AbHer OS (imp anouncement on pg 2)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Everyone🤗🤗


Wish You All a Happy Valentine's Day (Belated Technically😆) ❤️ This OS is written by Me and N.. we were supposed to post it on 14th, got delayed by two days due to some reason

Here it is...
While Reading it , Please assume that AbHer aren't married yet... and they've just recently confessed... Let us know.. How It Is ...

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AbHer OS : Feelings ( Valentine's Special )

Leher blushed like crazy, she couldnt believe herself. She never took this long to dress up before, but she knew the reason why and it made her burn even more thinking of it. Abeer. She wanted to leave him speechless. She a felt a little nervous, not knowing what to expect or what he had done for her. She wanted everything to be perfect.

After a while, Leher chose to wear a short-sleeved Churidaar dress. Baby pink with silver embroidery, leaving her make-up minimal.
Scattered tops and jeans everywhere, Abeer was buried in his wardrobe trying to find something dashing to wear for his date with Leher on the chhat. He had to look his best, not that it was thier first date. It was their first Valentines. A smile creeped on his face with the thought. He picked out a red top holding it next to him. 'Naah', he thought to himself.

Eventually, he decided on a black shirt with casual blue jeans not wanting to look over the top. He looked at himself in the mirror spraying some perfume and ruffling his hair. He was feeling a mixture of emotions. Happy, nervous, tense. He just hoped everything went according to plan and for Leher to have an amazing time. She meant the world to him.
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Once ready, Abeer checked all the preparations for the date. He had decorated a side of the terrace In White and Red curtains , placing a table for two, with soft dim lights. *I hate love stories alert*. Everything was in place now. He waited for Leher to turn up. A few minutes later, He hears the Mathur house terrace door open, and Leher appears.

Abeer was mesmerised by the first look of leher dressed in pink churidaar. He couldn't stop staring at her. Without breaking his gaze, He helped her cross the barrier between the two terraces. She smiled seeing the preparations he Had Done. Having reached near the table,

Abeer: "Tum Bohot Sundar Lag Rahi Ho."

Before Leher could say anything, he gives her a rose flower and Murmurs "Happy Valentine's day" In Her Ears. Both of them knew that this Valentine's was special for them.

Leher takes the flower and replies with a smile "Happy Valentine's day Abeer" .She thanks him for the preparations he did for the date. He adds that he has something else too for her.

Abeer: "Hum kuch aur bhi laaye hain tumhare liye".

Leher : "Aur?"

Abeer: "Haan, Tum Yahin Ruko, Hum Lekar Aaate Hain". He walks into his Terrace room , bringing out a tiffin box and giving it to her. Leher wondered what it was.

Leher : "Ismein Kya Hai?"

Abeer : "Tum Khol Kar Dekh Lo". He was nervous , It showed in his voice.

As Leher opens the tiffin box, she is surprised ! She Looks at Abeer in amazement.

Abeer : "Your Favourite Home made, Self Cooked Pizza !"

Leher : "Yeh Tumne Banaya? Hamare Liye?" He nods a yes.

Flashback (Afternoon time : Abeer In his Chhat Room )

He walked back and forth in confusion. What special thing could he do for her to bring a smile on her face? He asked himself. What would she like? An Idea Struck Him. He ran downstairs, calling out To Baanke. He called him several times before Baanke made an appearance.

Abeer : Baanke ! Kahan Tha? Hum Itni der se tujhe Bula rahe hain...

Baanke : Kya Hua Lalla Bhaiya? Hum aa hi toh rahe the.

Abeer asked him whether the Kitchen was free. He wanted to cook something. Baanke was shocked out of his wits. Abeer wanted to cook?

Baanke : Lalla Bhaiya? Aap Khaaana banana chahte ho?

Abeer (with a wide smile on his face) : Nahi Baanke ! Hum toh Pizza Banana Chahte Hain !

Baanke : Pijja? Woh Kya Hota Hai!?

Abeer : Pijja Nahi Baanke, Pizza....! Woh Rehne de... Tu Hamare liye saare Ingredients le aa.

Baanke : Kya Le Aayu?

Abeer gave him a full list of the ingredients required. He asked him to get them quick as he ran short of time. Abeer entered the Kitchen, wondering from where to start ! He wears a cap and apron and starts reading the recipe from a recipe book. Baanke Gets all the ingredients in time. And is ordered by Abeer to see to it that no one else in the house gets a hint of what he's doing in the kitchen. He starts to prepare the pizza, and baanke outside is called by Boodha for some work.

Chutki enters the kitchen and is amused to see Abeer there . Her amused expression made Abeer feel that It was as if he was caught red handed trying to do some mischeif.

Chutki : Lalla Bhaiya, Aapki Tabiyat toh theek Hai Na?

Abeer (brushing his finger over his eyebrow): Chutki woh..... Tu Yahan Kaise?

Chutki bursts into Laughter seeing Abeer Fumbling with words. Chutki had some hint about something cooking between Him and Leher, still wasn't so sure about it.

Chutki : Humein Amma ne Bheja Tha... Unko kuch chahiye Tha.

Abeer : Haan Toh Le Le Na. Aur Sun, Kissi ko Batayiyo Mat, ki hum yahan pe the.
Chutki went ahead with her work but couldnt control her laughter. Abeer was almost done with the pizza. He took a few more minutes for the garnishing and finishing touches. He packed the pizza in a tiffin box, and saw that the place was by now in a mess.
Chutki (Laughing) : Lalla Bhaiya, Hum toh nahi batayenge, Par yeh jagah zarur bata degi ki aap yahan the !
Abeer : Bohot mazaa aa raha hai tujhe? Baanke Kahan Hai?
Chutki : Aap Jayo, Hum Baanke Bhaiya ko bol denge... aur haan Humein Baad Mein Batana, Ke Guddan Didi Ko Pizza Kaisa Laga ! Abeer was surprised to hear that from her.
Abeer : Nahi Hum... Woh .... (He tried to cover up but all in vain.)
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Back To Present :

Leher looked at the pizza. Her mouth was watering already. It looked perfectly made. Nice round shape with delicious toppings and sizzling cheese.

Abeer: "Taste karo" ushering her to the table excitedly.

She cut out a slice and took a bite. Leher looked at Abeer with a serious face.

Abeer: "kaisa tha?" he questioned nervously.

Leher: stammering "Abeer...kaise batayein...woh..."

Abeer: "acha nai tha?" he again questioned a little scared.

Leher couldn't keep her laughter in anymore and burst out laughing.

Leher: between laughs "Abeer...tumhaara chehra...itna dara hua..."

Abeer: "kya Leher?"

Leher: queitening down realising they're on the chhat in the middle of the night: "bahut acha bana hai Abeer...its really tasty...I cant believe yeh tumne banaya hai"

A surprised taken Aback Abeer, couldn't control his happiness on knowing that Leher liked it . He hugged her, taking her by surprise yet again ...

Abeer : Thank You... Hum Itna Nervous toh tumhe propose karne ke waqt bhi nahi the. Jitna Hum Aaj The.

Leher assured him that she really liked it. She was now wondering whether it was the right time to give him the gift she got for him.

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Flashback ( Leher In Her Room getting ready to go to the Shopping Mall )

Several thoughts were running in her head. Would he like the gift she'll get for him? She had been saving money for this day for sometime, wanting to buy something special for him. She had decided well in advance, what she wanted to gift him. A WATCH ! She knew he was fond of watches. She was also reminded of their conversation when he had sneaked into their house at midnight. She had told him to tell his dad to get him a watch. He retorted back that he has loads. She had given him a sharp reply that watches are to use, not to keep. She chuckled to herself, he would definitely use this one.

Without wasting time, She pulled Bittan alongside her to the Shopping Mall. Bittan enquired in confusion where they were going. Leher assured to tell her the details on the way. On Their way to the Mall, Leher told her the details of what she wanted to buy and where they were going. They bought a nice branded watch.

Present:

She decided she should now. Breaking the hug ,
She takes out the box and gives it to him.

Leher : Hum bhi timhare liye kuch laye the...

Abeer is all smiles to see that she got a watch for him. However seeing the watch , his expression changed. He understood that the watch was an expensive one.

Leher (wondering why isn't he speaking) : Tumhe Yeh Brand Pasand Hai Na....

Abeer : Par Yeh Toh Bohot Expensive Hai Leher.

Leher : Tumhe pasand nahi aayi?

Abeer : Aisi baat nahi hai Leher, Bohot acchi hai. Par, tumne yeh kaise kharidi? Paise kahan se aaye?

Leher hesitatingly told him that she had been saving money for some months , so that she could buy it.

Abeer felt overwhelmed. He couldn't believe She could do something like this for him.

Abeer (cupping her face in his hands): 'thank you Leher' . He couldn't say anything more.......

Few moments later, They sat down on the chairs to have food . Some time had passed after they finished their late night dinner. Moments of silence prevailed.
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Abeer, running his hand through his hair, thinking how to ask Leher for a dance. He didn't think it to be that hard. All he had to do was go up to her, hold his hand out and say 'lets dance'. What if she said no? he thought, would she do that? No, he answered himself, she can't.

Finally, gathering up enough courage, Abeer got up and walked towards her. He faced her with a slight smile, holding her hand signalliing her to get up. He took out a small red box from his pocket and held it out to her. Leher let out a surprised gasp, flashing him a wide smile, taking it from his hands. Upon opening the box her smile disappeared,The box was empty!

She looked up in disappointment, only to see Abeer on his knees, taking her hand in his. He slid the ring on to her finger. Perfect fit. Leher couldn't help smile at his antics. Feeling overwhelmed, she didnt know how to express what she felt. He brushed his lips with her hand firing her cheeks.
Without letting go of her, he walked to the CD-Player, turning on some music.

He took her hand in his placing her other on his shoulder. He held her waist closing the gap between them, their bodies brushing against eachother while swaying slowly to the music. It was like the song was being played for them specially. So close yet so far with strange feelings surrounding them.

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai
Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
No words were needed. Their silence spoke volumes. Never had they danced with such proximity, feeling eachothers breath on their necks. Twirling her with the flow of the music, their eyes met, emotions running wild. Leher turned crimson. He turned her around taking her hand in his once again. He crept his hand to her her stomach pulling her closer yet.

Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye
Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye
Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari..
Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari..
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Their love was inevitable. No matter how far they ran away from it or denied it, it wouldnt go away. They had no control over their hearts. They belonged together.

Kehna Hi Kya.., Tera Dakhal Na Koyi
Dil Ko Dikha.., Dil Ki Shakal Ka Koyi
Dil Se Bhi Meri, Ik Shart Yeh Aisi..
Laage Jeet Si Mujhako, Yeh Haar Hai Kaisi..
Kyun Yeh Pukaar Hai, Kyun Bekaraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Jaadu Sawaar Hai, Na Ikhtiyaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Abeer turned her to face him, bringing her closer. He leaned in towards her eyes closed, as if to give her a kiss. Leher turned scarlet almost matching the curtains. She could feel herself burning. She closed her eyes waiting for his touch.

Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai..

Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Yahi
"I Love You Leher", he whispered in her ear.
" I Love You Too " She whispered back.
This was their first valentines...many more were to come...
Edited by daddys_girl - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omygosh you two!!!!😃
Lovely OS!! Just lovely!!🤗
You know, the most I wanted in YPNHK was for Abher to date.. I mean, all their dates were either spoiled or spyed on... But you two just fulfilled my most wanting wish!!! Awww.... This is an absolutely pleasent surprise, coz I had no idea you'd write something like this.. I thought it'd be after marraige OS that you'd come up with...
What scenes ya!
Leher likes pizza??? Who knew! 😉
Abeer could cook!?!? Who knew!😉
Loved loved loved Banke's and Chutki's roles... sweet, short and adorable 😃
Oh boy, Leher saved money to buy him a Watch! How sweeeeet!!!❤️😍 (Reminds me of Ishq Vishq... Amrita bought one for Shahid..that was really cute)
Adored the "Kuch khaas hai" song... eversince I saw a VM on that song, its my most fav of all times... I'm hooked on to it. It felt so good reading that they danced to that song... I could imagine them in each others arms... swaying to the music... 😃
Thank you M and N!!! You two are truly the "Meetha and Namkeen" combo!!! I love you two for this!🤗❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh my God i could hug u both so tightly right now!!!🤗Thank u thank u thank u thank u thaaaaank uuuu!!!Just the stuff my Abher-filled dreams are made of!!!Oh i wish there were no such things as trp's...and stories could go at their own sweet pace😍beautiful story,cute personal touches and references to the original story, superb!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved Baanke and Chutki in it!!!Awww....i picturised the whole sequence while reading it...hmmmm....it felt sooo goood!!!Kuch khaas is one of my favourite songs...love the line-"lage jeet si mujhko yeh haar hai kaisi"😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really well written 👏
i was hoping the same to someone write something for abher now plz can u write another after abher got married because this is the first v.day after their marriage..thanks for writing such a beautiful os .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow maryam and naina another super-duper hit os frm you both thanks for d lovely gift...i missed a perfect date of ABHER whenever dey were on a date sumthing wrong would happen...!
Coming to os i never knew dat abeer can cook but as dey say love makes us to do all those which we never did be4...and d characteristion of banke was gud use toh pizza ki spelling and chutki's character was a sweet one...and leher buying a watch for abeer dat too of his fav brand saving money was so cute...i wish if dis would have happen in YPNHK...:-)
thankuu for d os maryam and naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
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N and M 🤗......my sweet pothi's.......hayeeee.....what a dreamy OS 😍.......it had all the magical beauty of the original YPNHK😍........ before the TRP'S and the berang channel messed it up 😡........loved every scene u wrote......loved Abeer's interaction with Banke and Chutki......,the gift exchange was so good 😍,...awesome song for AbHer😍............just the word Lalla bhaiyya made me all emotional......missing our lovable Lalla and his beautiful Leher so much 😕......be it the AbHer scenes or them with the other characters......there was soooo much potential for this show.....what a waste .........but thanks to both of u .....your adorable OS's are helping so much......all the things we wanted to see in the show we are able to visualise them now because of u.....love u sooooo much❤️......this is for both of u.......





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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hats off to both of you, N and M...What a beautiful OS..And not to sound repetitive...even I wanted to see Abher date without interruptions and feeling guilty...You fulfilled that...They had such a sweet date..Loved Chutki and Baanke there and the entire atmosphere....Could completely imagine the house and the chat so well...Really feel very bad that the TRPs got to such a nice story...The characters were so well developed and the whole plot had a lot of potential...just as Ratna mentioned..

Well...Thanks once again for bringing back the smiles on our faces...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nainuuuu ... Maryammm ... 🤗 🤗
You guys .. Thank you sooo much for writing this OS! It sure has brought a smile on our faces .. and howwww! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 LOOOOVED it!! Every bit of it!! 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks for writing one on AbHer celebrating Valentine's .. Like Tanu mentioned, its truly our wish come true .. It did not happen in the show, but you made it happen .. and everything was just SO SO SO PERRRRFECT!!! Sooo PUREFECT, rather!!! 😳
Loved Chutki & Baanke in the scenario too .. it was all just soooo cute!! Loove the way Baanke said 'pijja' .. and Chutki pulling Abeer's leg 😆 and surprising him with commenting about Leher 😳
Please keep writing more such OS' and we'll keep smiling through and through ... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow .. N and M, you guys did a great job, wish we had all these in the show

but at least with you guys around we will keep getting more abher

hint hint - isnt holi coming up,i remember the show time during last years holi... since we wont have any of that, its up to you guys to come up with something, what say? upto the challenge 😉?

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