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Posted: 20 years ago
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Episode:2

Pooja n everybody were going in the class where suddenly someone stops her its none other then Ronit! Pooja n Ronit were just staring at each other wen pooja was thinking how she said i love u to ronit, n reema n mandy overhears this n were laughing.Pooja makes a face at them.Just then Ronit enters he sees them laughing and all of them are quite then as soon as he leaves mandy and reema crack up!But all of suuden there is no one ther bec ronit jjust leaved bec she was in her own dream n she wasnt respoding Ronit.Then suddenly Ashmit comes there n ask her wat happend?

pooja:woh kuch nahi.

ashmit:kuch nahi to fir aisi kyun khari ho yaha?

pooja doesnt reply n she feels shy n was thinking to test ronit if he likes her n make him jealous.

ashmit:kaha kho gayi?

pooja:kahi bhi to nahin n then she holds ahmit's hand n goes in the class where ronit sitting n sees them holding hands n sitting next to each other.Ronit was jealouse but preten he dint n was taking to some other girls.Then Bikram sir started his topic with film course n pooja was so into it n forgot about making ronit more jealous.Ashmit was just looking at pooja. the day is over n pooja was getting home wen all of sudden a car stops in front of her n it was aakash she knew him bec he was ronits freind he asked pooja if she want s a ride but she says no and aakash gota little sad.Ashmit asked her if she wants to walk home together she was gonna say no but she sees ronit coming to her so she says yes to asmit.ronit dint come to her bec ashmit was there n dint wanted to fight with him. Ashmit n pooja were walking home they were taking n wen finally pooja reached she never realised it bec they were so deeply taking. then rasik bhai n sudha behn sees them together n thinks of them to get marry n they were taking about it were suddenly poornima oberhears this n gets all sad bec she love's ashmit a lot.She always used to send ashmit letters but as unknown name which to ashmit thought it is pooja n was all in love with her n dint even bother to ask he if she wrote those letter or not.

Gujrals house:

ronit n reema reached home where they both say hi to ther mom n her mom kinda look sad.

ronit n reema asked:kya huwa mom?

maya:woh tumhre papa

ronit n reema:kya huwa papa ko(in shocking way)

maya :aur kya ho sakta hai kabhi nashe se bahar nahi atehe hai(he is all drunked) then dadi comes n interrupts them n says everything will b fine. Ronit goes upto dadi n taked to her very sweetly bec dadi is her best freind😆they always share problem. Ronit was kinda unhappy n thinks of how pooja n ashmit were holding n he cant get that out of his mind.

The end____ well i hope u guys liked it ,n also my freind nausheen helped me in it thnks to to once agian prettyguria.😃

pls do comment on it!!! n ill try to write epi-3 very soon.😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Very very good!!!!!

You rock!!!

😊 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettyguria

Very very good!!!!!

You rock!!!

😊 😊

thnk u so much for your opinion😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Do I have totell u again! No thanks and no sorry!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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poornima😡😡 loves ashmit😕........anywayz great job👏
Edited by Dashing Boy - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Episode 3:

Ronit was having trouble all night sleeping.Dadi come's ther n notice's this n she asked him kya huwa?

ronit:dadi kuch nahi

dadi: kuch to baat hai?

ronit:akhir aap ko bata kaise chal jata ke kuch hai jiske liye main so nahin pata.

dadi:akhir mein teri maa nahin dadi maa hoon or tere chehre(face) se lagta hai ke tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai.

Other side show pooja taking to mandy about it that how she just making ronit jealous n wants to kno if he likes me too.

mandy:muje nahin lagta hai woh jealous ho ga or tujhe se pyaar bhi karta hai.

other side ronit telling her dadi that i love that gurl but i dont kno y she is hanging out with some other guy.

dadi:tu agar useee sacha pyaar karta hai to use batade.

ronit:i will tell her but on the day where there is gonna be a function in the college.

Other side pooja telling mandy woh function party jo hena mein usme ronit ko itna jealous ke wo wahi roo parenga.

mandy:aisa kya hoga tere paas jise to use jealous karengi?

pooja:ashmit usee use karloongi ot waise be woh to mera bf hai. woh meri baat kabhi nahin talega.

mandy:its too late now lets go to sleep!pooji tune tera papa se baat ki kae nahin film course kein baren mein

pooja:no i dint doesnt matter ill tell him in the morning n they go to sleep.

Next day in the morning pooja gets ready mandy comes to her n they both go together.Where we see someone is in the car blocking there way which was ashmit n ask them if they wanna lift from me they said yes! Rasik bhai saw that n said achi jodi hai🤢.

ST.Martins:

pooja saw ronit from her window n thought of making him jealous so see walked out of the car n was taking to ashmit as like she is having fun with him ronit was getting sad so he walked away from there.

Then everyone goes in the class where bikram sir gives them an assignment of working with partners.pooja-ronit,reema-aakash,kunal-koyna,simon-khes,man dy-ashmit n anie-kushan.

Pooja was shocked that she has to work with Ronit n she told ronit dekho tum to thik se padhay karte nahin ho to pls mera year kharb mat karna aur ve se bhi sara hmwk me karungi.

ronit: tum apenap ko samaj thi kya ho me tho assignment pul ki tum mujhe help karongi! pooja says:no tum mujhe help karonge ronit:nai tum muje n so on there faces were getting cloaser n closer n bikram sir thought of it wrong way n told ronit n pooja to behave which to pooja says wat have we done?bikram sir doesnt reply n ronit was smiling at pooja n pooja was annoyed by that.Aakash saw all mad that he dint get to work with pooja n wasnt concentrating on his n just looking at pooja like crazy.Simon was all angry seeing koyna n kunal working together very happily.Khes n mandy were sad that they were'nt together mandy tells khes tum mere partner kyun nahin ho sakte in a sad way😆 which to khes says acha hai tum meri partner nahi ho nahi to tum mera dimakh kha jati.n yerybody overhaer that n were laughing n mandy was embaressed. N the day is over for them too they all were going bak home.

The End-----

Epis:4

simon was in the car with annie n was all mad bec she cant bare to c kunal n koyna together.(annie n simon r couzins)N she tries to think of a plan to seprate them somehow.

bak in the car with mandy n pooja mandy was all crying n saying mein khes ko maza chaka ke hi rahongi.

at gujral ronit n reema get's home n he goes first to his dadi n touches her feet n dadi said jeete rahon! they were taking n ronit's father come in there drunked n maya sees this n breaks down in tears n prays to god to help her husband n give her strength to survive all this. they show little of reema thinking of aakash n how she says i love u Aakash!!.

they show little of Aakash he looks at the mirror n he sees reflection of pooja n says I LOVE U POOJA ot tum sirf meri hoon!n other side Ashmit says the same thing but he adds that he will do anything for her!

Pooja was watching tv at home where someone knocks at it n she think its mandy but she isocked seeing MIRCHI(jayshree bua)with her other aafat bubbles😆 They r both best friends. Bubble's:hey poojs mujhe calla karna hai can i use your phona?Pooja:kyun?aap ke phona ko kya huwa? Jayshree ua interrupts them n say's she wants to use the phones so let her use the phone n my phones is not workings.Pooja then say's go ahead.Jaysree bua sees rasik bhai n sudha ben taking about pooja n ashmit n jaysree says wah! kya jodi's hai!in lok jaldi marriages karado kyun ke kal kisne dekha hai.Rasik thinks the same but he say let there college finish first.pooja come there but she dint hear this so she just said im going in my room to work.Jayshree tells bublles lets goes now. Bubbles:oka! n they leave.

Next day in St.Martins college:-

Show akash getting crazier(like srk in darr) ashmit totally in love with pooja. ronit remembering all the good times while he is looking at pooja with smit. show ashmit ad ronit fight over pooja. Pooja is walkig ad all of a sudden she bumps into ronit and all her papers fly out. ronit savs pooja and both stare akas breaks in and gets furious. just then ashmit walks in and helps pooja pick up her papers. while picking up papers both of their bump and both laugh. Pooja gets up and walks away waving bye while ahmit is still there saying Pooja I love you! but pooja doesnt hear this!

well i hope u guy's like this episodes im goona update epi5 soon today! pls do comment on it n i wanna tell u that in all the episode till rite naush(preityguria)helped me! pls do comment on it thnks..

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 Great job! POOJA AND RONIT FOREVER 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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epi5- in st.martins akash is gone crazy he is thinking and says sorry ronit i can do anything to get pooja and if that means you're coming in my way I'll move you out. Just then Reema comes in and both talk reema tells akash that how much pooja loves ronit. hearing this akash gets more mad.

Pooja is happy to see ronit getting jealous she thinks that she should wear something out of the ordinary. She wears a dress with make up and her hair is open. Ashmit is stunned. And tells her tum bohut khoobsurat lagrahi ho. Pooja says thank you and says people shouldn't judge people of what is outside of but insie. Ashmit says ok ms.philosphy chale we'e getting late. She smiles and both go. Mandy joins them and tells them her problem about Khes. Both Pooja and Ashmit break out. They give her advice sayin ignore him and test your love. Everyone in class is stunned to see Pooja ronit has wide eyes. He's likeatlest you learned how to make your hair. She gives him a face. Some boys are talking about pooja and how she looks good. on hearing this akash beats up the boys.

Khes is worried because mandy isn't paying attention to him today. he asks pooja is mandy fine to which she replies ya she's fine but she's found someone else and is pretty crazy about him. Khes is orried an a little mad. Pooja asks why, are you missing her. Khes replies me miss mandy. Pooja smiles and says bye he sadly waves bye. Akash calls someone up to beat ronit.

Jayshree and Bubblez are talking about beaty to which Koyena says inner beauty counts. Both sister get mad and say kids shouldn't intefere between grown ps. Koyena goes to her room and cracks up. just then he gets a call from kunal they booth have a sweet talk all of a sudden reema comes in and koyena pretends she is talking to her friend. Reema smiles and wishes akash and her were together. In the end, we see aksh giving money to the gundas and saying the ork should be done.

srry but firat i made a mistake in saying that jayshree n bubbles r freinds but actuallt they r sisters.😛

today's episode is done by preityguria.. n pls do comment on it!!😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 great job! i loved it sooooooo much! 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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epi 6- pooja tells mandy abt khes. Mandy is really happy and mad. mad cause pooja told khes that mandy was going out with someone else. Mandy says what is she supposed to do now. Pooja says find a boyfriend. Mandy says but why. Pooja replies to make him jealous just like I'm making Ronit jealous. Mandy says that's fine but where is she supposed find A BF. Just then Ashmit enters. Pooja and Mandy smile and look at each other. Ashmit says why are you guys looking a me like that. They both smile.

Akash and Reema are working. Reema asks Akash have u ever loved anybody. To which he replies yes I like someone very much. Reema has a frown. She asks do i know this person to which he replies yes, yo know this person really well. Reema gets very happy thinking its her. Just then Pooja comes in and asks Reema what was goin on. Reema gets embarassed and goes away. Pooja smiles. Akash smiles at Pooja and Pooja asks Akash why he called her here. Akash replies he wanted to give her a present. A diamond necklace. Pooja gets mad and says I don' want it and laves. Akash gets mad.

Next day Pooja comes in both Pooja and Ashmit are talking about stuff. Ronit waits for Pooja to leave. then finally pooja leaves,Ronit goes and talks to Ashmit and asks what is ging on between them. To which Ashmit replies it is not his business, but i he really wants to know he and Pooja are in love ronit is shocked.

Mandy and Pooja are talking. Mandy tells Pooja how will shedo this cause you're trying to make ronit jealous by having ashmit with you so how is he suposed to make khes jealous. Pooja says Ronit is going out of town for 3 days, during that Mandy and Ashmit can make Khe Jealous. Mandy ells Poja she's the best. Pooja says I know I am.

Ronit is shattered and is cying and tells dadi everything. Ronit tells dadi Pooja doesn't love me she loes someone else. He says he won't be able to go for 3 days. Dadi says he has to go. Ronit says I'll go tomorrow and come back the next towhich dadi replies teek hai.

Pooa and Mandy are talking and say "Mission Khes starts tomorrow" and Asmit is in the midde sayingMission Barbadi starts tomorrow" Both girls hit him in the head. He makes a face.

pls do comment on it n also thnks my partner naush(preityguria)😃

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