Socha na tha-fanfic 4 YMLH

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-1....Ronit is
a middle class guy who is crazy about music.his gr8est
ambition is 2 become a gud playback singer.his friends r
Kushan & Reema.reema is the daughter of a famous
music director Inderji{Ronit Roy}.ronit's plan is 2 get
a chance from him 2 sing 4 a movie.reema has given him
hopes.he stays in the outhouse of a rich family.a smart
old lady called Arundathi
stays there with her grandchildren pooja{19yrs old} &
shamit{11yrs old}.her son inder Gujaral & wife maya r in
america.One day in the morning,ronit hears a sweet
female voice :dadi,i'm going 2 college. ronit was eager
2 see her.he looks thru the window.he sees a girl going
out on a bike.he cud see only her back.short
top-jeans...silky hair.after a few days,shamit comes 2
see ronit with a request:can u do 1 favour? R:yes
sure. shamit:she told 2 take the book thats kept on the
top of the cupboard. R:who is this 'she'? shamit:my
luvly sister pooja.ronit smiles.he remembers seeing her
back 1day .he wants 2 see her face. he goes there &
takes the book from the top of the cupboard.the shy
girl{pooja} extends her arms from the room 2 reach the
book. ronit smiles:cum out of room. she cumes out
slowly.ronit was shocked 2 see her.bcoz she was looking
horrible.she was in a pink salwar.she hs worn a big
black framed spectacle.her teeth were that horrible...as
if its going 2 cum out of the mouth.ronit gives her the
book. pooja smiles:thanku.. ronit goes out
immediately.he was feeling awkward remembering her
horrible smile. pooja & shamit in the room.shamit
laughs:that poor fellow ran away with his life.he got
scared. pooja laughs. she removes her spectacle & the
duplicate teeth she had worn 2 fool ronit. shamit:didi,u
wear it always.u look better in it. pooja becomes
angry:u naughty boy.....they dance 2 the sng...its the
time 2 disco...suddenly hearing dadi's voice they stop
the music & pretend 2 be studying. dadi cumes:gud,u both
r studying.every1 knows that u'l study well with gud
culture if ppl stay with me. pooja-shamit felt funny.
dadi:ur dad is online..they become so happy that they
rush 2 take the Ph. shamit talks.pooja takes the
reciever from him:hello daddy,how r u?i'm fine...ronit
passes by...he looks at her thru the window with a weird
feeling.he cud'nt see her face .suddenly pooja turns
back.angad was surprised 2 see pooja's normal
appearance. pooja did'nt see him.she continues talking:u
hav a surprise 4 me?whats that?its a suspense? u'l bring
it when u cum here next time?o!daddy,u r so
sweet.....ronit whispers:pooja,u r also beautiful....


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music287 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#2
hey sounds interesting please continue. I liked the other stories you had written before. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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itz kool....keep it up😊
Luv,
Mish
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
PART-2...R:poojau r also sweet like ur dad....the
next day when pooja goes near her bike,ronit was seen b4
her.she gets shy,bcoz her identity is out now.
R:so.. were playing a drama...P:what drama?what
did i do? R:why did u fool me? P:u got fooled
easily bcoz u r foolish.what can i do 4 that? ronit
becomes angry.but he controls. he becomes sweet
purposefully:why did u hide ur pretty face? pooja gets
impressed by that statement. she laughs:bcoz i wanted 2
tease u? ronit smiles:but why? she:simply...she takes
her bike & goes away with a smile on her face. ronit
tells himself:i'm going crazy...is it luv?or simply an
attraction? he sings & dances around in that spirit:dil
to paagal hai...reema:ronit,who is in ur mind?
R:music. R:no 1 else? he:who else can take that
place? R:i can't believe it seeing u singing &
dancing like a mad person. ronit becomes embarrased.
kushan laughs. R:anyways,2morow,there is a song
recording.u cum with us.the super singer Rocky
is the male singer.and the 1 & only reema is the female
singer. R:u r so lucky reema..R:1 day that
luck will cum 2 u ronit. he smiles. he also goes 2 see
the recording.he sees the song recording & enjoys.he
dreams -...ronit singing in the place of rocky. reema
intoduces him 2 inderji. R:plz giv me a chance 2
sing 4 a movie sir. inderji:i can't tell u yes
immediately.1st let me hear ur song. ronit gets
tensed.so his voice does'nt cum out properly.he was very
weak in singing. inderji becomes angry:this is ur song?&
u r so prowd.u want 2 sing in my movie?rubbish.he
does'nt even listen 2 reema's words. R:ronit,why r
u getting tensed?u were so energetic. he:i dunno how it
happened. she:anyways,u hav 2 take practise. he:ok...
ronit goes 2 see inderji's house.he becomes angry:why r
u here again?i told u no,u can't sing,so no chance 4 u.
he becomes sad.but he does'nt show that. he:no problem
sir.plz giv me sum other job.i've financial problems.
inderji:can u do cooking? ronit was confused. reema
shows action 2 tell yes from a small distance. so ronit
shakes his head. inderji:u no cooking? R:yes sir.
inderji:so 2day onwards u can do cooking here. he:ok
sir. inderji goes.reema cumes. R:reema,i dunno
cooking at all. Reema:its ok,i'll help u.ronit,its a
gud chance 2 get close 2 my dad.u'll get a chance 2
prove ur talent. ronit smiles:thats my hope. ronit
serves food.he was tensed about inderji's reaction.
inderji tastes it:u r a gud cook. R:thanku sir.i'm
also a singer. inderji teases:that i no.that day i had
heard ur song no. R:sir...thats bcoz of my tension.
inderji does'nt mind it.he feels funny. reema consoles
him. ronit goes back.he sees pooja's bike.he goes &
touches it smoothly.he kisses it.he hears a laughter.it
was shamit's.ronit gets embarassed:full of dust.i was
cleaning it.. shamit smiles & goes out with his cricket
bat. pooja brings a plate full of gilebies & ladoos
without others' knowledge & keeps it on ronit's table
thru the window.she hoped that seeing this he will
search 4 her.pooja hides herself 2 see ronit's reaction
seeing it. ronit had seen it,but hid himself from
pooja.he cud guess pooja's plan.so he pretends 2 be
crazy about these sweets.he does'nt look 4 her,instead
of that he eats it fast as if he was starving 4 1
week.pooja becomes angry & goes away.seeing it,ronit
laughs.he felt funny.pooja keeps a paper piece on
ronit's table thru the window & goes.ronit sees the
paper,takes it & reads.."fool,bloody fool...." ronit
becomes angry.
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Part-3....Pooja & mandy were cuming back from the
college. M:how was
2day's class? P:oh,boring
yaar...i was not at all
listening. ronit with tuff face
stands b4 them. pooja
whispers 2 mandy:this is that
fellow..mandy laughs.ronit
cud'nt stand them teasing.
R:pooja,i want 2 talk 2
u.plz cum 2 the park.i'll
wait 4 u. P:i'll think about
it{with
headweight}..ronit waits 4
pooja at the park.she does'nt
cum.he gets really irritated.
but after sumtime she
cumes. ronit was angry:why did
u becum late? P:i was
not late..accoding 2 me..i cum
only when i feel like..
R:ok..he takes out the piece
of paper pooja had kept
on his table:whats this?
she:can't u see?its a
paper.very funny..R:i no
that.but whats written
here? she:can't u read
english? he:yes,thats why i asked
u. she:i've written that u r a
fool,bloody fool! ronit
loses his control:stop it.in
the beginning itself i new
that u r naughty.but i took it
as a funny thing.but now
u r crossing ur limit.u don't
no who i am.u no,when i
was in the college,i've done
many notorious things.
pooja laughs:so u r
adventerous.let me hear ur
adventures.tell me...tell
me....R:i won't tell u.but
i'll show. he keeps her
tightly close 2 his chest &
kisses her. pooja screams at
him:u brute!how cud u do
this 2 me?this is the way u
hav 2 behave 2 a girl? ronit
becomes upset:i'm sorry..i did
this 4 fun. she:this is
how u shud hav fun?i'll tell
this 2 dadi...& 2
every1...she runs away.ronit
becumes upset & goes 2 see
kushan-reema. he:i did a
blunder. R:what did u
do? ronit tells
everything.they were shocked.
K:ronit,this is not a silly
thing.u hav insulted a
girl in a public place.if she
files a sexual harassment
case,u'll be put into the
jail. ronit gets tensed:then
what can i do? K:go there
during the nite.u take
all ur things & escape without
their knowledge. 3of them go there.only ronit gets
inside.he
goes 2 his room & takes all
his things.suddenly he was
shocked 2 see pooja standing
b4 him. ronit gets
embarrased. P:so,u r
planning 2 escape from here.
R:no,i was arranging
everything. P:u
can't escape now.i've called
every1 here 2morrow.let
them cum & giv u punishment.
R:its my request.plz
don't spoil my future.
she:this u had 2 think b4. he:i
did that,bcoz u made me angry.
P:so when u bicum
angry,u kiss others?
R:no,i kiss only u.bcoz i
thot u...P:what did u think
about me?u thot i luv u?
R:leave it plz..u can giv me
any punishments.but
don't insult me b4 others.
she:u're willing 2 accept any
punishment that i giv u?
he:yes. she:then u extend ur
right arm. ronit extends his
right arm after closing his
eyes.pooja felt funny seeing
his tensed face. she kisses
his arm.ronit opens his eyes
with surprise.he cud'nt
believe it. pooja was
shy.ronit kisses her arm.then they
hug each other. K:where is
this ronit?i doubt
whether he is caught by them.
R:let me go & see.
she goes..she was shocked 2
see both of them hugging
each other.she smiles & goes
back 2 kushan:don't expect
him now.he won't cum.bcoz they
r n luv. kushan was
surprised. poojA runs away
from ronit with shyness.ronit
smiles at her.


music287 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#6
very cute. plz continue. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cont soon..tht was mind blowing.. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aaw its realli good 😳 👏 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
PART-4...Ronit tells pooja:atlast u stole my heart.so u
r a thief. P:what about u?u r also a heart thief.i'd
noticed u watching me from the beginning..they
laugh.she:ronit..luv is a feeling...true luv can't be
hidden anywhere.it will automatically cum out. R:if
ur dad opposes our marriage? P:never!he can't stand
against my wish. ronit smiles. while inderji & reema
were entering the house,ronit was polishing inderji's
shoes & was also singing. inderji was surprised 2 hear
ronit's sweet voice. ronit stops singing seeing him. he
goes 2 the kitchen. Reema: told u no papa,ronit sings
well. inderji did'nt mind her.she becomes dull. A song
recording of rocky ..pooja & mandy also cum 2 see it
on the care of reema. rocky came very late losing his
professionalism.pooja-mandy ask 4 autogragh,but
hedid'nt mind them. inderji scolds him:now u r having
headweight. rocky becomes irritated.he leaves the place.
every1 becomes sad. inderji was cool:ronit,u hav 2 sing
this sing...ronit-pooja-reema were surprised. ronit
did'ntget words 2 thank inderji. ronit goes 2 sing.pooja
did some actions 2 giv him best of luck.ronit smiles.he
looks at pooja & sings the romantic song. the song
becomes a big hit. when pooja was dreaming about ronit
in her room during nite,ronit cumes from back .pooja was
surprised. R:u were studying? P:no...i'll get a
big zero 4 the exam.bcoz while i open my book,only ur
face is seen. R:i'll giv u a medicine 2 study well.
he hugs her. P:when u r becoming a popular
singer,i'm getting tensed whetheru r moving away from
me.. he:never,bcoz real luv can't go anywhere.my song
became nice ince u were there with me.u r my inspiration
2 sing. P:i feel that those romantic lyrics were
written 4 us. ronit smiles.
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#10
PART-5....Reema arranges another house 4 ronit.pooja
feels sad:ronit,plz don't go....Reema:whats this
pooja?its 4 ronit's career.its true that this house was
lucky4 ronit.but he has 2 change his house.there diff
producers & directors cum.it'll bring favour 4 ronit.
P:ok...ronit:i'm going from this house,not from ur
heart. pooja smiles. pooja's dad Inder Gujaral & maya gujaral plan 2
cum.that eagerly waited day cumes. poooja-dadi-shamit go
2 the airport 2 receive them.they were very
happy.surprisingly Raj Uncle & devika aunty{their family
friends} were there with their son.pooja is seeing them
after many years....inder:pooja,can u recognise who this
is? pooja looks at the guy {their son}. she was
surprised:ASMIT!what a gr8 surprise. A:wow!so u
remember me? pooja after reaching home tells inder:dad,i
want 2 tell an imp matter. I:whats that? she:i'm in
luv. om:wow!u r in luv?how did it happen?may be ur luv
was at 1st sight..bcoz i had told him not 2 contact u
till we reach here.bcoz i was planning 2 giv u a
surprise. P:dad, whom u r talking about? I:about
ashmit,he is the surprise gift u were waiting from me. pooja was shocked:no,this can't happen. inder was
shocked:why? P:bcoz i luv ronit. I:who is he?
she:he is a famous playback singer. I:i'm sorry beti,i
can't agree with u. pooja was shocked:is it my dad
talking like this?i can't believe this. I:bcoz i
promised them that i'll conduct this wedding.plz
pooja...pooja cries:no papa,i promised ronit that i
won't leave him. I:when i told u about my surprise 2
u,if u had given me a hint about ronit,i wud'nt hav
continued going with this idea,but now its too late
...it'll harm my reputation.if u don't mind ur dad
getting insulted b4 others i'll conduct ur wedding with
ronit.do u want that? he cries:i beg u pooja...P:no
papa,i wont allow u 2 get insulted b4 others.i'm willing
2 marry ashmit. Inder was relieved.pooja was upset.she lost
her sleep.

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