SHORT STORY II : Crown Prince and his Commoner Princess:Part 21 Page15

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Vidhimehra

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Posted: 6 years ago

#151

Waiting for another beautiful update..lov3d this one from tje core ofmy heart...najna ledger was so heaet warminh and then her trust on lord krishna saved sameer from evil things...

Any hint whenare you going to update mxt part.

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 6 years ago

#152

Dear All ,

Next update , will try to update by this weekend as I am busy with office work. Apologies .

Regards
Ashwathy

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Dee12340

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Posted: 6 years ago

#153

Hello mam

Thank you so much for response

Will be eagerly waiting

Take ur time

Thanks

Regards

Deepika Mittal

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 6 years ago

#154

Hi Ashu,

I did not get around to commenting on the previous chapter... Its been very busy at my end. But, please note that I am following your story and enjoying it 😊

The way they are changing and adjusting to their new roles and responsibilities is so well written. Honeymoon period is over... reality setting in. And all the new emotions and emotional out bursts!

I liked the way the long standing misunderstanding around his father's death was cleared.. at least some parts and his ancestral property is back to him... more to the point in her name!

They standing strong together in the party was great.. but I loved the Tom and Jerry in this chapter even more! it was hilarious to read the bickering between the angry birds 😆

Sameer coming home safe and sound after the scare.. was enough for her to let go of her anger and realise what truly matters. It's so sad when we spend so much time dwelling on the past and not enjoy the present moments... hope they have learnt a valuable lesson and that it sticks.

Looking forward to the next one!