face. He felt like kissing her then and there. So, he moved closer to her. His lips were now millimeters away from hers. Soon, the gap reduced to zero. Akshara was suddenly woken up by a warm touch on her lips. Before she realized what was happening, she began to lose her strength. He kissed her cheeks, neck and shoulders and murmured how beautiful she looked. She blushed and suddenly the alarm clock rang, interrupting them………………..

How was it guyz?????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey..it was certainly awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...jst gimme a pm d next tym u upload......Im jst waitin 4 d next part.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was very good....update soon.....
Edited by zummi03 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for your comments...............will continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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dat was shoooooooo shweet...........will be waiting fo da next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome man! do write the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey real nice..do cont soon:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3


Suddenly the alarm clock rang interrupting them. Akshara blushed and pushed Naitik away. It was then that she realized that it was her exam day. That thought made her sweat suddenly. Her hands began to shiver along with the rest of her body as she sat up on bed. Naitik on seeing this decided to utilize the opportunity and he slowly put his hands around her shoulders and pulled her towards him. They hugged each other and Naitik could feel her body shiver and he reassuringly held her tight. For a moment they were lost in their own world, when the alarm started to ring again. They broke off from the hug and Naitik jokingly said that he doesn't like anyone disturbing his wife except him and now exams are disturbing his wife and that he is just waiting for the damn thing to get over so that he can take her away from the rest of the world. She laughed and ran to the bathroom to get ready. She wore a green colour salwar kameez(because sarees were prohibited in the college for students recently) and came out. She asked Naitik to get ready so that he could drop both her and Rashmi to the college and went to the kitchen to make tea and breakfast. She did the pooja and sang the bhajan and everyone wished her luck for the exam and Naksh and Rashmi had food. Akshara went to her room to take pen and books and came down to find Naitik and Rashmi waiting in the car. Gayathri maa fed her with some kheer as it is supposed to be good. She rushed to the car and got in. Both Akshara and Rashmi were busy reading and Naitik longingly looked at Akshara through the front mirror. They reached the college and Naitik wished Rashmi all the best for the exam and she walked to her class. Akshara told him that she has a bit of a headache and Naitik got tensed hearing this. They went to the nearby medical shop and got tablets and balm and Naitik lovingly applied it on her forehead. Akshara said that she was feeling better and this relieved him. He gave her a cute kiss on her cheek and wished her luck and told her that he will be waiting outside after the exam. She came out of the car to see Varsha waiting for her. They reached the class and settles down in their respective seats. First bell rang……………



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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey good work dear..........really good start......continue sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
hi
luved your all three parts
they are great
nice ff keep it up!!
by reading tht first bell rang
it was like tht my exams are gng on...😆
do continuee soonnn.....

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