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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: yusra12
it was great...hope aksh tells everything to naitik...continue sooon

will continue soon!!😊

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#232

akshara wiped her tears and sat on the bed.the door opened and gayatri maa came in "akshara beta"
she came intot he room and switched on the light.she came to akshara and sat on the bed.she looked at akshara's face and she culd understand that akshara had been crying.
gayatri: "kya hua??"
akshara:"kuch nahin maa woh bas.."
gayatri:" kuch to hain.. mujhe bata do beta!! "
akshara culdn't control her tears anymore and she broke down in front of gayatri.reshmi and nandini also came there.gayatri hugged akshar and she patted her back.
reshmi:bhabhi what happened??u have been looking really sad and woried from the morning
akshara got up and she told gayatri that naitik hadn't talked to her from morning and he din't take her call .
she was releived when she said all this to gayatri maa.
gayatri mom ws happy to see the love akshara has for naitik.she told akahsra that maybe naitik was busy wth some office work and so he culdn't take her call.
reshmi and nadini also agrred with gayrtri.
akshara was half releived after talkinh with them.gayatri asked akshara to come down for dinner and akshara said that she'll take it later after naitik comes.gayatri motioned reshmi and nandini to leave akshaar alone and they all went outside naksha room.
akshara rested her head on a pillow and though abt naitik and what gayatri maa said.she felt her head pain like anything and she applied balm on her forhead.she lied down and dozed off.
gayatri maa came to check on akshara and saw that she had fallen asleep.she got the smeel of the balm and understood that all this worriying has affected her health .
she went down depp in thought.she heard a car pull up and went to the door.she saw naitik coming out of the car.he looked in a bad shape too.his hair untidy,his tie loosened and his coat in his hand.
naitik saw his mom too and gayatri glared at him.naitik looked down adn gayatri asked naitik why he got late?? and naitik said that he had some work to do .gayatri asked him why he was not taking any calls ??
naitik got angry and he went inside and sat on the sofa.gayatri came and sat with him and asked him"kya hua munna??"..i can understand that u were busy with office work but u must take care of urself and ur wife.
tday u left for office without breakfast and not even telling anyone .akshaar was so worried for u!! she explained everything to him like akshaar came after college all worried and how she broke down in front of her etc etc.naitik decided to go up and gayatri asked him to wait.she came back after a few minutes with a tray.akshara hadn't had her dinner either so she asked naitim to take it to her and they both can have it upstairs.
naitik went upstairs with a heavy heart.he decided not to tell akshaar that he had again mistaken her and the reason for him behaving like this was a letter.
he got iside his room and closed the door.he saw akshara sleeping on the bed.he kept his bag , tray on the table and coat on the sofa.he went towards her and stroked her hair.akshaar was woken up by this and she opened her eyes.she saw naitik sitting by her.she got up and sat on the bed.they had an eye lock session and naitik saw the pain in akshara's eyes.
naitik said sorry to her and told her that he was busy in his office work and tday he got angry in the morning because there was some poblem at the office.he apologised for his behaviour.he cupped her face and gave ehr a kiss on the forhead..
im sorry!!im really sorry akshar for the pain i gave u!! please forgive me!!
alkshar cried her heart out and poured her feelings out how she felt bad when he went away without telling anyone.how she felt when he did not take her call .naitik felt guilty and he culdn't hold back himself and he hugged her.she aslo hugged him back and both started crying.they hugged for along time and after soemtime both broke the hug and akshara said that it was ok and she forgive him.naitik got hapy and turned mischevious .he asked akshara to give him a kiss and akshar doesn't know what got into her.she kissed him on the lips.they kisssed for a loong time and brokr the kiss gasping for breath.naitik was lso shocked.naitik and akshar got up and akshara asked him to change his dresss.he went and took a shower and came out.akshara had seen the tray and she brought it to their table.naitik sat on the chair and akshara was standing near the table.there was only one chair.naitik pulled akshara onto him and made her sit on his lap.akshara was shy at first and she blusehd red.naitik gave ehr a kisson both ehr cheks and she blushed even harder.but he held onto her waist tightly that she culdn't get up.both fed each other dinner.

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Edited by nasco - 15 years ago

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yusra12

@yusra12

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Posted: 15 years ago

#233

wow i am the first one to comment...it was really great nasco....continue sooon

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musenartist

@musenartist

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#234

Veeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyy romantic...............I just loved it..........Both care so much for each other...........And I too was taken aback by Akshara's kiss..........my God!!!!!

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San

@sanw

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Posted: 15 years ago

#235

lovely story line up

loved reading in continuation

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Archana

@.Sunshine.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#236

it ROCKED 2 d core!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........ure really porttrayin their luv 4 each other so beautifully man....plz do continue....continue ure other ff..Im missin neev n neha.....................