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Posted: 16 years ago
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well here is another scene for ur guys!! enjoy!!

akshara was taken to her house by shaurya for a few days .naitik was sad and was all gloomy. he din't eat or drink properly.gayatri mom was worried for him .she noticed that he looked too tired when he came home .
he went to bed without taking anything .gayatri knew the reason for this and she knew that he was missing akshara.
next morning.
akshara was just out after shower when her phone rang and she checked her cell. it was from singhania house. she took the call and it ws gayatri .gayatri told her that naitik was missing her badly and hadn't eaten properly and last night he went to bed without taking anything.akshara was touched hearing this she wanted to meet him immediately.
just then rajshri comes in and gayatri maa asked akshara to give the phone to rajshri. she told rajshri about all this and rajshri promised that she'll convince vishambhar and send akshara home immediately.

akshara got ready fast and went down there rajshri had managed to convince vishambhar to sent akshara to her house.akshara went with bhol as shaurya and omikaka had left early since they had an important meeting.

singhania house
dadaji and rajshekhar were having thier breakfast and gayatri and bhabhi maa were serving them.naitik was not up yet and dadji did not scold him because he knew he came in late .
after breakfast dadaji and rajshekhar took leave for office.reshmi & nandini came in to have breakfast.
meanwhile in naitik's room naitik woke up with a strong pain in his head. he got up slowly and sat on the bed.he saw akshara sitting on the bed and got happy. he went near her and she disappeared.he was desperate to meet her.he went to get freshned up.he bathed and came out.he saw akshara standing there with his clothes and he went near her and she disappeared he went down to drink tea and he was starving since he had not eaten anuything properly since akshara left.

akshara arrived with bhola .she went inside and greeted gayatri and bhabhi maa. akshara was eager to meet naitik reshmi and nadini teased her asking that did she miss dada yesterday??
she was about to reply when naitik came down for brekfast. he saw akshara standing there he was about to go to her when he remebered the past moments and he thinking that he was hallucinating things .hewent past akshara without even looking at her. he sat on the chair and reshmi asked him if everything was allright. naitik was thinking about akshara and he blurted out that" ever since she left he is imagining her everywhere" everyone including akshara smield at this and naitik blushed slightly.
reshmi asked him then why did he not mind akshara when she is here??
naitik said no akshara is not here yet and he'll go bring her home tday itself. everyoen laugh and naitik turns around and saw akshara standing at the same place where she was standing when he came down.he went near her and he moved his hand forward and touched her shoulders.he expected ehr to diappear like before .but she din't.
everyone smiled seing them. naitik culdn't control his joy and he hugged akshara then and there .akshar was also shocked !! she shyed off .he looked at her longingly and gayatri came to her son's rescue she told akshara and naitik to go to their room and she'll send breakfast and tea upstairs.
naitik and akshara went upstairs and naitik told her that he missed her a lot.akshara was shocked to see
her favourite saree on their bed.
she asked naitik about it and he closed the door and said that he missed her badly saw he took it so that it gave him happy memmories.

it was a dark blue colour saree.
flashback
akshara and naitik were just married .naksha were getting to know each other.one day when naitik came home he had a small packet in his hadn and he gave it to akshara and asekd her to open it.
she uncovered the package and saw that it was a saree.
dark blue was ot her favourite colour and she din't have any dresess of this colour.but she din't want naitik to get sad so she took it willingly and thanked him.
after some weeks she wore that saree when she went to her home. rajshri ,dadi,varsha everyoen were stunned seeing her in that.
rajshri asked akshara did the world turn upside down?? or is she imagining akshara in a blue saree??
akshara blushed when anitik looked at her all confused.rajshri continued that akshara had hated this colour and din't evn let others wear blue colour dreses.
she came forward tok ehr nazar and said that akshara was looking really beautiful .
rajshri asked if her saas gifted her this saree and akshara blushed red while replying that naitik bough her this saree.naitik felt happy that akshara accpeted his gift willingly.


so how was it guys???
waiting for ur comments





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Posted: 16 years ago
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When is it gnah b aired?????XITED!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice part......
thanx for the PM.........
cont. soon.........
PM me when u cont..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good. Cracked up laughing. Naitik imagining Aksh. Thinking tht she will disappear even though she actually there. Brilliant. Yaar Nasco you should be the creative director for YRKKH specially for Naksh secens. RS should read all what you have posted till now. He can take ideas from you. You have much better ideas than his current team. May be RS did take some scene from you, next week the kitchen scene. You had written in your Naksh patchup 😃
Edited by sinak - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was cute as always...naitik imaginin aksh
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Simx

When is it gnah b aired?????XITED!!!👏


this is not gonna be aired. these r my imaginations
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesum yaa...👏
i thnk thy will show sumthng of ths kind whn akshara goes to her maika... keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasco


this is not gonna be aired. these r my imaginations

nai aisa to hona hi chahiye...bas isme naksh ke scenes thode aur ho...so dat we can see more f dem...but gud wrk nasco..pm wen u cotinue...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sweaths....it was rlly very sweet....rlly
rlly liked the way akshara willingly took the gift and didnt even say a word...it was rlly nice,,,thnks for writing such lovely things
tc..and ya thnks for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome nasco its such a cute one shot

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