Kkoi Hain---- Episode 1

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Its the middle of the afternoon.All the guests are arrving at the Mehta House for their daughter Pooja Mehta's wedding with Ronit Gujral son of Anupam Gujral and Sushma Gujral.Pooja was sitting in front of her mirror in her room watching her friends prepare her to look like a bride.Pooja was wondering how her new life would start after her marraige.She comes out of her thoughts when her mother Tulsi Mehta tells her friends to bring Pooja downstairs to the mandaap.They all hold Pooja's arms and takes her down to the mandaap where Ronit is waiting for her.The wedding cemremony begins!Pooja and Ronit takes the saath phere,Gaurav Mehta Pooja's father does the kanyaadan and finally Ronit puts the mangal sutra around her neck and applies sindoor on her maang.As a wedding gift,Anupam gave Pooja and Ronit a brand new mansion to stay in from now on.He tells them that the mansion is gorgeous and has everything a newly wed couples would need.A little part of the mansion is shown and some string force all of a sudden pushed the watchman against the mansion's gates,lifts him up and throws his body on top of the gate which makes the watchman's body split in half.

It was time for Pooja's bidaai.She cried and cried.Hugged Tulsi and Gaurav and cried even more.Then she sits in the car with Ronit and they slowly drive off to their new house.Few minutes later it started to rain hard.Everything was hard to see for the driver.He drives carefully to their destination.The mansion is located near a road passing between mountains, the house is very big and quite old house having a magnificent garden with all sorts of beautiful flowers all around outside the mansion.Their stops at the house.Pooja and Ronit gets off and takes a look at it from outside.Pooja:Ronit,ye..ye humarein naye ghar hai?It looks kind of scary.Ronit:Haan Pooja,is ghar ke badien mein bohaut legends hai.Please Pooja not again...tum hamesha se darpook ho ab yahan tamasha mat khara karo!Pooja:Theek hai..chalo..ander chalte hain paar mujhe darpook maat bulao for God sake!They walk inside the house to see it.They never saw the watchman's dead body.Some one removed the body and cleaned that place.A guy somes in the house and tells them that he's the agent Gaurav talked to.Ronit started dealing with an agent.While watching the rooms pooja feels that some is keep following her but when she look for it....there's nothing.....suddenly she hears the voice that someone is crying......she follows the voice, it is coming from a dark room...Pooja:Ka..kau..kaun hai..kyun ro rahi ho?no reply!!! A sign of fear appears on pooja's face but she still want to find out thats why she goes there n suddenly..........BHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, Ronit appears from the room and start laughing at pooja....Pooja:Ronit this is too much now, Ronit:Mein ne kaha tha na ke tum bohot darpook ho, chalo ab unpacking mein meri help karo.They both goes out of the room....after they left the room, a voice of laughing came from the room with a strange shadow in the dark.

Its almost night time.Someone rings the doorbell.Pooja opens it and sees a woman standing in front of her.Pooja:Jee.kahiye.Woman:Memsaab,main Jyoti hoon,yaha kaam karti hoon.Pooja:Oh accha...to..to itni der kyun kya ane mein?Pooja:Memsaab...vo raasta bhoolgayi thi sorry.Pooja:Theek hai..aab tum ander aao aur mujhe dinner bananae mein madat karo please.Jyoti and Pooja made dinner and cleaned half of the house.Pooja comes in their bedroom and sees their bed covered with flowers and rose petals all over the bed sheet.Ronit:*coughs*kya dekh rahi ho?Pooja:Bedroom aur kya?Ronit:(putting his hands around Pooja)Aap ko pata hain is beestar pe aaj kya hone wale hain?Pooja:Ufff shut up aur neeche chalo khana tayaar hai.Downstairs,Pooja and Ronti were having dinner and was looking at each other.The lights went off all of a sudden.Pooja calls Jyoti to find candles.Jyoti says she cant find them since her hands are dirty and will take sometimes to clean them.Pooja decides to look for the candles by herself.She sees the candles on top of a tiny shelf near the window.She goes towards it and holds the candle all of a sudden someone holded her hand from outside the window.Pooja looked up and saw a horrible face and screamed.Ronit came there and asked her what happened.Pooja tells Ronit what she saw.Ronit:Ufff Pooja..yeh tumhari illusion hai aur kuch nahi.Aab chalo sone clahte hai.Pooja and Ronit goes upstairs.Pooja is extremley scared and is shaking/sweating badly.Ronit:Pooja...control yourself yaar..tum daar kyun rahi ho?Pooja was about to say something but got more scared due to the thunder storm outside.She hugged Ronit and they fell on the bed.

Next morning,Ronit leaves for office and tells Pooja that they'll go on their honeymoon after this week.Pooja is happy and tells him to drive carefully.She then goes out to the garden and waters the plants and cutts off some dead leaves from rose bushes.She calls Jyoti and tells her to prepare the launch.Jyoti goes inside and Pooja was till working outside.Seconds later,Pooja heard Jyoti screaming.She quickly ran inside the kitchen and saw Jyoti being stabbed by a knife on her back but no one was holding the knife.Jyotis body went up on the celeing and kept on banging up and down.Then,her body got pushed into the cealing fand and got torn in peaces.Bloos splashed all over the kitchen.Pooja screamed as blood covered her face and clothes.

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Creative Head/Story Ideas:Dashing Boy

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Tansha thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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taffy it was gud..plz cont soon..

tansha
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job! 👏

and good job scaring me too...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ahhhh, pretty scared and intense, plz continue 😊 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lolzzz....I luv it....😆
Keep it up...😃
U did an awesome job....👏
Luv,
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aaaahhh 😳
that wuz freakky
good job 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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taffy that was amazing. 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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creepy. please continue. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys...

DB deserves credit too!! Half of the story was his idea! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Its Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!! pls cont...soon... Its kinda spooky too but still great! 👏

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