Samaina OS: Aise bhi Mohabbat hoti hai

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi All,

Here is another OS ,tried a different style of writing.Hope you all will like it. A idea popped up and just wrote it, havent spell checked. Please ignore any mistakes.

Love

Sajida

Primary School Days

"Moti.. tu apna lunch khana " Sameer took his lunch box away from Naina

"Nahi , Aunty ne mere liye bhi ek aloo paratha diya hai , tu bhukad mera bhi kha raha hai " . Naina tries to snatch the box from him.

After multiple failed attempts to get the box "Thik hai mat de .." Naina turned her face and sulked in a corner.

"Le , aadha aadha khate hai .. " Sameer bought the lunch box to her

"Nahi khana ab " Naina turned her face away.

"Sorry Moti .. Sun tu aise gussa hoti hai to bilkul acchi nahi lagti. "

Taking a bite of paratha " Chal kha le " and fed her. She smiled and both of them fed each other.

"Dairy Milk layi thi, aadha addha khate hain " breaking it to half she gave him.

Even though Sameer would fight with Naina for almost all the silly things in the world but at the end he could not see her sad.

"Moti " Karthik teased Naina as they were entering the class.

"Moti !!! " Kisko bola tu " Sameer punched Karthik . "Naina hai uska naam , phir kabhi Moti bola na naak thod dunga "

Naina pulled Sameer away " Kyun maara tune usko , tu bhi to Moti bolta hai mujhe "

"Woh sirf mai bol sakta houn , koi aur bolega to phir mai to maarunga" Sameer said still looking angrily at Karthik.

"Dekho haath pe chot aayi chal teacher se pati karate hai aur upar se principal se daant bhi padegi " she dragged him.

School Farewell:

Naina was fighting with her father for a new dress. " I have my farewell and I don't want to wear the same old dress. I need a new one "

"Sorry Naina , you had got a new one last month, no more. Paise pedh pe nahi ugte . Try to adjust" her father advised.

"Accha huva Sameer to aa gaya , she is simply not listening to me , only you can make her understand" Rakesh told Sameer

" Dont worry uncle I will " Sameer went to Naina's room who was still frowning.

" Mai Nahi aa rahi Farewell pe , woh Kamya phir se mujhe chedegi ki wahi purana wala dress pehna hai "

He smiled at her cute antics and then forwarding a box he said "Tumhare liye"

She jumped excitedly on the bed looking at the beautiful dress .

"Thank you sooooo much ! Par paise kahan se laye tumne? "

"Woh puri pocket money jo bacha ke rakhi thi , wahi use kiya " . How could he not fulfill her wish, it was the love he had for her.

She hugged him "you are my bessssssssst friend". he was her best friend, partner in crime.

"Chal ab moti ready ho ja late ho rahein hai "

"Ab moti nahi houn mai aur tum bolna band karo "

"Mere liye tu zindagi bhar moti hi rahegi " he pulled her cheeks resulting in Naina running behind him to hit with the box.

At the farewell function Kamya looking at Naina in the new dress said " Tu kitna bhi accha dress pehen le , lagegi behenji hi " and the rest of her gang laughed at her.

Naina ran from there with tears rolling down her cheeks to her favorite place . Sameer who was watching this ran behind her.

"Naina ... Kahan ho tum ? " ..

She was sitting on the bench sobbing , though she knew Kamya always tried to insult her and most of the times she ignored but today somehow her continuous banter on looks affected her.

Sameer sat next to her and gave his kerchief . They just sat silently for sometime. After her sobs had stopped "Mai bilkul acchi nahi dekhti houn na ? Why always people taunt on my looks " saying she leaned on his shoulder.

"Meri Naina jitni koi khoobsurat nahi hai . Yeh aakhen jinhe ek baar dekhlo to bas dekhte raho. Yeh pink thoooooode se chubby cheeks , yeh gulab ke petals ke jaise lips , yeh milky white jaisa skin aur sabse alag tumhara dil. Jitni tum sundar ho usse bhi zyada tumhara dil hai " he calmed her and held her close.

"Tumko sundar lagoungi hi na , best friend jo ho " she said still holding him

"Hmmm tum meri sab kuch " Sameer replied.

College Days

"Papa mujhe bike chahiye , sirf ladke hi bike chala sakte hai kya ?, woh Sharma uncle ki Royal Enfield lo na ... .pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee"

"Nahi !! lekar kya karunga , kaun sikhayega tujhe ? " Her father retorted.

"Mai sikha dounga Uncle isko " Sameer who was listening to the father daughter chat replied.

She hugged him and said "You are my besssssssssssssssst friend " , Love you " . A person whom she could trust blindly , her one and only one best friend Sameer.

" I love you toooo " Sameer replied with all the affection in his voice. Her command was his wish, that was the love he had.."

"Papa aane mein late hoga and don't worry Sameer is with me , he will drop " she said while going for a college farewell party. a protector a rescuer in all crisis.

After College Naina went abroad for higher studies and Sameer pursed his passion and worked in the same college. He never wanted to leave his place, his mother.

After 2 years

"Maa aaj Naina wapis aa rahi hai , mai apni dil ki baat bata dounga. " he held his mom and twirled.

"Haan bol de , bachpan se hi tu ,bas Naina se hi pyar kiya hai " his mother laughed along with him

Holding a bouquet of red roses he rang the bell with a restless heart.

"Arey Sameer beta accha huva tum aa gayein , tumhe hi phone karne wala tha " Rakesh took him inside.

"Yeh Rohan hai , Naina ne isse pasand kiya hai apna Jeevan Saathi "

"Hi Sameer "

" Hiiii Rohan "

"Yeh mera best friend hai .. Zindagi mein har waqt mere saath rehna wala . " Naina held hs hand.

Handing the roses to her "Moti, Khush rahe hamesha. Thoda kaam hai aata houn. "

"You are lucky Rohan , very very Lucky " Sameer congratulated Rohan and left with a heart that was screaming of pain.

After 6 years

"Beta Rohan ke saath Naina ki zindagi chal rahi hai aur woh khush hai. Tu bhi ab aage badh aur shaadi kar le . Kitni baar Naina ne bhi tujhe samjaya hai.". He never spoke about the love he felt for her and would just ignore saying "Shaadi mere bus ki baat nahi"

"Maa uski yaadein kafi hai mujhe zindagi guzarne ke liye, ab kisi aur ke liye is dil mein jagah nahi hai "

Uske liye mai hamesha best friend raha houn aur rahunga . Par woh mera pehla aur aakhri pyar hai.

Looking at their childhood photo in his locket

" Tumhein Chaha to bas chaha itna ke ,

Kisi aur ko chahne ki chahat na rahi "

"Sameeer , tum abhi tak ready nahi huve chalo na football khelne chaltein hai" ... Naina's 6 year old son pulled him.

Pyar karna aur paana hi nahi hai Mohabbat, kisi ko na paa kar bhi chahana aisi bhi Mohabbat hoti hai.

P.S: Sorry pata hai bahut logoun ka dil tuta hoga par pyar ke rang bahut hai. Maaro mat šŸ˜‹

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Suparna13 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Now I am speechless... aankhon mein aasuon aa gaye 😭

Best friend sameer naina.... that possesive nature of sameer from childhood .... moti to sirf mai hi bolunga!!! I just love....ā¤ļø!!!!

Childhood days,college days.... Sameer's unconditional pyaar for naina.... I cried, Sajida di😭.... you nailed it dišŸ¤—!!!

For sameer, naina is his forever love .....chahe wo saath ho ya na ho .. .😭!!! Hmmm, aise stories bhi hoti hai!!!

But,meri ek demand hai.... ek happy ending wala os de dena.... I just like their school and college days...!!!

Eager to read more stories from you...šŸ¤—!!



With love,Suparna

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This reminded me of the song Main rahoon ya na rahoon

and the end was exactly similar

and I don't like such endingsšŸ’”šŸ˜­

they break my heart

though you have always written it very beautifully

but forgive me for not coming up with a better review

my heart is also small like Show's sameer

I can not take them with someone else

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: munchkinland

This reminded me of the song Main rahoon ya na rahoon

and the end was exactly similar

and I don't like such endingsšŸ’”šŸ˜­

they break my heart

though you have always written it very beautifully

but forgive me for not coming up with a better review

my heart is also small like Show's sameer

I can not take them with someone else

Sahi kaha... that song!!! I just love that song.... but this type of story just break my heartšŸ’”šŸ„ŗ

But,Sajida di, you wrote it beautifully!!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yeees i am the one who commented first. Sajida yaar dil to tuta per pyaar ka ye rang dil ko chu gaya. And simply i rememberd imran hasmi song."main rahun yaa na rahu " but you wrote it in your style šŸ¤—

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suparna13

Sahi kaha... that song!!! I just love that song.... but this type of story just break my heartšŸ’”šŸ„ŗ

But,Sajida di, you wrote it beautifully!!!

That was the song I was listening when this idea clicked 😊. Even i hate sad endings but somehow felt like writing this.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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As much as I become sad on a sad ending, I'm a sucker for it. šŸ˜† Finally, someone wrote something on that line. Oh man! This is so beautiful. I could imagine everything so vividly. Thank you so much for this beautiful OS. Btw, shall I tell you, you inspired me to write something soon. Thank you.šŸ¤—

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sajida superb OS yaar loved it

Srilatha

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Originally posted by: Suparna13

Now I am speechless... aankhon mein aasuon aa gaye 😭

Best friend sameer naina.... that possesive nature of sameer from childhood .... moti to sirf mai hi bolunga!!! I just love....ā¤ļø!!!!

Childhood days,college days.... Sameer's unconditional pyaar for naina.... I cried, Sajida di😭.... you nailed it dišŸ¤—!!!

For sameer, naina is his forever love .....chahe wo saath ho ya na ho .. .😭!!! Hmmm, aise stories bhi hoti hai!!!

But,meri ek demand hai.... ek happy ending wala os de dena.... I just like their school and college days...!!!

Eager to read more stories from you...šŸ¤—!!



With love,Suparna

Hi Suparna

Sorry dear for making you cry. But har love story will not end happily even though its pure. Thats life.šŸ˜’

Pakka ek OS likhoungi with happy ending school days wali.ā¤ļø. Ab muskura došŸ¤—

Love

Sajida

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: munchkinland

This reminded me of the song Main rahoon ya na rahoon

and the end was exactly similar

and I don't like such endingsšŸ’”šŸ˜­

they break my heart

though you have always written it very beautifully

but forgive me for not coming up with a better review

my heart is also small like Show's sameer

I can not take them with someone else

I know dear Samaina ko alag koi nahi dekh sakta, pata nahi this song I like very much. Its such a beautiful portrayal of unconditional love...ā¤ļø

I wil compensate with another OS of Samaina school wala ,Suparna ki request jo hai.

Love

Sajida

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