~The First Love- ArMu OS~ - Page 2

Originally posted by: Rucha21

Ohh piyu

Such a lovely update

And what a vocabulary...👏👏

Keep writing

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Thanks dear for appreciating the write-up! If I am not mistaken, you might be Dr Shubhshree from twitter? If not, then apologise for the same.

Will certainly update soon 😳

Lots of Lubb

Piu

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Thanks😳

It is definitely an Arundhati and Raidhan Story, a fact which was left unexplored. We have always seen these individuals with respect to their relations with either each other or with their family. There is not even a single glimpse of both of them as individuals. Focus being more on Aru's dreams, the man Raidhan is somewhere is left behind. Just thought of putting him in a space he so much deserved.

Originally posted by: dushturain

My goodness, now I am feeling embarrassed you actually read the mumbo-jumbo scribbles by me...

What you wrote is an art...so beautiful and such high level vocabulary...it is simply amazing the way you have described each emotions, feelings, nuances expression...so eloquent and beautiful...i don't hv words to express...

You are gifted....

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Hii Piu.. no.. i m not Dr.Shubshree. I am Ayesha.. 😊

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Sorry ,my bad then. Hey Ayesha. Nice to meet you!

Originally posted by: malkasub

Piu... this is so beautiful. Thank you so much 🤗

I am glad that you found it interesting. Thanks for the wonderful words of appreciation🤗

So true that we never ever got to know the Raidhan Raj Katara. How he became a Gandhian... what were his interests... when did his father pass away... what was he passionate about that he had to give up for the village and family.. how did he know so much about the routes in Abad... where when and why did he roam around Abad... who were his parents... how was his relationship with them... how was he as a child... never got to see a little Raidhan or a little Aru too.

It is sad and unfortunately a reality that we would never get to know. In my midget attempt to justify my version, I will delve into a brief glimpse of what he could have been before Mukhi😳 Hope that satiates some inquisitiveness😭

Again I repeat... so so many lost possibilities. Lubb u and Neet along with Brishty and Nish for giving us these insights now when some of us are at a loss, not knowing how to come to terms with this sudden closure.

Reading both yours and Neets stories, I get the feeling like... here are these people who have suddenly turned up after so long... just to soften the blow for us... like elders do! Don't know why... but I feel that way. Thank you both again.

Originally posted by: malkasub

It is sad and unfortunately a reality that we would never get to know. In my midget attempt to justify my version, I will delve into a brief glimpse of what he could have been before Mukhi😳 Hope that satiates some inquisitiveness😭

Oh Please do! If the show really does end tomorrow (omg!)... we will need all the back stories of Mukhi and the future ones too!

Originally posted by: RestlessWriter

Oh wow! This is a really interesting take on ArMu's intimacy. We, including Aru, have always seen Mukhiji as protective and caring. But then again, we never got an opportunity to know Raidhan Raj Katara, the man behind the Mukhi. And unfortunately we will never see how the writers of the show saw Raidhan Raj Katara. But I am really curious and interested in your version of him. And you've done such a fabulous job of bringing out the contrast of what Aru (and we) expected Raidhan Raj Katara would be as a lover and how he turned out to be.

My interest is piqued and I'll be sure to keep an eye out for when you update!

Great going!

Cheers,

Neet