"Jismein jalta hu usi aag mein jalna hai tujhe,
Uth meri jaan mere sath hi h chalna tujhe "
Uff...kahan se laayi ho yeh saari shayaris madam?? This story is so interesting! How did you even think I'd let you go without completing this? I'm a huge fan of this story. So for my sake, you need to continue! :P
This update held a lot of information. Firstly, the way Somanis amassed their wealth had to do something with the downfall of Sameer and his nanu? Intriguing indeed! I'm waiting for when the details would be revealed on that!
The tiff between Sameer- Munna-Pandit? What had happened which caused Sameer to alienate himself from his two best buddies? For a moment, I thought you'd altered the bonding between the trio but no, it's the same. And I'm happy about it! :)
And when he says- naukri karunga...zimmedari nibhaunga...khud se karunga sab..waah yeh huyi na self-respect wali baat! Kudos! Dil le liya! Naina ki Somani industries join karne wali baat dil pe lag gayi aakhir and Sameer is buckling up to try again!
Another thing I really liked was how you conveyed the entry of Sameer into the bar- the description of the name of the bar, the ambience...n table no 13. It's as if he's doomed himself to bad luck. The shayari was epic there as well.
The last scene when in a drunken stupor he pours his real feelings for Naina was heartwarming. If he was in his senses, he would never have opened up his heart to her. So for once, I'm glad he was drunk. :)
Naina has vowed to support him. I'm desperate for the next update dear! :) <3
Keep writing and update soon, but take care of your health first.
Loads of love,
Sur
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