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Off lately ... The way the track has been proceeding...it's pretty evident that there is a total lack of communication between the writers of the show. There have been instances where one can pin point and see the stark difference in the writing...which clearly shows that the writing team has no idea what the others are writing...
Right from the engagement... Sam being shown to move out of the house inspite of it being made very very clear that he was the legal and sole heir of nanaji...then how come mamaji is now the owner of the house...and the authorising power at office?? Legally speaking...Sam should've got the authorising power the moment he turned 18...
It clearly shows that the new writers have no idea what was shown in the earlier epis...and are spinning their own tales...
Lack of communication is clearly evident...where Naina threatened to leave and he was still wanting an apology...and few moments later he broke down in front of her... similarly...Naina was hurt in the room citing Sameer did not love her like before...but on the stairs she told him that she will not leave if he doesn't fight with her...
It was pretty clear that the scene in the room and on the stairs was written by 2 separate ppl who had no idea wat was happening before or after the scene...
Secondly...Naina's character has gone for a total toss...I don't even need to elaborate...
One writer shows her to me a novice in the kitchen...the other an expert...one writer shows her emotional who gets hurt with Sam's constant bickering...the other decides to show her aloof towards the mental state if her hubby...
And then...we really need to know the "marital status" of samaina...
One writer decides to hype the intimacy factor with the pink nighty...the constant french french kiss demands...Sam prepping for his first night and all ...
And then the second writer just decides to show them as a normal married couple who've been there...done that!
There is a clear miscommunication where the writers have no idea exactly what's happening in the show...they are just interested in showing out their own pov.
Gone are the days when there was a proper closure...a good bank of episode...and a good team work between the writers so that each track came out with a full start and closure.
With a good bank...even the cast the crew and editors understood what was lacking... Got in touch with the writing team and shot the necessary bits...
I don't know if I should be saying this...but...I feel right from the time sheetal somani has joined the team...there has been a total downhill of the show... Till about the 3rd week of August 2018 only Prashant Bhatt was the president and we all know that though we were unhappy with the tracks the viewers never complained about the content...there was a proper execution of all the tracks...proper and detailed scenes...and crisp editing...
Come September and all we could see was half baked efforts... Be it no proper convo between samaina post breakup... No reaction from Sam inspite of rival gang trying to malign samaina...no reaction from Sam inspite of knowing kartik hugged Naina deliberately... Not a single phone convo between samaina post engagement...a totally rushed marriage sequence and then no consummation...no emotional scenes...no conversation between samaina regarding how they are going to move ahead in life...
Coz frankly...a good team effort by writers is the only thing that can save the show.
I think it's about time ... They bring back the first team of writers...and get the show back on track...who knew how much drama was Actually needed to get good trps and the interest of the viewers intact...they just knew that the bet track drama was needed ( in addition to the real school love story of Shashi Sumeet) to help sustain in television...
The present writers are just sticking to what happened in reality with Shashi Sumeet... There is no extra scenes added for the viewers...These extra scenes have made up for some beautiful tracks in the show...the bet track...pre bet track...Pooja didi ki shadi etc...
