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Samaina Os-Accepting the flaws
Title credits- @Ashita1619
Naina packs her suitcase and runs down the staircase. Sameer is scared and shocked. He comes in front of Naina and doesn't allow her to move.
Naina- Hato mere saamne se jaane do mujhe.
Sameer- nahi jaanedoonga kya kar logi.
Naina- haan zaroor main kar bhi kya sakti hoon sivaay taane sunne ka nahi? Hato Maine kaha.
Sameer- Kyu? Kyu wahi kar rahi ho jo meri maa karti thi har baar? Kyu jaan bujhkar mujhe w dukh pohunchana chaahti hoon jis dukh se main zindagi bhar bhaagta raha? Kyu naina kyu?
Naina- Aur tum? Zindagi bhar taane sunne pade. Ki acchi nahi dikhti. Papa ke paas dahej ke paise nahi hai. Doorsron ke ehsaan pad roti todti hoon? Humesha chahti thi ki ek din aisa aaye jab mujhe in saari baaton ka ehsaas hi na ho. Phir kyu mujhe wahi ehsaas tum baar baar dilwate rehte ho jis ehsaas se main humesha mukt hona chahti thi?
Sameer (takes a deep breath and speaks) - kya itna hi tumhara pyaar tha jo is ehsaas se mukt hone ke liye tum mujhe chodkar jaana chaahti ho?
Naina-Kya itna hi tumhara pyaar tha jo sundar dikhne ki saari koshish karne ke bawjood aaj bhi main tumhare liye ek below standard behenji hoon? Kya laga tha tumhe ki shaadi ke baad main tumhari julia Roberts ki poster ki tarah ban jaoongi? Nahi hooj main koi julia roberts. Bas ek sadharan si middle class larki hoon main. Jo badsoorat hai. Jiske saath se tum sirf chidte ho. Tumhe har pal zaleel hona padta hai meri wajah se baharwalon ke saamne family ke saamne. Isliye kal tumne mujhpad bhi chilla diya apne us parivar ke saamne jo humesha se meri beizzati karti aayi thi.. kyu jhelna aise down market biwi ko. Isliye jaa rahi hoon.
Sameer stares blankly with tears in his eyes watches a teary-faced Naina pick up her suitcase and walk towardd the door. Naina shuts the door close with a thud and leaves.
Sameer vo- Us pal aisa lag raha tha ki kisi ne dham se ek soonsaan island pe patak diya ho.. jiske nishan shareer pe to nahi dikhe. Pad dil pe bohut zor laga..
Sameer sits down on the staircase and remembers all those incidents when vishakha left him alone. When she dropped him a 4- year old sameer at the hostel. He didnt even realise that his mother was going away from him. He was excited thinking he was visiting a new place. But when he watched his mother leaving without him.. he ran to him and begged her mot to leave. But she didn't listen. And left behind a crying Sameer at the hostel. Over years he got used to being left alone.. and his tears left him too. He used to feel angry but never cry. But today his tears won't stop.
As he sat stil with tears flowing down his cheeks, his eyes fell upon Nanu's photo frame hanging on the wall.
Sameer- Nanu, aapne kaha tha ki naina humesha meri saathi bankar rahegi. Humesha. Phir kyu nahi rahi woh? Kyu chod kar chali gayi woh jaise maa chali gayi thi. Ab to maa bhi kabhi vnahi aayegi aue shayad Naina bhi nahi.
A voice asks him- Aur tu naina ko aise jaane bhi dega?
Sameer turns around to find Munna standing behind him.
Munna-Sameer bhai, itni jung ki baad t shaadi hui teri? Aise hi jaane dega bhabhi ko?
Sameer- Maine kaha kaha the use jaane ko khud ataichi uthaya aur nikal gayi ek baar mudkar bhi nahi dekha. Nahi hai use parwah Meri m bilkul bhi nahi m
Munna- Aur tujhe hai parwah?
Sameer- Of course hai. Use hi meri bparwah nahi hai.
Munna- Accha chal sochte hai use teri parwah nahi hai. To Teri maniben chamchi ekdam se aise fashion wale kapre pehenti hai aajkal , kabhi socha hai kyu?
Sameer- Mujhe kya pata. Uske standards to hai nahi. Koshish kar rahi hogi. Pad kaha kabhi phunch payegi us level tak.
Munna- Accha standards nahi hai bhabhi ke. Accha theek had chal chalta hoon.
Sameer stops him and says- Ab tu bhi chodkar chala jayega ?
Munna- nahi mujhe laga tujhe standard wale log hi psand hai to bhai main to thehtra atrangi middle class baap hai mera.. shayad mujhse bhi chidh ho tujhe.
Sameer-Kaisi baatein kar raha hai tu munna? Teri dosti mere liye kisi bhi stndard status se pare hai.
Munna- Aur bhabhi ke liye tera pyaar? Use kyi standards se fark padne laga?
Sameer- Baat woh nahi hai . Main bas chaahta hooj ki logo ko bhi lage ki haan yeh Mrs. naina sameer Maheshwari hai naki bas koi aira gaira.
Munna- Accha? Logo se tujhe kabse fark padne laga? Yaad hai college mein sab larkiyan mazaak udati thi naina ka bhindi. Behenji bulakar? Tab nahi laga ki kaisi standard ki larki ke saath hoon?
Sameer-Tab ki baat alag thi. Ab to.
Munna- Baat ab bhi wahi hai. Tera rishta teea pyaar. Bas duniya ki baaton ne bhatka diya hai tum dono ko. Kya agar kalko teri mami Tere liye sundar si bambai wali modern lekar aa gayi shaadi karega usse?
Sameer- Munna tu pagal hai kya?
Munna- khair apna chod. Soch naina ko kaisa lagega. Ek to teri haini haini itni nafrat karte hai usse. Use itna bekar samajhte hai. Bas tere bharose aayi thi is dushman ke desh mein jeene ke liye. Ab tu bhi dushmanon ki baatein sun use wahi sab sunayega to kaise rahegi woh? Tu hi to uska iklouta bharose hau. Ab tu hi saath nahi raha to Kya kategi yahaan rehkar?
Sameer ponders over all his taunts to naina, her dressing sense, living standards, and goes back to the memories of the college days when he always vehemently defended her against everyone. She was still the world's most beautiful woman for him then why did he say all that to her.
Munna- Ab aage jo faisla karega tu mujhe yakeen hai sahi hoga. Pad sameer, kabhi teri aur naina ki Love atory meri aur swati ki tarah banne mat dena.
And turns to leave.
Sameer-Ruk munna, main naina ko wapas laane jaoonga. Aur use manakar wapas laooonga apne ghar. Aur theek waise hi grah pravesh karoonga jaise maine sapna dekha tha. Aur un log z duniya ke liye meri naina ko Maine itna sunaya, us diniya ke liye jisne humesha mujhe dhutkara mujhe akele chod diya, mujhe dhoka diya? Kabhi nhi. Main aata hoon.
Munna-Ruk kaha jaa raha hai tu?
Sameer-Apne sasural.
Munna- Pagal bhabhi yahi hai.
Sameer-Kaha?
Munna-khud dhundh le.
Sameer opens the door and rushes t the pool and finds Naina seated there wit hee legs dipped in the cold pool water and crying away endlessly.
Sameee realises the pain he has inflicted upon her by his words. He rushes to naina and hugs her tight.
Naina- Bohut buri biwi hoon na main? Tumhe chodkar jaa rahi thi?
Sameer- nahi. Naina galti meri.
Naina puts a finger on Sameer's lips and whispers-sssh.. aaj main bolungi.. sirf main..
She holds her ears and says- pehle to kaan pakadkar sorry tumhe is tarah chot pohunchane ke liye. I am sorry sameer. Tum nahi manohe na to bhi maij haar nahi manoongi. Jo kahoge woh karoongi.
Sameer, main pata nahi kya h gaya tha mujhe, itna messy, har bat pe galti karne wali. I am sorry sameer. Abse 100% perfect wife ban paoongi ki nahi yah to nahi pata pad apna best zarooe doongi m
Sameer removes her fingers and softly kisses on her hand and says- Tumhe perfect banne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum jaisi ho tum mujhe waise hi acchi lahti hoon. Meri gakti thi jo main tumhe baat baat pad itna sunata raha. Naina z aaj bhi tum mere liye is sansaar ki sabse khoobsoorat aur pyaari larki ho, mere is raat ke jaise andhere jeevan ka sitara ho tum naina. Koi kapre, galtiyan is sitare ke chamak ko kam nahi kar sakti. Galti to hum dono karte hai na. To sudharenge dono hi.
Naina kisses him on his cheeks and rests her head on his shoulders.
Sameer- Tumne t kaha tha tum mujhe chodkar jaa rahi thi phir yahaan kaise?
Naina- Socha tha jaoongi.. pad dil nahi maana. Aur waise bhi hum middle class haina. Humare yahaan yahi niyam hai. Ki dulhan ki doli sasural mei jaati hai. Aur ab wahaan se sirf uski arthi hi nikal sakti hai.
Sameer-Sshssh abhi kya marne waene ki baat kar rahi ho. Abhi to humein apna parivar banana hai. Golu molu ke ma baap banna hai. Apna career set karna hai.. aur to aur dhee sara romance bhi to karna hai.
Naina hitting him playfully-dhat pagal.
Sameer-Tumhate pyaar mein. Arey main t bhool u gaya munna andar aaya hua hai.
Naima-Arey haan main bhi. Mujhe usse bh baat karni hai.
They walk int the house hand in hand. Munna is happy seeing his bhaiya bhabhi together, happy again.
Naina walks up to him and says-munna. Mujhe nahi pata main kin shabdon mein tujhe thank you bolun. Mujhe sabkuch samjhana.. meei baatein sunna samajhna samjhana. Thank you munna.
Sameee-haan yaar munna aaj tyne ek baar phir har baar ki tarah hunara rishta bacha liya. Zindahi bhar yeh ehsaan na chuka paoonga.
Munna-Ehsaan to chukana padega bacchu.
Naina-Haan haan munna bolka kya chahiye.
Munna-Ae bhabhi aapke haath ke bane mast pakode aur ohir hum dono saath mein milkar Sameer ki Hollywood collection ki film dekhenge.
Sameer(petrified) whispers - Abe pagal hai kya. Naina mujhe dhakke maarkar ghar se nikal degi agar Hollywood movie chalaya to.
Munna-Tu to ehsaan chukane ki baat kar raha tha to chuka.
Naina- Yeh tum dono kya khusur phusur kar rahe h m mujhe bhi batao.
Munna- Ae bhabhi aap na woh mast wali movie lagao. Hum aapke hai koun. Aur pakode ke saath mast chaaye bhi bana dena.
Naina-Bilkul. Tymlog baitho.
Sameer is aboyt to sit when munna says- Bhai tu kaha jaa raha hai? Jaa bhabhi ki kitchen mei madad kar. Ahli baar se taanq dena hai to pehle khud us kaame mein hoshiyar ban lena phir dena.
Naina glares at him whil Sameer makes a scared face.
Naina- Nahi munna.. aaj sirf main khana banoongi. Munna tujhe thanks jatane ke liye aur bhi Sameer ko chot pohunchayi hai yeh meea paschatap ka pehla padaav hoga.
Sameer-'mujhe koi paschatap nahi chahiye. Bas.
Naina -chupchap munna ke saatg jaakar baitho.
Sameer-Jo hukum biwiji.
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My take on how I wanted the confrontation to be. I apologise for spelling and grammatical errors.
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