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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

OMG! DAMNNN!

Anushka ko chodo. Here my insides were on fire!!

What a fabulous yet naughtily done OS! Yeah, nothing much has changed and I loved how you brought that small FB. A perfect OS, full of the lovable rhymes & a gorgeous ring to it!

The concern, the care & the banter - whooosh, this was amazing. The transition from present to past was so smooth and merging!

Sid and his antics.😆

Can't wait for more! 😳

Cheers

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Era

@Memorable_ERA

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Such a marvellous update...

LOL sid's "washroom bhi tumhare saath jaya karein" cracked me up ...their actions & interactions seemed so real ...absolutely in their characters. ...& that FB was very cute...loved how u used the title song...

But the FEES is yet to be given ...

looking forward to the next update...Thanks for writing. ...

keep writing ...

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Tara

@1Velerian

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

OMG!

I love you for writing this. This is amazing.

Specially I would like to credit you for using all the minute details if the show and interweaving as of it together in this part to make a beautiful story.

The girlfriend thing and all the other details just are the cherry on the top.

This shows you're dedicated and you seriously are a good writer.

Did I mention I love your writing style?

You write in such a way that you maintain the originality and the characteristics of each character.

Just like the time in this part when Siddhant naughtily retorts in context to the washroom, I can totally imagine him saying that.

I'm so thankful that you're holding on to the characters and their ways.

Waiting for the next Part.

Continue soon.

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.
OMG! DAMNNN!
Anushka ko chodo. Here my insides were on fire!!
What a fabulous yet naughtily done OS! Yeah, nothing much has changed and I loved how you brought that small FB. A perfect OS, full of the lovable rhymes & a gorgeous ring to it!
The concern, the care & the banter - whooosh, this was amazing. The transition from present to past was so smooth and merging!
Sid and his antics.😆
Can't wait for more! 😳
Cheers

Thank youuu 🤗 I'm happy it had the "Anushka" effect on you😆

I am glad you liked itt. I want to write more FBs but somehow since the show is scarce on Flashbacks at the moment, I'm not writing them fully. 😛

Much thanks for all the things you liked and the lovely words! ❤️

I'll write the next part soon and make sure it's worth the wait. 😳

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: _era_
Such a marvellous update...
LOL sid's "washroom bhi tumhare saath jaya karein" cracked me up ...their actions & interactions seemed so real ...absolutely in their characters. ...& that FB was very cute...loved how u used the title song...

But the FEES is yet to be given ...
looking forward to the next update...Thanks for writing. ...
keep writing ...

Thank you! 😳 Hahaha that just came out of nowhere but yes he can say that.😆 I love that you thought I could keep them in their characters, makes me feel I did justice. :)

Glad you liked the FB and the use of the title song, it just made it look all the more good I felt.

Yeah fees is coming next! :') I'll make sure it is worth the wait.

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: 1Velerian
OMG!
I love you for writing this. This is amazing.
Specially I would like to credit you for using all the minute details if the show and interweaving as of it together in this part to make a beautiful story.
The girlfriend thing and all the other details just are the cherry on the top.
This shows you're dedicated and you seriously are a good writer.
Did I mention I love your writing style?
You write in such a way that you maintain the originality and the characteristics of each character.
Just like the time in this part when Siddhant naughtily retorts in context to the washroom, I can totally imagine him saying that.
I'm so thankful that you're holding on to the characters and their ways.

Waiting for the next Part.
Continue soon.

Okay wow! This comment is so heartfelt! Thanks from the bottom of my heart! ❤️

Glad you felt I used the details nicely, it didn't need much thinking, the show is embedded in me I guess. 😳

Yeah you had told me I have a writing style that has you hooked! 😆And I can't thank you enough for saying that. Happy you feel I am a writer worth such a comment. 🤗

Thanks again for saying that I stick to the characterizations :)

I feel holding on to their mannerisms makes it connect more with you guys as well as me. Makes me want to write more. I could have kept writing, I had to stop myself.😆

Will continue soon and not disappoint hopefully.!

Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

OMG ...this is so beautiful yet simple just like the show...am loving both your TS and the show❤️❤️ ...i love that simplicity ...you penned down both feelings so beautifully...Anu being jealous and stretching on Sid's "girlfriend" and Sid taking his own leisure to irritate and tease her ...love it 👏❤️ and the way you incorporate the title song ...superb⭐️...now waiting how he ll take his fees ...ll it be money or something like some romantic moments😉

Plzz keep writing in the same style ...like your style 😊

Update soon waiting

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Ziva01
OMG ...this is so beautiful yet simple just like the show...am loving both your TS and the show❤️❤️ ...i love that simplicity ...you penned down both feelings so beautifully...Anu being jealous and stretching on Sid's "girlfriend" and Sid taking his own leisure to irritate and tease her ...love it 👏❤️ and the way you incorporate the title song ...superb⭐️...now waiting how he ll take his fees ...ll it be money or something like some romantic moments😉
Plzz keep writing in the same style ...like your style 😊

Update soon waiting

Heyy thanks for that comparison , means a lot that you like it as much as the show❤️

Glad you liked it so muchh.☺️ Oh yes I love jealous kids😆😆 I'll insert it wherever I get a chance 😉 And so happy you liked the way I incorporated the title song. :)

Haha yess Sid is a naughty boy, he won't take money right 🤣

Thanks again for liking my style! I'll update soon :)

Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice..

Thank you! :)

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: A.Green

Heyy thanks for that comparison , means a lot that you like it as much as the show❤️
Glad you liked it so muchh.☺️ Oh yes I love jealous kids😆😆 I'll insert it wherever I get a chance 😉 And so happy you liked the way I incorporated the title song. :)

Haha yess Sid is a naughty boy, he won't take money right 🤣
Thanks again for liking my style! I'll update soon :)

I love reading FFs/TS which are beautifully written and happy I come across yours😃

I knew Sid ll not take money😆🤣...looking forward to Sid's way of taking his fees😉☺️

Stay blessed always😊