Lafzoon Main Ke Na Sakoo-Updated 12/22/05 - Page 16

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keep up the good work
and plz rite soon

gud work gal..keep up the work and do cont soon.. 😃

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Pooja- Oh god, please kuch kar deka, main main ROnit ko phone karti hoon

Pooja calls Ronit

Pooja- Ronit

Ronit- Pooja subah ke 8 baje hai aur aaj choothi hai soh jayo

Pooja- Ronit, mujhe tumse abhi baat karna hai

ROnit- Pooja hum log cafe pe milte hai 11 baje ok

Pooja- Ok


Ronit- Pooja tum teekh ho

Pooja- Ronit, Akash neh mjhe kaal raat ko call kiya

Ronit- Kya

Pooja- Haan aur woh bolraha tha muhse badlaa lega, aur mujhe aaj raat ko mandir mai bulaya hai

onit- Main bhi tumhare saath chaloonga

Pooja- Ronit agar tumhe kuch hojayega toh

Ronit- Agar tumhe kuch hua toh

Pooja smiles at Ronit and they both leave and Akash overhears this

Akash- Upsoos ke baath yeh hai kai Ronit ko aaj mar paregi

Pooja comes at the mandir

Pooja taks out her shoes and goes inside the mandir and rings the bell and does her prayers

Pooja- Akash

Akash get a blindfold and wraps it around Pooja's eyes and ties her up and tells her what is going to happen to ROnit

Pooja- Akash, please tum Ronit ko chordo

Akash- Pooja ek hi sharth par

Pooja- Bolo

Akash- Tum mujhse shaadi karogi

Pooja- Haan agar tum ROnit ko chordo to

Akash opens he up and gives her bridal wear and tells Pooja to wear it

Pooja takes it and puts it on and comes back.

Akash- Mandit pe behto

Pooja sits down with tears and with a surprise

Pundit- Haath dulhe ke haath pe rakho

Pooja doesn't put her hand

Akash- Haath rako Pooja

Pooja is still

Akash- Haath rakho

Pooja is still and then Akash takes her hand and outs it on top of his and they do phere and sit down and just about when Akash is about to put a mangalsutra on Pooja's neck ROnit comes all bloody and sees this he rushes to Akash and Pooja tries to run to Ronit but her dupaata is tied to Akash, Pooja nties it and comes to Ronit

Akash- Tum waqt par aye Roni, tumhri Pooja mere hone wali biwi hone jaa rahi hai

Ronit- Jab tak main hoon yeh nahi joga and takes out something from his pocket, its sindoor.

Ronit- Pata hai Pooja, dadi neh mujhe yeh dyaa tha jabhi usne bola tha ke jaab mujhe mer jeevan saath miljaye toh yeh lagana he opens it up and Pooja is shocked and surprised and she closes her eyes while tears come out and he applies sindoor on her

and she opens her eyes and it ends there

is that the end of the fan fic??

Originally posted by: sk91

is that the end of the fan fic??

no it has just begun 😊 mybe this was all a dream??? keep thinking and reading😊

a dream ????? i hate when they play with your mind like that grr 😡

bravvvvo i love im addicted to it now stilllll bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbrrrraavvvvvooooooo 👏