~Pal Pal Dil ke Paas~ Part 3 updtd page2 01/02

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

~ Pal Pal Dil ke Paas ~

hey guys
I believe this is the first AbHer fic ,correct me if I'm wrong
and well I was greatly inspired by Mariam's VM and couldn't resist writing a short story on this lovely couple,so here's a teaser ,do let me know if its worth continuing
cheers
Hina

Part 1-page 1
Part 2-page 1

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Part 1- Meet the groom

"yar Abeer baat kya hai ? kab se dekh raha hoon ,shadi meri hai aur khush zyada tum ho "
" aisi koi baat nahi hai Madhav bhaiya ,aur bhala khush kyu na ho hum batao? aakhir hamare pyare bade bhaiya aur jigri dost ka pehla prem vivah hone jaa raha hai ,khush to hum bohot hai...aapke liye"

The huge Vajpayee mansion bustled with guests attending the Sangeet party of Madhav and Rashmi ...The flickering fairy lights around the drapes and intoxicating smell of the fresh lilies added to the colourful fun filled wedding ambience ...

Sudha was busy seeing to the guests and making sure of all arrangements before the bride and her family arrived,afterall it was the first wedding of the generation and they left no stone unturned to make the occasion happy and memorable...
TN always treated Madhav like his own son and never let him feel the absence of his own parents ,who had sadly passed away when he was little. Madhav had always wished to study abroad and TN reluctantly gave in to his wishes and agreed to let him go to the UK where he met Rashmi and they instantly fell in love with each other...

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Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi,

Great start, would love to read more of the story, Please ad me to your PM list.

Alpa😊

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Ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

That was really so good!! Please do continue 😳 Would love to read more ..

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Hina

@hinz

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Posted: 15 years ago

thanks Alpa,rexy and Ekta
just when I was going to delete the post u guys replied :)
thanks for liking guys
will post a part very soon

cheers
Hina

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 2- the Bride

" Leher mera dupatta thik kar do please ! aur ye kya tum abhi tak tayyar nahi hui ? aise to hum late ho jayenge Sangeet ke liye "
" oho Rashmi bekar me panic kar rahi ho ,hame waqt ni lagta ready hone me aur madam itni jaldi bhi kya hai ? Madhav jeeju kahi bhag to ni jaare kahi? "

Rashmi and Leher not only were first cousins but also very close friends.They had lived and grown up together until Leher's family had to move to Hyderabad initially and then to Jaipur and now Mughal Sarai owing to her dad's unpredicted workplace transfers. On the other side Rashmi had also moved to the UK to persue further education and join her brother Ankur who happened to be Madhav's best friend and housemate. And that is how they fell in love and are now getting married...

Leher was elated to hear about Rashmi's wedding and rushed to Lucknow along with Bittan ...Unfortunately her parents couldn't make it to all the ceremonies and would join them for the wedding ...

" Arey ladkiyo ab sajna bas bhi karo,der ho rahi hai " yelled chachiji from the bottom of the stairs
" Bittan tum Rashmi and aur baaki sab ke sath jao ,hum abhi maharaj ji ko kal subah ka menu samjha kar atey hain " said Leher and hopped up to the terrace ...

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey hina..nice fic..just read it..

Abeer is so sweet..he's actually happy for Madhav..but more so, because it's a love marriage..

n Rashmi seriously cant wait..lol..hope their wedding goes well :)

update soon

-aish

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Ekta

@Eksie

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Hina .. The 2nd part was sweet 😳 Looking forward to the next part .. and 'm hoping Leher meets Abeer on the terrace 😳

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 3:huh?

"Dulhan agayi ,dulhan agayi " chirped a few young girls when they saw Rashmi arrive with her family...Sudha and TN grabbed a few close relatives and walked up the the door to welcome the bride ...
Daadi wasn't very happy with the attention the Mathurs were getting but had to keep a grip on herself as TN had advised.He was well aware of daadi's indifference and the bias she posessed against Madhav... Somehow daadi could never accept Madhav as family,there always was something she opposed in him and his decisions...And now when he proposed to get married to a Kayasth girl,her dislike had aggravated into hatred...but Madhav never let that hinder his relationship with her or the family...

Baanke ran up the stairs to call Madhav and Abeer downstairs for the Sangeet ceremony. As Madhav gave himself a last look in the mirror before leaving the room , he noticed Abeer lost in some sort of a fantasy world...Madhav could see a new glint in his eyes,he knew there was something up with him but for now he had push his doubts behind and grace the Sangeet ...Quickly tugging Abeer's arm he dragged him out when Abeer stopped abruptly and said " Madhav bhaiya do minute ,bas hum apne baal thik karke ata hain "
"pakka do minute?" grumped madhav
"haan hum kehre hain na,sirf do min...aap chaliye hum abhi ate hain" said Abeer and sent Madhav away...

"maharaj ji uthiye na ...please !!! " Leher tried her best to wake the snoring cook...
" ajeeb baat hai,abhi to bas 8 baje hai aur ye already so gaye? ab kal ke nashtey ki list inko kaise doon " she wailed while thinking of a resolve when Abeer came up to his side of the terrace wall and wondered what she must be upto...

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sorry for the delay in posting this short part guys
will post a longer part soon!
thank you to all who have liked and replied :)

Hina

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago

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Ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Hina ... That was a sweet little update! Loved the fact that Madhav did notice a glint in Abeer's eyes .. and he knows that something is up! 😳 Will be fun to see if & how Madhav makes Abeer see it. And the teasing part .. awesssome!! 😃

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Malangan

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Posted: 15 years ago

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that a sweet ff..
do continue soon

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