YMLH an OCEAN TALE..the SHOCKING CLIMAX!!

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Pooja and Ronit kept on smooching each other for an whole enitre hour.People in the crow's nest were getting a bit excited by seeing this.Finally Pooja-Ronit stops kissing and we see Pooja taking Ronit somewhere.Meanwhile back in the third class section,Akash was trying to get a hold of Reema...he's trying to make her go in the mood.Reema on the other hand keeps on talking to Akash about the weather,the cool breeze,the whole atomosphere etc...Akash gets sooo bored bechara fell asleep.

Maya sneaks in Ronit's room and searches to see if he's rich or not.She comes across a document..it says Gujral Industires and then she reads an article from the news paper where it said "GUJRAL EMPIRE BEATS EVERY OTHER COMPANY IN THE CONTINENT OF INDIA" Maya sees a pic of Ronit there as well, holding an award.Maya looks up at us and says "I'll be goddamned"she then thinks on how she can get Pooja-Ronit married and make Kushaan go bye bye outta their lives.Maya wants this cuz Ronit's way richer then Kushaan.Maya even steals 1 lac from Ronit's briefcase....(she needs the $$ for drugs) and runs off with it.

Pooja takes Ronit to her grand first class room.Ronit is amazed by seeing all the paintings (he got more amazed by seeing THOSE kinda paintings) Pooja shows the diamond necklace to Ronit.She wants him to draw her a pic wearing this............ONLY THIS!😉 Ronit's eyes grew bigger and he was just staring at us for a while.7 mins later Pooja comes out wearing a bed sheet which covered her body...she was about to remove the bed sheet (Ronit by the way was getting excited sec by sec) Pooja was removing the bed sheet when all of a sudden Kushaan's drunk grand father breaks in her room.Pooja scremed and picked up the bed sheet.Ronit got a bit mad since the drunken old man ruined the best part of his life.He picks up the old man and threw him in the water.Pooja was impressed,She also got dressed very quickly.

Poornima was in her room, still drinking red wine and was talking about MOTHER NATURE which made Maya a bit worried about her daughter.She didn't pay attention to Poornima that much since she was too busy thinking on making Kushaan go bye bye from Pooja's life.Ronit-Pooja were walking on the decks when they met the captain of the ship..KUNAL DASGUPTA...he was talking to them when he got a message from one of his crew member about Ice warnings.The captain ordered more speed..Pooja looked a bit worried and the captain told him everything will be fine.She asks the captain about how many life boats they have on this ship...captains reply....only 20 life boats are available and each can hold 65 pople only.That made Pooja more worried since there were...8,963 ppl on boared.

June 13th (FRIDAY) 1912...11:50 pm

Kushaan hired a man to find Pooja and take her away from Ronit.He sees the two and starts to chase after them.Pooja-Ronit runs in the boiler room and locks the door on him.They ran all thw way into the storeage room.There they see a lovely car..Pooja sits on the back seat and then pulls Ronit there too..eyes met.....hands met....nose met......SCREEN TURNS BLURRY with the sound of HARD BREATHING as the back ground music......meanwhile we see the two of the crews were fooling around with the binaculours of the ship and accidently drops it in the water.Now its gonna be harder for them to see the bergs.Again we see the car from the outside...a hand print was made as well as a foot print on the glass...the car was shaking way more then it should be (samjhgaye na!😉)

Later on.we see ppl came in the storage room and sees the hand and the footprint there.Kushaan saw this and was wondering what on earth was going on in there.Maya too sees this and got a bit nervous.They open the door and saw no one inside.Pooja-Ronit comes out on the decks and starts to smooch each other (god bless them).The crew mems were watching them when all of a sudden one of the crew member saw an Ice-Berg...they got back to work and were busy on making the ship turn.Pooja-Ronit didnt notice the berg since they were busy with their smooch.Somehow they finally made the ship turn.At the storage room Maya told Kushaan that she doesnt want Pooja to marry him.Kushaan gets mad Maya adds that she wants him to marry Poornima.Kushaan gets more mad and turns into the hulk...he picks up Maya and threw her with such force that she broke the side of the ship's hull which created a huuuge hole..and then water started to come in..he also pick up Poornima and threw her as well which made another huge hole in the ship's hull.

June 14th 12:00am

The ship was shaking.Kushaan the hulk picked up the car and also threw that which made even a bigger hole.Entire ship was shaking now.Pooja-Ronit's smooch got distracted thanks to this kushaan hulk.The crew thought they hit the ice berg.Water was gudhing in the ship like hell.They tried to close the water tight doors but they broke the controllers...what a cheap ship.They were telling the passengers to dress warmly and come out to the decks.They ran out of life jackets too.The captain told them to put women and children fisrt.We see him going in the bathroom and came out dressing as a woman.He then sat on the life boat and thanks to his weight...the life boat broke into pieces...only 19 life boats were left now.Ronit tells Pooja to sit on one of the boats.Pooja doesnt want to go.Ronit makes her seat anyways.Then the boat gets lowered away..Pooja jumps outta there and goes back in the ship and whilr running she bumped into Kushaan..he grabbed her and was planning to throw her as well when Ronit came and saved her like a true hero.then he gave Pooja a tight slap asking her why she jumped outta the boat.Pooja says "Yaad nahi hai tumhe....I jump u jump" Ronit gave her another smooch and took her back to the decks.

The stern started to rise up and stayed up for a while.The lights of the ship went out thanks to a girl who thought one of the looked like a jump rope.Bechari she pulled that wire and got her self electrified and also killed 17 ppl along with her what an idiot!The we see Kushaan turning into the HULK again which made the ship break in 2 pieces.Kushaan fell on the water but couldnt float on it due to his heavy weight which made him sink to the bottom of the ocean floor.Pooja realizes that this is where she and Ronit first met.She tells that to Ronit and ronit's like shut the hell up..we're in dabger and ur talking about our first meeting jeez lady what the hell is wrong with u?Pooja's like...oh...main bhool gayi thi ke haam log mare walein hain.Ronit looks at her in a wired way and nods.

The stern now rises up waay up and is standing up like the twin towers.3 mins later it starts to go down.Ronit tells Pooja to take a deep breath when he tells her to.Pooja says "Ronit...vo..main agar main margayi to"? Ronit "Pooja tum nahi marogi..just listen to me and do what I tell u to do" Pooja listens to him.Both of them took a deep breath and we see KITANIC went down into the sea.Pooja lost track of Ronit but he manages to find her and makes her climb on a broken piece of door.Reema,Akash were saved from the water by a life boat...actually Akash bribed the person to save them.We also see mr.dasgupta in the water yelling for help but he was unluck since a friendly huge great white shark chewed him up.YUUUUMYY!

Pooja tells Ronit she loves him.Ronit tells her to promise him that she'll move on,have kids and will die as an old lady warm in her bed.Pooja promises.18 minutes later a boat arrives,Pooja tries to wake up Ronit but he doesnt wake up.Pooja slaps him 10 times but nothing happens.She pulls his icy cold hais but nothing happens.She realizes he's dead.She kept on crying and then finally set him free and we see him going in the dark cold freezing water of the North Atlantic.😭 Pooja then swims towards a man and takes the whistle from him and starts to blow it.They see her and she gets saved.She later on gets married to Ashmit Malhotra...but since she loved Ronit,she never had any physical relationship with her husband.She adopted kids....

89 years later.....we see old Pooja dead in her warm bed and her soul goes back to the ship under water and then goes inside the grand staircase all she sees is white ppl instead of desi ones..she even sees Kushaan there with a white girl...Kushaan tells her its the wrong ship...Pooja entered Titanic instead of Kitanic.She then finds Kitanic which is broken into pieces but manages to go in as she goes in the ship transformed back to normal like it was before drowning.She enters the gradn staircase and sees everyone there who died.Then on top of the stairs she see Ronit waiting for her...he takes his hand out from his pocket and reaches out for Pooja'a hand..we see Pooja again transformed from a buddhi to a youngy Pooja who loved Ronit...then they again kissed..another idiot ladka threw the freezbe in excitement up in the air which broke the huge light og the grand staircase.....a perfect celebration was ruined!😡

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desi_chick05 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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noooooooooooooo i told u not to kiLL ronit !!!!!!!😡😭

well i liked tha *cute*😉scenes between ronit- an pooja aahaha too funni

well anywayzz good job it wuz pretty interesting even tho u killed ronit!! 😡 at least her soul iz wit him 😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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how can u find enough time to write all this?
Edited by QT143 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Its really a very cute story 😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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lol.....never laughed like this be4......god cracked me up totally...... wonderful humourous story....keep it up.......👏
Edited by sneha_09 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏gReAt JoB!!

I loved it.... SO CUTE! Pooja and Ronit😃 but Ronit just had to die😭... Well so what, atleast they united after death!😊

hehe.... Maya, Poornima, and the hulk. 😆 haha. they all deserved it!😆😆😆

and so did that Kunal Dasgupta ship captain!😡

Mayaji and drugs. wah wah. kya baat hai?😃

and haha... Akash and his bribing. lol

Ronit and Pooja forever!😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Soo good! Well atleast they reunited after they died!!😆

Great job taffy!😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thank U!! Thank U!!😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 that was gr8!! where do u come up with all this
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Posted: 20 years ago
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omg Taffy... Kitanic is a complete rip-off of Titanic. Soo many similar scenes ... hmmmmmmmm? What was that all about and 1 hour of smooching? No way~! Ronit would've went to the next step way earlier.

Anywho, nice job I guess. Next time actually make the story sound like you didn't copy it off of another one~! 😉

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