Samaina SS : Hamari Kahani -Ch 22 Last Chapter Updated on Page80(No PM - Page 10

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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

Sajida this was beautifully written

and I love the way you describe emotions and things.

its soo soothing to read

Naina read the mail but she did not understand what he was going through

did the distance put them really apart.

And now when she was in Ahmadabad she thought he was in pain because of Sunaina

She did scold him and motivated him

but did Naina really fail to understand her Sameer

I am really looking forward to the next update

I am sure they will meet soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Rula Diya update ne.... Next me Mila do pls

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Posted: 6 years ago
#93

Awesome update. The care she show for him was too overwhelming. But felt bad for both the broken souls. Loving the story too much. And sgayarus r as always too good.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Lovely update. Waiting for the next update to see them together

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Posted: 6 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sonushrivastava

Lovely update Sajida di. And the shayaris are beautiful as always. The PCO conversation was amazing. You have described their feelings, turmoil and emotions very beautifully. The precap very interesting. Hope everything gets sorted soon. Will love to read further.

Disha

Thank you so much Disha😊. Happy to hear that I was able to convey their pain. Naina loves him a lot how can she can let him fail. She was his best friend first before a lover , one who had guided him. Lets see if things get sorted or they become more complicated.

Love

Sajida

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Posted: 6 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: shwta16

Loved it. ❤️❤️

What should I say? I am hardly finding words. It was beautiful, Sajida. 🤗I just read 3rd Chapter and then this chapter. How do you write such emotional lines along with the beautiful Shayri. ❤️

I loved how you narrated the heartbreak, the pain, the turmoil and th shayari just worked as cherry on the cake. I love reading Ahmad Faraz shayari and these particular lines which you used in the end are just Dil le lo.

Some lines by Ahmad Faraz for this beautiful chapter:

"ranjish hi sahi dil hi dukhane ke liye aa

aa phir se mujhe chhor ke jaane ke liye aa"

And please listen to this song. You'll love it.

https://youtu.be/pba_YmWDAIU

Looking at the precap I am sure they will meet soon. I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Lots of love n hugs 🤗

Shweta

Thank you Shweta for such a sweet responsesmiley27. Din bana diya aapne. Lots of hugs to you to too 🤗🤗. Glad I was able to convey the heartbreaks& their pain . Thoda nervous thi because emotional update thoda tough ho jata hai likhna . This Sat I had some good 2 - 3 hr of time to work on it. After writing it I was too emotional watched Kal ho na ho first half 😊

Ahmad Farz, Bashir Badr, Faiz Ahmed Faiz , Ghalib, bahut saare hai jo bahut sahi sher likhe hai jo ek dum dil ko chu jate hai. Especially I love the sad ones , they have a lot of depth . Kabhi kabhi lagta hai my usage of shayari members here may find it tough to read so translating it.

Abhi Abhi likhna shuru kiya hai to I find it tough to understand the readers thoughts , is the story going well or not. Responses to this story definitely motivate me. Even though bahut kam feedback hai but I am happy few atleast are happy to read it.

The lines you wrote from the Gazal , I had read it but never heard the song. I listened to it multiple times. Thanks for sharing , its so beautiful and heart touching. ❤️

Will they meet or will life through another challenge. Lets see.

Love & Hugs 🤗

Sajida

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it sajida, speechless how beautifuly you describe their miserable situation in break up. Naina doesn't know why sameer brokeup with her but when she heard that a girl break his heart she called and motivated him beacause her love is pure and true. Apke jitna accha to nahi per aapki stories ki simplicity and naturality dekh k kuch arz kiya h "LAFZON SE KYA AHSAS BAAYAN HO SAKTE HAIN" i didn't describe my emotions in two or three line.Naina's situation like "WOH HUMSE DUR RAHKAR KUSH THE.OR HUM UNKI KHUSHI K LIY UNSE DUR THE".i appreciate your hard work and naturality in stories. Amazing update 👏

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Posted: 6 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Suparna13

Sajida di, pehle to ek badaaa wala hug....🤗!! Hum kya miss kar rahe the❤️... bas ye 3rd chapter hai.... day-by-day ye aur bhi intense,intriguing hoti jaa rahi hai....🤗!!!

The heartbreak,inner turmoil felt by both Sameer and Naina affects me too🥺!! Aur shayaris always apt for the scenario...👏!!! That PCO scene.... I am speechless, ye chapter padhke mujhe samajh nahi aa raha whay should i write?? Naina is in Switzerland, eager to see what happens in Zurich😭!!

Just read the 3rd chapter... and already restless to read the next chapter..!!! Eagerly waiting for the next one..!


With love,Suparna

Pehle to tumhe bhi ek baddaaaaaa wala hug🤗. Thank you so much for your feedback.❤️

I am really very happy to hear that its intriguing aur bore nahi ho raha hai. Their pain you could feel it , glad that I could convey it through my writing. Breakup track jab show mein chala tha I had cried .

Glad that shayari' s are still on track. I hope I am able to keep the interest going forward. Ab pyar to dono mein hai aur Naina apne Sameer ko harne kaise degi,isliye Naina devi banke samjaya.😊

Thanks for all the love and continuous feedback. Helps to wrire next one❤️

Love

Sajida

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Posted: 6 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Wonderful update,loved it.After reading the precap waiting eagerly for the next update.

Thank you Veena so much for your continuous support.❤️ Glad you liked the update. Lets see in next update what is it.

Love

Sajida

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: munchkinland

Sajida this was beautifully written

and I love the way you describe emotions and things.

its soo soothing to read

Naina read the mail but she did not understand what he was going through

did the distance put them really apart.

And now when she was in Ahmadabad she thought he was in pain because of Sunaina

She did scold him and motivated him

but did Naina really fail to understand her Sameer

I am really looking forward to the next update

I am sure they will meet soon

Thank you so much Suhani for your feedback and continuous support on this story. ❤️

Glad that I am able to convey the emotions and their inner turmoil.

Long distance, miscommunication and their own insecurities have all come in their path. May be Naina felt the happiness of Sameer was not with her and neither Sameer tried to clear it.

Will they meet or fate will throw another challenge lets see.

Love

Sajida

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