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Hey everyone! Well I am posting a topic on this forum after the longest time! Missed all my buddies here loads🤗, especially those who dealt with my silliness, ie all the Ankeep craziness! 😆
Anyway I am back with something different this time, decided to write an AbHer one shot for the wedding night, let me warn you this is my first time writing an AbHer scene so really not sure how it turned out, also there is a lot of silliness in this too. Actually I started writing this b4 I saw the SBS about the wedding night and well I am glad it's going to be light hearted there as well. I was actually missing some light-heartedness in the show, anyway what they are gonna show on the show is way better then what I have written but do tell me how you find it!!
AbHer OS- A Mischievous Night
After the pooja has taken place AbHer return to the house with Chutki, Shadab and Gaurav. The oldies are still at the mandir wrapping up the ceremony (Have to leave them out of this so they don't cause any problems 😉)
Shadab and Gaurav get Abeer busy in a conversation while Chutki and Leher escape into the house to execute their plan.
Shadab: Kyun Abeer mian, ab toh pooja bhi hogayi hai, ab toh hmm hmmm….
Abeer is sharma-ing.
Gaurav: Haan yaar tu humari tayarian toh dekh leta ta, pata nahi tujhe pasand bhi aye ya nahi.
Abeer: Nahi yaar tum logon ne sab kuch acha hi kara hoga, Leher ki bday par bhi tum logon ne itni achi planning kari thi.
They enter the house and find Chutki blocking the door to Abeer's room downstairs (the one Sudha showed Leher).
Abeer: Chutki, Leher kahan hain?
Chutki: Bhaiya, bhabhi kamray main hain, aur kahan hongi?
Abeer: Is kamray main?
Chutki: Haan bhaiya, yaad nahi hai Amma ne kaha tha shaadi ke baad yehi apka kamra hoga.
Abeer looks at Shadab-Gaurav and whispers to them: Lekin tum logon ne toh mera chaat wale kamray ko sajaya tha na?
Gaurav: Nahi nahi Chutki ne humein bata diya tha toh humnein yehi kamra sajaya hai.
Abeer gives his mischievous smile (like the one he gives in Antakshari): Acha.
Abeer to Chutki: stretching his arms and yawning: Chalo Chutki raaste se haato, hum bohut tak gaye hain humein sona hai.
Chutki: Aise kaise bhaiya, pehley apko mujhe paise dene hongay, yeh ek rasam hoti hai.
Abeer: Kya yaar ek aur rasam? Waise hi saari rasmon mein humari band baj rahi hai, he feels his pockets for money.
Abeer: Are hum apni wallet to apne kamre mein hi bhool aye, tu ruk chutki hum latay hain.
He is about to run upstairs to get the money and the others realize that their plan is about to get chaupat. Shadab Gaurav stop him just in time.
Shadab: Mian, kahan ja rahay hai, yeh lijiye hum se paisay baad mein lauta diye ga.
Gaurav: Haan yaar, nekh kaam mein deri kaisi (winks)
Abeer gives Chutki the money.
Chutki: Kya bhaiya, ab hum itney se paison mein apko humari itni pyaari si bhabi ke paas jaane dekengay kya, aur dijiye, she extends her hands forward.
Abeer: Chutki tu kuch zyada hi tez hogayi hai.
Chutki: Sab aap hi se seekha hai bhaiya.
Abeer to his friends: Ab kya karain?
Gaurav gives some of his money: Yeh lay yaar aur de day.
Abeer gives her the money: Ab khush.
Chutki: smiles and starts counting the money: Haan haan, jaiye jaiye bhaiya.
She pushes Abeer into the room and locks it from outside. The three of them laugh and high-five each other.
Abeer: looking around, Leher Leher, He sees the plain surroundings of the room and realizes he's been fooled. He tries to open the door and finds it locked.
Abeer: Acha, Abeer Bajpaiye ke saath chalaki, Mrs. Leher Abeer Bajpaiye, lagta hain aap bhi humare saath reh kar humaray kehl seekh gayi. Lekin hum bhi kisi se kaam nahi. Ab to sabko bata na hi hoga ke humaray saath panga logay to kya hoga.
Abeer contemplates how he'll get out of the room.
Meanwhile the other three go and meet Leher upstairs on the chaat.
They tell her how part of the plan was successful and they all laugh and enjoy.
Chutki: Wah kya plan tha bhabhi, bhaiya to khoob phasay.
Leher: haan bhai, tumharay bhaiya kuch zyada hi bechain ho rahe the, unhay thoda thadrap ne do.
Chutki: Lekin bhabhi, kahin bhaiya naraz na hojayein
Leher: Naraz hongay toh humein bhi unhain manana ata hai.
Gaurav: Waise Plan B ki toh full tayarri hain na?
Leher looks towards the chaat of her house and sees somebody thorough the holes of the wall.
Leher: smiles, Haan saari tayarri hai, lekin tum dono ko chalna chahihay, kahin Abeer ko shakh na hojaye, bhaki sab mein aur Chutki sambhal lengay.
Abeer sees the big huge window of the room as his window to escape. He opens it up and looks left and right. He sees a pipe that is right between the wall of his house and the Mathur house.
Abeer: Chal beta Abeer milgaya raasta bas yeh pipe toot na jaye.
Saying a prayer, he begins climbing the pipe. Just as he has reached the top and is about to celebrate he gets doused from head to toe with a whole bucket of water. He looks up to find a hesistant yet smiling Bittan.
Abeer: Bittan tum bhi?
Bittan: Sorry jijaji hum ne toh kaha tha didi se kay humaray masoom say pyaare se jijaji ke saath aisa mazak nahi karna chaiya, lekin humari suntha hi kaun hain? She teases him.
Abeer: Tumhari didi ki toh hum khabar lete hain. He puts his hands through his hair and walks towards the chaath room.
The room is full decorated with rose petals on the floor and all around the bed. In the middle of the bed is an heart shape ❤️ made out of rose petals w/ A&L written in the middle.
Chutki isn't in the room and Leher is standing with her back to the door thinking about Abeer and if he'll escape the room. Lost in her thoughts with a huge smile on her face, she doesn't realize when Abeer enters the room.
Abeer sees Leher from the back, she is wearing a beautiful red sari and her hair is tied up in a bun with flowers wrapped around it. He feels grabbing her in his arms and turning her to face him so he could be mesmerized by her beauty.
Lost in his thoughts Abeer's wet feet slip on the rose petals on the floor and he falls right on top of Leher.
They both land up on the bed in each others arms.
Abeer has this mischievous smile on his face and Leher tries to escape but Abeer holds her down.
Abeer: Kahan chaldi aap, abhi toh humein apki shararat ka badla lena hai.
Leher: acting as if she knows nothing: kya, humnein toh koi shararat nahi ki?
Abeer: Acha toh yeh baat hain, ab aap humse jhoot bhi bol ne lag gayi hain, ab toh apki saza paaki.
Abeer moves his face closer to Leher's and her eyes close. Their faces are just inches apart when…they hear someone at the door.
Chutki: Ahem Ahem, hum darvaza band kardain?
Abeer-Leher get up quickly all embarrassed.
Abeer: Who chutki hum ghir gaye thay.
Chutki: Haan haan bhaiya hum sab samaj the hain, hum chal thay hain, ab plan toh fail ho hi gaya, kyun bhabi, she winks and closes the door on the love birds.
Abeer and Leher look at each other and laugh.
Abeer sneezes and Leher realizes how he'll get sick if he stays wet like this.
Leher: Abeer, tum toh aisay bimaar par jayogay rukho hum abhi atay hain.
She goes to his closet and gets him a change of clothes. He smiles and goes to change.
He comes out and then she dries his hair with a towel. Abeer is totally enjoying all the attention he is getting. He takes the towel off his head and puts his around Leher's waist and pulls her towards him.
They both are lost in each other's eyes.
Abeer: I love you Leher. I am so lucky to have you in my life.
Leher: I love you too!
And they hug!
And the rest I'll just leave upto imagination I guess!😉😆
Sorry if this was totally random and doesn't make sense, finished writing it in the middle of the night when my craziness is at it's height😆! Tell me if u don't understand the dialogues i'll put the english translations. Do leave ur comments and tell me if you liked it or not!!
Love,
Fatima
Anyway I am back with something different this time, decided to write an AbHer one shot for the wedding night, let me warn you this is my first time writing an AbHer scene so really not sure how it turned out, also there is a lot of silliness in this too. Actually I started writing this b4 I saw the SBS about the wedding night and well I am glad it's going to be light hearted there as well. I was actually missing some light-heartedness in the show, anyway what they are gonna show on the show is way better then what I have written but do tell me how you find it!!
AbHer OS- A Mischievous Night
After the pooja has taken place AbHer return to the house with Chutki, Shadab and Gaurav. The oldies are still at the mandir wrapping up the ceremony (Have to leave them out of this so they don't cause any problems 😉)
Shadab and Gaurav get Abeer busy in a conversation while Chutki and Leher escape into the house to execute their plan.
Shadab: Kyun Abeer mian, ab toh pooja bhi hogayi hai, ab toh hmm hmmm….
Abeer is sharma-ing.
Gaurav: Haan yaar tu humari tayarian toh dekh leta ta, pata nahi tujhe pasand bhi aye ya nahi.
Abeer: Nahi yaar tum logon ne sab kuch acha hi kara hoga, Leher ki bday par bhi tum logon ne itni achi planning kari thi.
They enter the house and find Chutki blocking the door to Abeer's room downstairs (the one Sudha showed Leher).
Abeer: Chutki, Leher kahan hain?
Chutki: Bhaiya, bhabhi kamray main hain, aur kahan hongi?
Abeer: Is kamray main?
Chutki: Haan bhaiya, yaad nahi hai Amma ne kaha tha shaadi ke baad yehi apka kamra hoga.
Abeer looks at Shadab-Gaurav and whispers to them: Lekin tum logon ne toh mera chaat wale kamray ko sajaya tha na?
Gaurav: Nahi nahi Chutki ne humein bata diya tha toh humnein yehi kamra sajaya hai.
Abeer gives his mischievous smile (like the one he gives in Antakshari): Acha.
Abeer to Chutki: stretching his arms and yawning: Chalo Chutki raaste se haato, hum bohut tak gaye hain humein sona hai.
Chutki: Aise kaise bhaiya, pehley apko mujhe paise dene hongay, yeh ek rasam hoti hai.
Abeer: Kya yaar ek aur rasam? Waise hi saari rasmon mein humari band baj rahi hai, he feels his pockets for money.
Abeer: Are hum apni wallet to apne kamre mein hi bhool aye, tu ruk chutki hum latay hain.
He is about to run upstairs to get the money and the others realize that their plan is about to get chaupat. Shadab Gaurav stop him just in time.
Shadab: Mian, kahan ja rahay hai, yeh lijiye hum se paisay baad mein lauta diye ga.
Gaurav: Haan yaar, nekh kaam mein deri kaisi (winks)
Abeer gives Chutki the money.
Chutki: Kya bhaiya, ab hum itney se paison mein apko humari itni pyaari si bhabi ke paas jaane dekengay kya, aur dijiye, she extends her hands forward.
Abeer: Chutki tu kuch zyada hi tez hogayi hai.
Chutki: Sab aap hi se seekha hai bhaiya.
Abeer to his friends: Ab kya karain?
Gaurav gives some of his money: Yeh lay yaar aur de day.
Abeer gives her the money: Ab khush.
Chutki: smiles and starts counting the money: Haan haan, jaiye jaiye bhaiya.
She pushes Abeer into the room and locks it from outside. The three of them laugh and high-five each other.
Abeer: looking around, Leher Leher, He sees the plain surroundings of the room and realizes he's been fooled. He tries to open the door and finds it locked.
Abeer: Acha, Abeer Bajpaiye ke saath chalaki, Mrs. Leher Abeer Bajpaiye, lagta hain aap bhi humare saath reh kar humaray kehl seekh gayi. Lekin hum bhi kisi se kaam nahi. Ab to sabko bata na hi hoga ke humaray saath panga logay to kya hoga.
Abeer contemplates how he'll get out of the room.
Meanwhile the other three go and meet Leher upstairs on the chaat.
They tell her how part of the plan was successful and they all laugh and enjoy.
Chutki: Wah kya plan tha bhabhi, bhaiya to khoob phasay.
Leher: haan bhai, tumharay bhaiya kuch zyada hi bechain ho rahe the, unhay thoda thadrap ne do.
Chutki: Lekin bhabhi, kahin bhaiya naraz na hojayein
Leher: Naraz hongay toh humein bhi unhain manana ata hai.
Gaurav: Waise Plan B ki toh full tayarri hain na?
Leher looks towards the chaat of her house and sees somebody thorough the holes of the wall.
Leher: smiles, Haan saari tayarri hai, lekin tum dono ko chalna chahihay, kahin Abeer ko shakh na hojaye, bhaki sab mein aur Chutki sambhal lengay.
Abeer sees the big huge window of the room as his window to escape. He opens it up and looks left and right. He sees a pipe that is right between the wall of his house and the Mathur house.
Abeer: Chal beta Abeer milgaya raasta bas yeh pipe toot na jaye.
Saying a prayer, he begins climbing the pipe. Just as he has reached the top and is about to celebrate he gets doused from head to toe with a whole bucket of water. He looks up to find a hesistant yet smiling Bittan.
Abeer: Bittan tum bhi?
Bittan: Sorry jijaji hum ne toh kaha tha didi se kay humaray masoom say pyaare se jijaji ke saath aisa mazak nahi karna chaiya, lekin humari suntha hi kaun hain? She teases him.
Abeer: Tumhari didi ki toh hum khabar lete hain. He puts his hands through his hair and walks towards the chaath room.
The room is full decorated with rose petals on the floor and all around the bed. In the middle of the bed is an heart shape ❤️ made out of rose petals w/ A&L written in the middle.
Chutki isn't in the room and Leher is standing with her back to the door thinking about Abeer and if he'll escape the room. Lost in her thoughts with a huge smile on her face, she doesn't realize when Abeer enters the room.
Abeer sees Leher from the back, she is wearing a beautiful red sari and her hair is tied up in a bun with flowers wrapped around it. He feels grabbing her in his arms and turning her to face him so he could be mesmerized by her beauty.
Lost in his thoughts Abeer's wet feet slip on the rose petals on the floor and he falls right on top of Leher.
They both land up on the bed in each others arms.
Abeer has this mischievous smile on his face and Leher tries to escape but Abeer holds her down.
Abeer: Kahan chaldi aap, abhi toh humein apki shararat ka badla lena hai.
Leher: acting as if she knows nothing: kya, humnein toh koi shararat nahi ki?
Abeer: Acha toh yeh baat hain, ab aap humse jhoot bhi bol ne lag gayi hain, ab toh apki saza paaki.
Abeer moves his face closer to Leher's and her eyes close. Their faces are just inches apart when…they hear someone at the door.
Chutki: Ahem Ahem, hum darvaza band kardain?
Abeer-Leher get up quickly all embarrassed.
Abeer: Who chutki hum ghir gaye thay.
Chutki: Haan haan bhaiya hum sab samaj the hain, hum chal thay hain, ab plan toh fail ho hi gaya, kyun bhabi, she winks and closes the door on the love birds.
Abeer and Leher look at each other and laugh.
Abeer sneezes and Leher realizes how he'll get sick if he stays wet like this.
Leher: Abeer, tum toh aisay bimaar par jayogay rukho hum abhi atay hain.
She goes to his closet and gets him a change of clothes. He smiles and goes to change.
He comes out and then she dries his hair with a towel. Abeer is totally enjoying all the attention he is getting. He takes the towel off his head and puts his around Leher's waist and pulls her towards him.
They both are lost in each other's eyes.
Abeer: I love you Leher. I am so lucky to have you in my life.
Leher: I love you too!
And they hug!
And the rest I'll just leave upto imagination I guess!😉😆
Sorry if this was totally random and doesn't make sense, finished writing it in the middle of the night when my craziness is at it's height😆! Tell me if u don't understand the dialogues i'll put the english translations. Do leave ur comments and tell me if you liked it or not!!
Love,
Fatima
