love you to the moon and back - Samina OS

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sameer has been feeling like hell for slapping naina. What was he thinking? Naina was trying to and pacify me. What I did? I just shouted at her and told her to leave to her chachajis house and to never come back. she didn't know anything about what was happening in the office and I just lashed at her because of my insecurities. She is naina, meri naina and will never think that I am a failure. It's all my imagination. I never expected mamaji and devang bhayya to cheat me and take nanu's business from me.

Sameer has been sending flowers from the moment I have come to chachajis house and preeti, chacha and chachi have been teasing me that Sameer is missing me and can't stay away from me even for couple of days. I want to throw these flowers in the dustbin. They have small cards on each flower saying, I love you naina. I miss you naina. Sorry naina. I want you back naina. I am trying to hide the cards from preeti. If she sees sorry naina...she will ask hundred questions about what happened.

Chacha, chachi and preeti are leaving to Mumbai to meet the groom's family. Chachaji has called Sameer to come and stay with naina in their house for two days till they come back. Naina is worried what will happen when Sameer will arrive here. I will never open the door for him. Let him go back to his home.

It was evening and soon the sun will be setting, Sameer tried to still his rapidly beating heart and races towards the front door of Agrawal house. He punched the doorbell relentlessly. Please open the door naina, I have to talk to you. naina is reluctant to open the door.

I am so sorry naina, please mujhe maaf kardo. Mujhe pata hain main ghadha hoon. Please...just let me talk to you naina.

Naina shook her head, there is nothing left to say Sameer. We have been through this so many times. I have come to the conclusion that your actions speak louder than your words.

Why are you here today sameer? You don't want me anymore. I will not come back to your home as per your wish.

Please don't say that naina. I want you back in my home. I will go mad naina. I see you in each and every corner of my home. You are everything to me. Please give me one more chance and I promise you that I will never hurt you.

Naina, I want you and I want to make this right. Please open the door naina. No Sameer please leave from here. I am done with you.

Naina went inside the bedroom closing the door and fell on the bed crying her heart out. Sameer banged the door with both of fists. He sagged down to the ground feeling defeated.

Sameer got up and ran to the near by PCO and called naina. She heard the phone ringing, wiping her tears she got up and went to take the call.

He raked a shaky hand through his already disheveled hair. He was still in the wrinkled clothes he had worn the day before. He hadn't slept, hadn't eatenhe had spent the night consumed with how to get her back.

Sameer said hello hearing nainas voice, naina realizing that Sameer has called, she was about to cut the call. sameer is crying and started reciting the poem he has written long back.

Kaho to ek bar phir Chand Taare paas le Aaun!

Kaho to ek bar phir Chand Taare paas le Aaun!

Ugte Sooraj ki halki si aag le Aaun!

Bas tu muskura de, aankhon se wahi pyaar chalka de!

Bahut dil dukhaya hai, Bahut dil dukhaya hai, yeh maana meine!

Par dard pe marham Lagane ka ek mauka de!

Ab tak itna kuch Padhaya hai,

bas ek baar phir se iss rishte ka hisaab kardo na!

bas ek baar phir se iss rishte ka hisaab kardo na!

Naina, mujhe Maaf kardo na!

Naina is biting her lips to stop herself from crying listening to his poem, after the poem was over naina cut the call and sat on the sofa covering her face with her hands.

The doorbell started ringing again. Naina knows that it is Sameer, she shouts from inside. Sameer please leave me alone and give me some time.

No naina until you forgive me, I am not leaving from here. The neighbours are watching this naina and you don't want them telling chacha and chachi that we are creating a nuisance in the neighbourhood.

Sameer if you love me then leave me alone. Sameer was deflated by listening to nainas words, he said ok naina main koi tamasha nahin karunga yaahaan but I will be sleeping in front of the door. Chacha ji chahte hain ki main tumhe akele nahin chodu is ghar main.

Sameer slept on the ground in front of the door. Naina is sleeping on the other side of the door. It was 2 o clock in the morning and naina is feeling restless thinking that its too cold outside and that Sameer will catch cold and may even get fever. Naina took a blanket from inside and opened the front door. She saw that Sameer was shivering due to cold weather. She spread the blanket on him, and her hand accidentally touches his forehead and its hot.

Naina gets worried and touches his forehead again to realize that Sameer is having fever.She immediately wakes him up shaking his shoulder, makes him stand and taking his hand on her shoulder takes him inside.

She puts him on the bed. spreading the blanket over him she adjusts it all sides. Naina gets some cold water with a small towel.

With tears in her eyes, she starts wiping his face with the cold water. Opening his shirt naina wipes his chest and hands. Naina takes his temperature and it is showing 103 degrees. Sameer is continuously talking in his fever saying sorry naina mujhe maaf kardo. Mujhse bahut badi galti hogayi hain. Then, he says Mamaji mujhe factory se alag mat karo mujhe kaam seekhni hain. Mere saath aap aise nahin kar sakte hain. Yeh mere nanu ke fatory hain. Mujhe maaf karo naina. I love you naina. I want you back in my life.

Naina is shocked to hear what Sameer is telling. What is happening in the office? Yeh Sameer aise kyun keh rahe ki mamaji mujhe factory se alag mat karo. Naina tears again realizing that Sameer was in bad mood because of mamaji. I was thinking he was angry with me. Up+on that I was bothering him. Who jo bhi bol rahe the who sab kuch mamaji pe jo gussa tha mere upar nakaal rahe the. Naina decides to ask Sameer what is really happening in the office.

She continued her ministration throughout the night. Feeling tired she ends up sleeping next to him on the bed hugging his chest.

Sameer is feeling weight on his chest. He thinks about the night, coming to chachajis house and nainas reluctance to open the door, calling naina from PCO and sleeping in front of the door. Rest everything is very blur for him. He opens the eyes to see naina sleeping on his chest. A smile breaks on his face.

Naina wakes feeling movement under her. She opens her eyes to see that she is sleeping on Sameer's chest. She sits up feeling shy. Sameer folding his hands under his head watching naina. Their eyes meet, naina tucks her hair behind her ears. She tells Sameer to take rest as he will feel weekness because of fever. She touches his forehead to check his fever. Naina tells him to freshen up and leaves the bed room.

Sameer is sitting on the bed leaning on the head board. Naina brings in a breakfast tray for him along with some medicine.

Sameer, have the breakfast

Mujhe nahin khani hain naina.

Sameer, please khao tumhaari tabhiyat theek nahin hain aur dawa bhi leni hain.

Tum khilaogi to kahunga

Yeh kya bachpana hain Sameer

Toh jaao main nahin kaunga aur dawa bhi nahin loonga.

Naina holds the toast for him to eat. Asking him to eat through her eyes

Sameer starts eating the toast and finishes it.

Sameer tries to avoid taking the medicine.

Naina naak pakadke medicine ko khilaati hain aur paani bhi pila deti hain.

Sameer picks the tray and keeps it on the side table, anticipating her leave, he pulls her on the bed. He kisses her hard punishing her for making him wait for her forgiveness. Naina opens her mouth to tell him to stop. Sameer takes the opportunity to invade her mouth and kisses her more passionately. Naina doesn't respond first to his kiss and then her resolve falters and she kisses him back with all the pent-up pain and love.

He stroked her shoulder. He kissed her earlobe whispering sweet nothings to her. They were out of their clothes in mere seconds.

He eased his body over hers and gazed down with those love filled eyes.

He filled her slowly, kissing her, soothing her. She loved him for the careful care he was taking, and slowly, her body accepted his.

Naina open your eyes and look at me. At Sameer's command she focused on him. Sameer slowly starts moving, she wrapped her legs around his waist, bringing him in even deeper. They both groaned against each other's lips at the sensation. Finally, they reach the edge and came down from their shared high.

Later Sameer and naina are sitting on the sofa holding each other. Naina says, Sameer I will forgive you on one condition. I want you to tell me what is happening in office and why you were telling in your sleep that maaji mujhe factory se alag mat karo. Iska matlab kya hain Sameer.

Naina I am sorry, I should have shared with you about what happened in the office. From day one mama and Devang bhayya has been insulting me and treating me like a low-class employee and not the owner of Mahehwari industries. Their behaviour was affecting me and I was feeling like a failure. I felt you will judge me that I am useless always scoring low marks in school and college and now good for nothing in the office.

I am sorry naina I hurt your feelings. I was angry with mama and took my frustration on you. I was in such a bad mood I didn't know what I was doing and saying to you. Please give me a chance to rectify my mistake and I will promise I will never hurt you. Sameer lightly touches nainas cheek where he had slapped her and kisses it.

Its ok Sameer I was am such a fool that I was trying to pacify you when you were in such a bad mood. I am sorry Sameer. I too said wrong things to hurt you. Naina too touches his cheek and kisses him.

I will face this life without any fear, ab tum mere saath main jo ho naina. I will start Maheshwari industry with my hard work and will take it to great heights.

Edited by Deepanand - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sweet update ...Naina kitna v gussa rhe PR Sameer ka drd usse Ni chupta or sb shi v kr deti h
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I love it so much!! This is what we all wanted! A passionate & intense reunion! And the realization that they both were wrong slapping eo! I don't know when the SR will happen but at least we can get romance like a married couple! But alas! We have to imagine these things. Loved this OS di!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was soo good Deepa di
one of best OS you have written soo far
I loved it to the core
Sameer realised the gravity
and Naina understood his situation
and finally consummated
Each and everything was so well written
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Posted: 6 years ago
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ResUnResLoved it Deepa Di. I loved their reunion. Sameer was adamant about not leaving the door and Naina was adamant about not opening the door. The PCO call took me back to their school days. It was so beautiful. I loved how Sameer and Naina were sorry for their actions and realized their mistakes. Thank you for this beautiful OS.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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it was very beautiful
loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweetsweta007

Sweet update ...Naina kitna v gussa rhe PR Sameer ka drd usse Ni chupta or sb shi v kr deti h

Hey, thank you so much dear. I know Samaina are made for each other
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much ray darling. I know we always have too much expectations from the episodes and it falls flat. Let’s put our imaginations into words and be happy lol. Missing the emojis yaar

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much dear. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: munchkinland

This was soo good Deepa dione of best OS you have written soo farI loved it to the coreSameer realised the gravityand Naina understood his situationand finally consummatedEach and everything was so well written

Thank you so much su darling. Pata nahi hum kab SR dekhenge hamare show mein. We can be in our imagination world. They can actually show in a subtle way.

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