SamAina Series: Post-Wedding Fiascos (7th Sequence on Page 50)

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@Tellurium

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#211

The darkest night

Thankyou so much for this😳

I really wanted to know what happened post Vishakha left

And we cannot get anything better than your version 😊

The last line...

❤️ le lo

Naina definitely knows to play different roles for him.

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mansi345

@mansi345

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#212

Part 1

Again an amazing piece of writing.

Loved the way you cleared the misunderstanding and also how Sameer realised his mistake.

Sameer's thoughtfulness of visiting library was so creative idea.

P.S sorry for the late comment😊

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mansi345

@mansi345

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#213

Part 2 and 3

Flustered for another reason - Mou you always give most apt titles but this one arised much curiosity when I read it first but as the os progressed it was the best title for this update.

I liked Preeti demanding chocolate 😛

And what to say about Samaina scene. How do you always write romantic sequences in so beautiful way without making them vulgar at any point. That's wonderful👍🏼👏

Kaash show mein ye dekhne ko milta. Pr koi baat nhi yha to mil hi gya. Thank u😳

Edited by mansi345 - 6 years ago

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#214

Thnks Mou for writing tis beautiful piece...Ever since the segmnts were out...was so xcited tat v vud get 2 c Sam consoled by Naina on their SR bed ...Ideally tat is how it has to be wen his wife, the love of his life ,his strength n support has witnessed the painful separation n she needed to b right thre to pacify her dear hubby..But v were robbed of such a convo...Thanku so much 4 penning such a heartfelt scene...I was hell disappointed but u hve provided the required closure...Tis is how i xactly wanted to c Sam on her lap n she stroking his hair...n both lying towards each other with clasped hands..Indeed felt satisfied now!

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mansi345

@mansi345

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#215

Part 4

This is the perfect closure of Vishaka's track. Thank you for writing this Mou😳

Now i feel satisfied after being disappointed from the way this track ended in the show.

You wrote it beautifully Mou. Naina consoled Sam in the best way she could and loved Sameer stopping her from going away and Naina not changing into something comfortable for Sameer was adorable

Awesome update👍🏼

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SanayaK

@SanayaK

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#216

Thank you thank you thank you thank you so much for this.

Jo show me nahi milta wo mou ke stories me zarur mil jata hai.

Fabulous job. 👏

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Rohitsad

@Rohitsad

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#217

Wonderful update .

You beautifully penned down the emotional state of both of them finally Sameer understood her insecurities and how hurt she is by his behaviour.

Their cute hug moment is too good

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vdya03

@vdya03

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#218

Beautifully written Mou, this is exactly what everyone wanted!

Sameer's breakdown and Naina consoling him, holding him. Completely dissapointed with the way the tracks are being edited now a days! Glad we have you to give us some nice content.

Pls make your next from yesterday's episode, i.e., Naina seeing Sameer without shirt scene. 😉

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vandana

@VandyP

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#219

Oh mou...u seriously have no idea how beautiful and heart touching this sequence is

I felt so so cheated wen the CVS skipped the whole sequence...and didn't give us anything...

But then I should've remembered my in words..." Jo show mein nahi milega wo mou ki writing mein milega"😆

Thank you thank you so much for this...

Right from the time Sam drew a contrast of his past where he would always be engulfed with darkness and emptiness every time his mom walked away...to this time where he had love and warmth in the form of Naina...😳

I simply loved how you drew a parallel with the breakup track and made Naina realise what Sam went through wen she left him...and then resolving never to leave Sam...

The smallest gestures...him lying on her lap...she threading her fingers in his hair...to him holding her and sleeping... Both keeping their promise of eternity to see each other's face the first thing after opening their eyes

Simply amazing mou... I hope we keep getting more such stuff from u coz frankly speaking ... Nobody understands the character of Sam the way you do...at present...not even the CVS

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Thulasi Nair

@Samaina_loverzz

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#220

It was an awesome update and kaash much aisa hota humare show main...Loved the fiasco a Lott...Do write More and Loved this Chapter and Do pm me whenever updating next

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