SS: Aru Ki Sapney ~~ Chap- 7 Updated pg - 13 ~~ - Page 8

What a beautiful update ! It wasn't long . In fact I wish it was longer.I don't have words for your story ... Armu - so awesome together..

Can't wait for your next update..

Brishty dear! Thank you for this wonderful update! Long? No way... wish you hadnt stopped!

Gosh I don't have words to express appreciation of your writing style. I have already read this part 3 times.
Everything is written in a beautiful and subtle way.
The way he argued in Aru's favor with rami and Adharmi made a very strong impact and clearly depicted his love for ARU.
Aru was totally hilarious questioning vijay on the phone, as if he was a conman. 😆

And finally, Vijay's heartbreak scene was yummylicious 👏
The way ArMu were all over each other was cute in its own way. And yes that phone call conversation, when he threatened ARU by a kiss 😳 , I am sure she would be more than happy to take such punishments over & over again 😃

And as you said, next part is going to be their much awaited consummation scene, I have an itsy bitsy request to make. No offence to your writing style & creativity, you are superb, heads off 👏 but I want vijay to have an even more ruthless heartbreak and Adharmi get a dose of her medicine.
( SMTHNG ALONG THE LINES OF- As the garba night continues, Mukhi and ARU can't help but stare at each other, ARU giving him suggestive glances and then slowly leaving the party. Mukhi following after her like a hypnotised lover. Rami seeing this and asking Adharmi to follow them. Then in the house, ARU strts to run from him, he catches her dupatta, pulls her close, romances her intimately and Dharmi sees this. And HEARTBROKEN vijay sitting smwhere within the house, when he sees them romancing oblivious of his presence. And then Mukhi shutting their room's door on Adharmi's face) .
It's just that reading someone's else story with the scene you want is totally satisfying and if it will come from u, it will be a blast 🥱

Thank you Ayesha, RealRaul2307, Vampire 2468, Nycgal, Malka, Piu for appreciating my story. You guys are really sweet , glad you are liking how the story is going.

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Gosh I don't have words to express appreciation of your writing style. I have already read this part 3 times.
Everything is written in a beautiful and subtle way.
The way he argued in Aru's favor with rami and Adharmi made a very strong impact and clearly depicted his love for ARU.
Aru was totally hilarious questioning vijay on the phone, as if he was a conman. 😆

And finally, Vijay's heartbreak scene was yummylicious 👏
The way ArMu were all over each other was cute in its own way. And yes that phone call conversation, when he threatened ARU by a kiss 😳 , I am sure she would be more than happy to take such punishments over & over again 😃

And as you said, next part is going to be their much awaited consummation scene, I have an itsy bitsy request to make. No offence to your writing style & creativity, you are superb, heads off 👏 but I want vijay to have an even more ruthless heartbreak and Adharmi get a dose of her medicine.
( SMTHNG ALONG THE LINES OF- As the garba night continues, Mukhi and ARU can't help but stare at each other, ARU giving him suggestive glances and then slowly leaving the party. Mukhi following after her like a hypnotised lover. Rami seeing this and asking Adharmi to follow them. Then in the house, ARU strts to run from him, he catches her dupatta, pulls her close, romances her intimately and Dharmi sees this. And HEARTBROKEN vijay sitting smwhere within the house, when he sees them romancing oblivious of his presence. And then Mukhi shutting their room's door on Adharmi's face) .
It's just that reading someone's else story with the scene you want is totally satisfying and if it will come from u, it will be a blast 🥱

Ohh what a wonderful update..

Omg how I missed this beautiful piece of writing.

Thank you Rucha, I am glad my update is being some kind of help in these dire times.

Originally posted by: dushturain

Thank you nish_Vir, for liking my writing style. however, I find your style amazing...I am no way near your calibre but I try...Thank you.

And also thank you for liking how the story is going so far...

I love the sequence, scene you have given me...some of what you have written probably is going to happen, however, some can not happen because of the story requirement...the story which i have thought about requires sth else to happen...

I loved the dupatta scene you hv written why don't you please please please write it, YOu can do 10000% justice to the romantic scene more than me...

Thank you so much for praising my work...i hope you like whats coming next...

Thank you Thank you so much you hv a beautiful heart

I am sure your next part will be awesome beyond imagination.
Waiting waiting updt soon 😃