jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-1....Ronit,pooja,Akash,Reema & Poornima r 1 gang in
the St.Peter's college.their
gang is known as PEPSI.
Ronit is a cool boy.Good at
music & dance. Pooja ia a
tom boy.Does'nt walk like a
girl.she has funny
hairstyles. she is a comic
figure in the college.She has
worn clip in her teeth.so her
smile is funny.Poornima is a
good student,dancer & a
singer.Akash is a football
player.Reema is a rich girl
who is very modern.but very
calm & sweet.her face looks as
if she has a lot of
worries inside her smile.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
hey great, plz continue soon! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
Part-2....It was raining heavily.the college was covered

with water.pooja{in jeans}
stands at the front of the
college waiting 4 sumbody. she
gets fed up:where is he?
then he sees a guy walking in
the rain. she:he has cum
.she goes 2 him with the
umbrella.he looks at her.he in
none other than ronit.he
smiles at her. pooja was
tough:don't try 2 soap me with
ur stupid smile.she holds
the umbrella 4 him:why r u
becoming late?i knew that
u'll 4get 2 take the
umbrella.thats why i stood here
with this umbrella. R:i don't
need this umbrella? P:in
this rain,u don't need this
umbrella? R:no. P:r u mad?
ronit laughs.he throws pooja's
umbrella away. P:whats
this ronit? ronit holds her
hand & dances in the rain:i
luv rain.its so nice 2 dance
in the rain. p:u r
crazy.leave my hand.its
already late ronit.the classes r
started. R:its ok,i'm not
entering the class now.i want
2 enjoy rain. P:ok,but i'm
going. R:ok.. P:ok?i'll go.
A:go. P:i'm serious. R:ok
baba,u go. pooja becomes angry:i'm not going.
R:then dance with me. P:no
way. ronit dances in the
rain.the mad pooja sits on the
steps watching his
dance. after sumtime akash &
reema cum. Reema:why
did'nt u cum 2 the class?
P:look at the rain. both
look.they laugh seeing ronit's
dance in the rain. P:i
was waiting 4 that crazy
fellow. R:ronit did'nt cum
2 the class.but why did'nt u
cum 2 the class? P:how can
i leave ronit alone.whatever
happens i'll never leave
him alone. akash-reema
smile.


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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
wow, this is so nice!!

👏

you are really good at this! 👏 👏
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Part-3....Pooja runs 2 ronit:enuff ronit.u'll be caught
fever. R:no way. suddenly he sees poornima cuming in the
rain with a rainbow umbrella. R:hi poornima. poornima:hi
everybody. R:why did u become late? P:went 2 recieve my
uncle at the airport.i'd informed the teachers. R:ur
umbrella looks amazing. P:thanku . R:but why du u want 2
catch it?u look more pretty when u r wet in the rain.
P:u r crazy..pooja:yes,ronit is totally out of control.
ronit imagines poornima wet in the rain. R:how sweet.
akash holds the umbrella 4 reema.both of them found
it difficult 2 look at each other. PEPSI TEAM gets ready
4 rain dance party.pooja wers a red frock & go
there.R:u look pretty. P:thanks ronit. he extends
his arms & holds her 2 dance.the song 4 dance : seene
mein dil...{KAS}..suddenly pooja realises tht it was
only her dream.she gets embarassed. pooja goes 4 the
party.she runs 2 ronit:how do i look now? R:u look
funny..in ur pony & teeth with the clip. P:shut up.how
is my dress? A:very pretty. pooja smiles. R:but it
does'nt look gud on u. pooja becomes sad. poornima cumes in
a mini skirt. R:wow! he goes 2 her. R:will u dance with
me? Poornima:o!sure..they dance 2 the song "seene
mein..."akash-reema also dance with lots of
affection.pooja was alone & becomes really sad without
no partner.ppl tease her.she cries.ronit sees it. he
cumes there:pooja is not alone.i'm her dancing partner.
pooja was surprised. ronit holds her hand & dances. P:i
ever thought that u'll be willing 2 dance with me.i
doubt whether its a dream. R:why? P:how can a dashing
guy like u can dance with a funny comic figure like me.
R:i like comic figures very much,especially u. pooja
becomes happy.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
Great job! 👏 It reminds me of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai. Please continue.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
Part-4...Ronit-pooja go 2 an icecream parlour. Both of
them order chocolate icecreams.pooja was slow in having
it.but ronit finished 2 cecreams fast. R:pooja,i did'nt
bring money..P:its ok.i've money. she gives the purse 2
him:let it be with u. Ronit sees poornima walking outside.
R:pooja,i'll cum now. he goes out near poornima:hi!why r u
here? P:i'm going 2 the icecream parlour. R:then
cum,we'l go 2 this parlour. P:sorry,i prefer the other
parlour. R:ok then we'll go there. both of them go 2 the
other icecream parlour & hav icecreams. ronit pays the
bill with pooja's money.pooja got fed up by waiting 4
him. The next day ,pooja goes 2 the classroom .goes near
ronit.he tries 2 hide. R:i'm sorry.ur money got
spent.i'll giv u later. P:i don't mind.but where did u
go leaving me alone? i waited 4 4 a long time.the
parlour guys got angry.they thot i'm fooling them.they
called me cheater & i had 2 work there instead of giving
money. ronit felt pity:sorry pooja.he hugs & consoles
her.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
hey I think it was great, I wonder if she will have a makeover, then I think that Ronit will pay more attention to her than Poorinma. Well good luck Pooja! Keep up the great writing, can't wait till the next episode! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
hey it was great, but I wonder if Pooja will have a makeover, then Ronit will pay more attention to her than Poorinma. It does remind of Kuch Kuch Hota Hain, but I love it! Keep writing....please continue. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
Part-5....akash-reema out 2gether.reema sees her
a boy :hi bobby... she goes 2 him.she hugs him. B:how r
u? R:fine. akash gets irritated & becomes jeolous.
when reema cumes back,his face was dull. reema
understood that:he is Bobby.my old friend. A:ok,we'll
go.akash does'nt talk 2 her. he thinks:why i can't
stand reema becoming close 2 any other guy? The next
day ,when akash cumes 2 college sees the PEPSI gang
except reema. he looks 4 reema with a dull face.
ronit-pooja-poornima understand that. pooja whistles.reema
whowas standing behind the wall cumes there .akash was
relieved.every1 smiles. ronit-pooja-poornima go 2 the
canteen near akash. poornima:u r thinking about reema.right?
A:how did u understand that? poornima:ur eyes tell that.can't u
realize that ur feelings 2wards reema is luv? akash
becomes serious. R:what? poornima:he feels lonely & sad when
reema is not seen.this is luv,what else?akash ha 2
relieve his luv. akash was hesitating. poornima:ppl hav 2 no
their heartbeats & luv 4 others. ronit-pooja find
meaning in that sentence. pooja thinks:my feeling 4
ronit is luv?i become happy when i see him & becomes sad
when i don't see him.this is what else other than luv?
ronit observes poornima. 1 guy cumes with a rose 2 her:i
luv u poornima. P:sorry...he catches her hand.she slaps
him:u thot if u smile at me,i'll cum behind u?i'm not
that sort of girl. ronit gets impressed by her
behaviour.

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